[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes
This chapter was the stuff dreams are made of. Every woman wants this sort of night. Magic; just like William said. There was absolutely no need for apologies or explanations. Your story is top rate all on its own. Oh and I loved your song choices. Smoke Gets In Your Eyes is one of my favourites from that era too.
Author's Response: I am soooooo glad you like it hon, I have such a strong romantic bone in my body, I couldn't resist. Smoke gets in your eyes is one of my all time favorites and i thought it would suit them perfectly. Ok, alright, I'll stop apologizing. I am obeying my muse, but I realize that not everyone will appreciate the fluff and/or the songs. I'm blushing right now from your sweet words. Thanks for such a wonderful review hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Surprises
Yay!!! I soooo wish I could spend money like that. Really enjoyed being part of Buffy and Lorne's day. Looking forward to what Buffy has planned for tomorrow night.
Author's Response: Wouldn't it be nice? I know I'd have no problem with it if I had the cash, lol. Thanks for the review hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: Cruel Misconceptions
This chapter was great but I'm going to have to stop reading your author notes at the end. I don't want to know ahead of time when the angst will turn to happiness. That's part of the thrill of reading. And NEVER apologise for putting angst into a story. It's your story after all. If someone doesn't like what you're doing then they can go and write their own story. Personally, I'm loving every minute.
Author's Response: LOL, ok, no more authors notes for you though. I see you're like me, you like to be surprised. Some don't though, thus the reason for it. Well, I guess you're right, why apologize, it is my fic and the angst will make the story better, at least that's the way the muse sees it. Thanks hon, I appreciate your kind words.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Arrested Development
I don't know why anyone would be disappointed with this chapter. It was just perfect. I loved how overcome Spike was with emotion, so much so that I panicked and ran.
Author's Response: Well, some were - b/c of the cheese factor, but it served a purpose. Glad you liked it hon, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 07:20 pm Title: Domesticated
Girl, I'll have you know I keep having to buy new packages of underwear. So steamy, yet finger licking good. Oh yah!
Author's Response: LMAO, send the bill bro... thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Waiting and Wanting
Ohhhhhh, can't wait to find out what the 'plan' is. Will have to come back and find out later though, unfortunately.
Author's Response: LOL, hope you like it when you do come back. Thanks for the great review hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Out of Sight, Yet in My Mind
Nooooo! Dail quickly Lorne. Dail quickly.
Author's Response: *Giggles*, thanks hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: William 'Spike' Ivanhoe, British Born Gigolo
Awwwwwww. Can't wait till they meet again.
Author's Response: Ah, yes. And you know they will, lol. Thanks for the review sweets.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 01:27 pm Title: Domesticated
Well done :)
Author's Response: Thanks hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 06:08 am Title: Once More, With Feelings
What a beautiful chapter. Alas all nights come to an end. Am very interesting to see when happens in the light of day.
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunetely they do. I do hope you continue to enjoy the fic sweety, thanks again for all your wonderful reviews, keep 'em coming, smooches.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:45 am Title: Do It To Me One More Time
Great chapter. Though I'm left with a horrible feeling she'll wake up alone. Ugh.
Author's Response: Awwww, well, I can't spoil it for ya, so read on sweety. Thanks for the review/s.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 05:10 am Title: Peanut Butter and Honey
Yay! Loved Spike's oral deflowering.
Author's Response: Tis sweet, is it not? Yum, glad you enjoyed it hon, thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 03:55 am Title: Out of the Frying Pan, Into the Fire
I am so printing this one out to enjoy again when I can sit down and read it all in one piece. It was sooooooo good.
Author's Response: *Giggles*, I take it you like it??? Thanks for the review hon
[Report This]Date: 11/08/2006 - 12:20 am Title: Turn up the Heat
And it just keeps on coming. Can't wait to Buffy does.
Author's Response: Tee hee, thanks hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: It's Not Nice to Tease
Haha. I loved the picture plopped in the middle there. Made me laugh. Great chapter.
Author's Response: *Grins*, couldn't help myself, glad you liked it, thanks hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Breathless
Wow. That was fantastic. I'm sitting here with a goofy grin on my face. Can't wait to get to the next chapter.
One thing writing wise. Skipping back in time constantly in order to give the thoughts and feelings of both characters is very jarring for the reader. Having to keep skipping back all the time tends to pull you out of the story and believe me, this chapter is so hot we readers don't want anything to pull us out. Plus, we know a lot of what a person is feeling from their words and actions so we don't necessarily need to be privy to every thought to know what they're thinking. Just something to think about in the future.
Onto the next hot hot chapter. Yay!
Author's Response: Oh good, glad you enjoyed it sweety. Thanks for the advice, I appreciate it. It makes good sense what ou said. At the time I wrote the chapter it was, of course, my first time writing that sort of material and because there wasn't much 'background' on either of them that's why I did it. I think (it was several months ago so I'm trying to recollect) that I wanted the readers to know what they were thinking because what was happening between them was very different for each of them b/c of their past so I wanted the action to have more of an impact on them and the readers at the same time. If I had just wrote the sex then went into the past, I don't know if it would have worked. In either case the whole writing process was, still is in many senses, very new to me and I'm learning from my mistakes as I go. I do agree with you though, who wants to get interrupted by the trivial thoughts when they are talking and such, thanks again hon, I love constructive criticism, it's very helpful indeed. Hope you like the next chappy too hon, thanks for the awesome review.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: Breathless
God damn it! My seven-month-old woke up right in the middle of Spike begging Buffy to let him have her. Will be back to read the rest of this chapter AS SOON AS IS PHYSICALLY POSSIBLE. : )
Author's Response: LMFAO, I remember those days.. glad to say I have my husband neutered. Hope you enjoy it hon, thanks for the funny review.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: Breaking and Entering
OMG! That was amazing. I loved the slow build, completely unrushed. Perfect.
Author's Response: Squeeeeeeeeee, so glad you liked it, really. It was my first time writing this kind of scene, thanks so much for the wonderful review.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Lady In Red
Delicious chapter. I love your characterisation of Lorne. Very well done.
Author's Response: I do so love Lorne, he's fun to write. Glad you liked him and the chappy, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Haha! This is just too perfect. On to chapter 3!
Author's Response: Tee hee, glad you liked it hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: An Alternative
Just found this story and I have to say, for a first story it's really good. I'm enjoying it very much and looking forward to Buffy and Spike's first meeting.
Author's Response: Oh YAY, I soooooooooo love getting a new reader. Glad you're enjoying it hon. I hope when you've read through it, you can tell me if my writings gotten better in the later chapters. Thanks so much for the awesome review and for taking to reading my first, my baby.
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2006 - 05:55 am Title: Domesticated
Sorry, I think I'm running out of original things to say after 20 chapters and almost 20 reviews ! Just that I'm still here, this is still my favourite story of the moment and I'm still looking forward the next chapter. And this is the ONLY story I'm reviewing every chapter of ! You're really talented !
Author's Response: Oh, big hugs and kisses from me and my muse sweety. I don't care how eloquent or not you make your reviews, I just LOVE getting them from you, it's always a pleasure to see your name behind the lovely words. Thank you so much sweety.
[Report This]Date: 11/06/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Domesticated
Loved the chapter, as usual. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you so much hon.
[Report This]Date: 11/06/2006 - 04:42 pm Title: Domesticated
another fantastic chapter
Author's Response: Thanks sweety.
[Report This]Date: 11/06/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: Domesticated
I LOVED IT!!!!!! But what's new ;)
As always hun, fantastical job and I can't wait to get a sneek peek at the next chappie! Kuddos!
Author's Response: Hugs and kisses to you my friend, tee hee, you know you're my girl. Thanks for the review hon.
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