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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/01/2006 - 05:08 am Title: chapter 17

Anya is right :) And even if Buffy said she wanted to keep it a secret till the showing it is good that she told Anya and Tara.. and now the secret isn't so secret anymore *gg*

Author's Response: What are friends for if you can't tell them your secrets.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: chapter 17

i sure hope everyone is right and dawn is supportive of her mom's relationship with will. Love this tale. More please.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: chapter 17

Glad she's happy now!
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I just added 18

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 09:19 pm Title: chapter 17

tgis is getting better and bettwr, will look for next chapter on monday or weds. thanks

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/30/2006 - 11:50 am Title: chapter 16

So glad you didn't do the panicked, run away, denial morning-after sort of thing with Buffy and Will. Great update. Wonderfully written tale. more please.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 02:39 pm Title: chapter 16

Great chapter once again! I'll be looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: j Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 02:33 pm Title: chapter 16

kudos, really like this story . Can't wait for next chapter.

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2006 - 12:28 pm Title: chapter 16

I can only get gross out with Spike/Dawn (or some S/other or B/other) pairings. :) ~ So they don't want to tell Dawn being together now; she'll get her surprise at the showing :) Good to see that both felt the attraction from the begin. Loved their first morning together. Till next chapter :)

Author's Response: You wil have to read to find out how it goes.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 07:24 pm Title: chapter 15

I kept waiting for Dawn to walk in on the kitchen/chocolate scene. That would be horrible!

Author's Response: I would never do that since I am more of a fluff then angst writer.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: chapter 15

There were "yuck" parts? I totally missed those, guess I'll have to go back and re-read (the last 2 chaps at least)....... Nope, still no yuck to be found.! It's all good yummy Spuffyness and chocolate (oh you mean that little dalliance with dawn - already forgotten -- see, no Yuck. LOVE IT (BEING A MOM and lusting after Will/Spike/JM helps) so carry on and provide more yummy spuffy goodness please.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: chapter 15

To the last chapter: Thanks for bearing with my ANTI Spike/Dawn :) *on to the new chapter* That was hot :) Yay for chocolate strawberries :)

Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me and I hope I didn't gross you out too much.

Reviewer: Delicia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 02:10 pm Title: chapter 15

Yay for sexy chocolatey fun!

Author's Response: Gotta have the chocolate.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:59 pm Title: chapter 15

It's good to see them together. Didn't like the Dawn/Will combo!
Update soon please!

Author's Response: I will try tomorrow.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: chapter 15

That sounded like a great workout plan! :) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I'd sign up for it.

Reviewer: Chrissnicole Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2006 - 01:49 pm Title: chapter 15

Chocolatey sex. hot hot hot. I definitely like the NC-17 rating more that PG. Great chapter can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: I took your advice and changed it.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: chapter 14

So does this mean they're in a relationship?
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: I'd call it a relationship.

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: chapter 14

Weee smutty chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I tried.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: chapter 14

Bliss, bliss, bliss...wonder how long that'll last? :)

Author's Response: For a bit at least.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: chapter 14

Uh-huh.. just the thought: Buffy would get a disease because of Dawn... (Your fault because you mentioned Dawn again *gg*) Thank god it wasn't awkward; well like Spike thought it (Dawn) could have been a mood killer indeed. ~ Loved the chapter so far! And looking forward to the next one (raiding the fridge) :)

Author's Response: you are too funny. Thanks for sticking with me.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2006 - 12:45 am Title: chapter 13

I thought I knew the meaning of evil, but this brings it to whole new levels! Come on, update again! Now please! I'm dying here, and I'm sure I'm not the only one!

Author's Response: Updated now.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: chapter 13

Mmm Spuffy :) Even if Dawn has a new boyfriend now and she was the one that broke up with Will, it still will be awkward if she finds out that her ex-boyfriend will be her new step-daddy. Awkward *nods*; it would be so even if not Dawn was Buffy's daughter, if Willow was it or so. I wonder how Dawn will react towards both. And how it will be in the future if they are seeing one another often; Dawn her mom with her ex. But yay for Spuffy :)

Author's Response: Yay for Spuffy from me too. It will be awhile before they need to deal with it but it will occur.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: chapter 13

Uh-oh...I mean, yay! but uh oh...she's going to feel so guilty after isn't she? Or will he convince her? And how is Dawn going to react? That'll be a tricky situation. "HI, this is my mom's boyfriend, but he was my boyfriend first." LOL. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: It will be a while before the confrontation.

Reviewer: daffodil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 04:53 pm Title: chapter 13

I think that the plot is intriguing, but the way you write could be brushed up a little. The narrative doesn't flow, and the dialogue doesn't really sound realistic.

Author's Response: Well since this is only my second fic I know I have a lot to learn still about writing.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: chapter 13

Now, I like this couple MUCH better! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to update tomorrow.

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2006 - 03:12 am Title: chapter 12

Excellent few chapters you've posted in the last week. I was away, so I didn't keep up on the postings, but if you update this regularly, I shall be very pleased. I can't wait to see how Will and Buffy react with these new developments!

Author's Response: I was away from the computer this weekend but here is another update.

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