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Reviewer: rauwolfia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Turn up the Heat

First story you've ever written huh? Well, no one would know it,
good story! Keep writin' and you'll make it to the bestseller's list before long, no doubt about it.


Author's Response: Thanks so much, but I won't let it go to my head. I'm still in the crawling stages of writing. Glad you liked it and thanks for the great review hon.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Yeah, I'll have one, and I don't even smoke! Goddamn, that was sizzling hot! And the story keeps getting better and better with each passing chapter.. I absolutely love all your descriptions of what's going on with them inside, all they are feeling for the other, as well as with their bodies. It makes the experience so much fulfilling, I think. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Tee hee, I'm turning people every where into smokers - bad me. Yup, I wanted a combination here going on of feelings/thoughts/body language etc... so that their night together would be unforgettable. So I'm happy to see you enjoyed that aspect of it. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 07:03 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

Love this story, it's so fun, hot and wonderfully written. Delightful chapter, I just love to read their thoughts and personal conversations with themselves. Off to read the rest now. Oh, and congratulations on your surprise visit. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks hon, glad you enjoy the inner talks they have. They're fun to write but also vital to the story - other than that it would just be pure smut, lol. Off to check your next review...

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:20 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

That is not good for me to read at work lol. Can I say "Wow"? Can I also say...yeah, all I can come up with is "Wow". And how cute is she? "I'm hungry"

Author's Response: Oh dear... at work??? (giggles), hope you weren't breathing to heavy if you had to answer phones, lol. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the great review, see ya next chapter.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

I just wanted to add that I will certainly miss your next update , since i'm going on vacation tomorrow and for at least ten days. Just so you know I won't stop leaving comments but I won't have internet access.

Thank you for taking the time to answer to each one of the reviews you're getting , it's very appreciated.:)

And of course , enjoy your family time ! ;)

Author's Response: You're very welcome, I enjoy responding, it makes it more personal for the readers and myself. I'm happy you get to go on vacation, and hey, since my husbands here till the 3rd, I don't expect to get anything posted till after that. THanks for the nice review and enjoy your vacation. Perhaps by the time you get back there'll be 2 more chappy's posted.

Reviewer: spikes_vamp Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Whats going to happen next?
More soon please.

Author's Response: Tee hee, I'll leave that to your imagination for now. Yes, I'll try to update soon but my hubby is here till the 3rd, then flys back to deploy. Therefore I have some fantasies of my own I need to indulge in first - it's going to be a long 12 months without him here. Thanks so much for the review sweety.

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Date: 07/26/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Wow.

Author's Response: Wow is good, I can do wow, thanks hon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 10:28 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

"cigarette?" Damn Woman! I think a pack at least! Too Hot and Spike hasn't had HIS release yet!!! I sure hope Buffy does something NO ONE ELSE has ever done for HIM! She's been licking her chops evertime she sees his manly bits so maybe you'll let her indulge her fantasty and give a little taste yeah? SO LOOK FORWARD to the next chap! I'm running out right now for a new pack of smoke (hell, maybe even a carton!) Thanks for the INTENSELY AWESOME read!

Author's Response: Well, I figured why not save the best for last, right? LOL, guess I need to include the ciggy companies into my portfolio. Apparently I've created a few smokers out there. You're insight is good, and on that note, you'll enjoy the next chappy just as much. Your welcome and thank you so much for the stellar review.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 09:47 am Title: Turn up the Heat

This is one of the most erotic tales I've ever read. Spike is VERY good and I love Buffy's inner fight between could he care and he just wants the bucks. Can't wait til these two finally start admitting things to each other out loud instead of just arguing with their inner selves over all the emotion flowing between them. Totally awesome chaps and thanks for not leaving us hanging on this one.

Author's Response: Really? I definetely aspire to make the ranks of the 'greats' out there, but don't expect to until after a few more stories are written. I'm ecstactic you enjoy it this much, it makes all the hard work worth it. It may take a few chapters before everyone starts talking to eachother, rather than to themselves, but that's only half the battle. You're welcome on the end of the cliffies, I figured I'd been cruel enough. Thanks so much for the totally awesome review sweety.

Reviewer: Caroline. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 09:29 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

And again , what a delight it has been to read three chapters in a row ! Gorgeous , very naughty sometimes , and so intensely erotic.

Your sex scenes are the best out there , and so hot.
I loved how you built the tension between them , and Buffy surrenders . Powerful and a sight to behold.

I also enjoyed all your insights into Spike's mind , I'm not surprised that he truly believes that at this time he doesn't deserve Buffy. And in a way he doesn't , as long as he will be doing this job.

But here's hoping that this awesome and unforgettable experience with Buffy will lead him to think differently.

May I repeat that I'm so thankful that you decided to listen to your muse ? Spike loving Buffy : there isn't something hotter and more beautiful than this , and you feed my spuffy heart so nicely.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm so happy you enjoy it this much, really, makes my day. Yes, I have a naughty streak, so I thought it appropriate for this particular story line. Poor Spike feels like nothing but the dirt on her shoe, it's true. It may take a few chapters to get where we need to go, but it will be worth it, I promise. Ahhh, the muse... I must obey or else suffer. Glad it and I fed your soul with some good spuffy luvin. Thanks so much for the stellar review hon.

Reviewer: sara m Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:17 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

WOW!! That was just WOW!!

Author's Response: LOL, glad you liked it. Thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Oh myyyyy Godddd!"Are you kidding me.I o-o-v-e-d it.Now I am sllitting from my chair,away from my computer into a very large puddle.thats all i can say right now!!!!!!!.

Author's Response: Good, good good. Guess I accomplished what I set out to do. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: sara m Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:53 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

so good!! thanks!!

Author's Response: You're welcome and thanks for the review, and for enjoying it. too.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

We'd all be hungry, yes?

Very effective.

Author's Response: Thanks, and yes, I thought a little snack break might be good for our couple. Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

Oh, he's evil....

Author's Response: Indeed, lol. THanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 05:42 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Good! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Very good, glad you like it. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Turn up the Heat

It was fantastic. Go you! Off to chappy 8 now!

Author's Response: Great, can't wait to see what you have to say about 8. Thanks hon.

Reviewer: lindsay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

(wipes forehead) Holy sit!!! My boyfriend just left for a week and now i have you to thank for frustration, I WAS doing fine...sniff
You're a talented writer and dexcribe sex in a no-holds barred fashion that i like and respect since sex is so 'taboo' these days and what not...Great job and i cant wait to read more...
L.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry you had to read this while your bo is gone. Just think of the wonderful attack he'll recieve when he gets home. Thanks so much for the compliment. I figure if a person is going to write about sex, might as well describe it the way it is. That and I'm a heavy nc-17 reader. It makes the climax (all puns intended here) that much better/intense. Thanks for the awesome review, you can always call your bo up and phone sex, lol.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 10:38 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Another erotic and romantic chapter. Spike and William are merging, and Buffy's reaping the benefit.

Author's Response: Yes, you're dead-on. Spike and William are on more agreeable terms - to Buffy's benefit. Glad you liked these 2 chapters and stick around for the next one, it's gonna be a doozy. Thanks for the great review sweety.

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 05:28 am Title: Breathless

Your story is fantastic . I discovered it this morning and spent a great time devouring the first five chapters. This is incredibly hot of course , but it's so much more than that.
Your writing style is delightful. I love how you described Spike's inner thoughts and Buffy's sensations .
Their sensual encounter started so so intensely , is highly evocative ( you write smut like a goddess ) that it' s a powerful experience.

Thank you so much. And you can be assured that , as an author who is writing her first fiction , you're doing a fabulous job.

Author's Response: Yea me, I'm a smut goddess, LMAO. Thanks so much for the compliments. It's nice to see hard work pay-off. It's nice to see someone who just found this story be able to read everything at once and comment on it as a whole. Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chappy as much as you have these last few, cuz, well, the night's not over yet. Thanks for the awesome review, you made my day.

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 03:11 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

She is going to make him food NOW?!? Wow, so, yeah, those last 2 chapters were ... wow. Thanks for the update. I'm glad to see the character devo in this, too- please don't let that do anywhere!

Author's Response: Yup, after all that, our couple needs some sustinance, lol. You'll enjoy what comes next, and yes, the inner-character won't be going anywhere. Thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Turn up the Heat

Foooo... this is hot! :) still.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, it was fun writing this part. Stick around for the next chappy, and thanks for the nice review.

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 01:22 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

WOW . WOW .WOW. * SIGHS* yes a cigarette is in order!! WOW. that was seriously intense writing!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! i NEED to know what comes next, with spike !!! pls pls update soon !!!!

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I was going for intense. Wouldn't have been an impressionable 1st encounter without it. You're gonna love what comes next - it'll be Spike, tee hee.

Reviewer: CrazyInLoveWithSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Turn up the Heat

OMG!! are you TRYING to give us a heart attack!!! holy s**t!! come on already ...TAKE HER ALREADY spike!! this is so excruciating!!! I cant wait for the other chappy...:D

Author's Response: LOL, god I hope I'm not giving anyone a heart attack. Just wanted to build it up before the finale - makes it that much sweeter. So happy you like it, and thanks for the wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire

Whoa! You do write some of the yummiest loves scenes i've ever read. *fans self* This Spuffy interlude was scorching hot!!! I enjoyed reading Spike's romantic musings when he was hugging Buffy, it's so sad that he thinks Buffy can never be his. Loved the chapter! Can't wait until the next update. :D

Author's Response: Cool, that's what I was aiming for, 'intense/scorching/breathtaking'. Yeah, Spike/William is feeling rather unworthy right now, but considering his position, it's understandable. It will become more understandable throughout the next few chappy's also. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the great review sweety.

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