

Date: 06/23/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: chapter 12
Maybe it's better I don't comment on Dawn's behavior. I did it enough in every chapter I fear (because Spawn ). And Buffy knows too that it is awkward. It's too early for her to met William again. I hope William can convince her otherwise. Yet I know it's (if you think about mother/daughter) too early. Looking forward to read what you'll do with it. Maybe Dawn can move to the Mars? Or the Moon? ;-)
Author's Response: Dawn already has someone else. Now it's time for drunk Buffy fun.

Date: 06/23/2006 - 11:54 am Title: chapter 12
Follow your heart, yes, but then comes Dawn...and how she'll feel...and that's got to make a mom worry. And William...lol... just like a man to think "well, now I can pursue Buffy". They just don't get it things do they? LOL. Great job hon.
Author's Response: Guys always think with one part of their anatomy, don't they.

Date: 06/23/2006 - 10:37 am Title: chapter 12
Now, this is why I missed Tara so in the show.
She's so darned grounded and smart!
Great chapter,
spuf
Author's Response: I always loved Tara.

Date: 06/22/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: chapter 11
Hmmm..wonder what will happen next and how Will will take it. Great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: You can go read it now. I have updated.

Date: 06/22/2006 - 03:28 pm Title: chapter 11
Well, Connor would be a better choice for Dawn, that's for damn sure. And it would make things easier too. Although, it would still be awkward if Buffy ends up dating her daughter's ex. Don't know how they can deal with this situation. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see.:)

Date: 06/22/2006 - 02:58 pm Title: chapter 11
It's great that Dawn made her own decision. But it's still going to be wierd when mom comes home with her ex. Great chapter. Thanks for making it NC-17
Chriss
Author's Response: Thanks.

Date: 06/22/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: chapter 11
Yeah, Dawn has to decide on her own if she'll end the relationship *shudder* with Spike. Think of what would happen if Buffy told her to do it and then she would get together with Spike ~ that would be awkward too. ~ Looking forward to the next part.. hopefully with the end of the relationship between Dawn and Spike (Sorry, die hard Spuffy fan here who thinks Spawn is just wrong. Just my opinion, everybody is free to have a different one. That's simply me).
Author's Response: Soon it will all be over. And hey I don't like Spawn in any way or form, she just fit the age correctly.

Date: 06/22/2006 - 11:44 am Title: chapter 11
oh i see a mess on the horizon..
Author's Response: maybe a little one :)

Date: 06/22/2006 - 11:05 am Title: chapter 11
Wow !
This fic is so great. Keep writing. Can't wait to see What happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope to update again tomorrow.

Date: 06/21/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: chapter 10
i love this fic....keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks.

Date: 06/21/2006 - 04:09 pm Title: chapter 9
How did I manage to miss a chapter? lol After reading chapter 10, I was like: "How did she get there? Why is she drunk?" I'm such a loser lol. Great chapter. Anya is always fun.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Date: 06/21/2006 - 03:58 pm Title: chapter 10
Wow, go Buffy! Though I don't like cheating.
Great chapter! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Don't like the cheating either but I hate Spawn more.

Date: 06/21/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: chapter 10
Naughy, naughy, Buffy. I think my exact reaction at the end of this was "Wow". lol
Author's Response: Thank you

Date: 06/21/2006 - 01:43 pm Title: chapter 10
Wooo, sexy and wrong. I like :)
Author's Response: I felt bad writing that cause I think it is wrong to cheat but Spawn is so wrong that I felt it was ok.

Date: 06/21/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: chapter 10
Oops.. I wasn't able to type last time. ~ *nods* Buffy was indeed a bit too drunk. I don't think she would have dared to do it if she hadn't been drunk. But at the end she got a bit more sober. Well at last (and that I'm glad about) Spike thinks about breaking up with Dawn. :) Because yeah.. you know my opainion about that.
Author's Response: It will get better soon. I promise

Date: 06/21/2006 - 10:43 am Title: chapter 10
Slutty Buffy has made an apperance :)
Author's Response: what can I say? She will was drunk.

Date: 06/20/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: chapter 9
Awwwww, how boring of him!
Update soon please!
Author's Response: It won't be boring for long.;)

Date: 06/20/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: chapter 9
Oh dear, let the games begin. We all know about drunk Buffy. Loved the update.
Author's Response: Yes we do. Thanks for your comments.

Date: 06/20/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: chapter 9
BTW: When you look at the story index this chapter counts as "Ch. 1". On to the story: Anya's shop.. so Buffy bought 'Mr. Big'. And there I wondered if she would the it with her and somebody would notice but then they ran into William. And in combination with Anya it's always fun :-D. But now Anya made Buffy drunk.. and William came to 'her rescue' as it seems :). ~ Looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks and I fixed chapt.9. I love Anya, she is so funny.

Date: 06/20/2006 - 11:41 am Title: chapter 9
uh oh...wonder what's gonna happen at home...God that Anya has a big mouth lol. But it's funny! :)
Author's Response: There''s more to happen before Buffy gets home. She's gonna be a bad mom in the next chapter. ;)

Date: 06/19/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: chapter 8
Great chapter! Update soon please!!!
Author's Response: Thanks.

Date: 06/19/2006 - 01:26 pm Title: chapter 8
Good! Dawn's interested in someone else. Hope she sticks to it. Now what kind of trouble will Anya get Buffy into?
Author's Response: You know Anya. It will be interesting.

Date: 06/19/2006 - 01:21 pm Title: chapter 8
Oh my... I'm very glad that Spike is retreating from Dawn. But Dawn noticed it; and now she wants to have a talk with her mom about it? "Well, honey, you are half his age" or more like he is older and I am... ;-) Oh thank god.. Dawn met another one. (And I repeat: it is still awkward to think of her having been with Spike *shudder*). Girls night out? Sounds good. I wonder if William goes to clubs.. I don't really think so. He is still official together with Dawn. Well, we'll see, right? And hopefully Spawn will be over now (official *shudder* again). ;-) I liked the chapter, don't worry.
Author's Response: Will can't pass up a new club, can he? In his mind he is not with Dawn anymore but he hasn't said anything. Thanks for your kind words.

Date: 06/19/2006 - 11:57 am Title: chapter 8
Oh boy, wonder if Will is going to be making an appearance at the new club? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: you will have to wait and see. :)

Date: 06/18/2006 - 03:51 am Title: chapter 7
Oh total dream smut chapter....love it
Author's Response: thanks