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Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty six

What a completely perfect chapter. Thanks for allowing Buffy's character to accept this (very well written) experience for the wonderfully loving and caring time that it was. So many writers would have taken all of her insecurities and used them to some how screw up the night and just create undo angst. You wrote such a tight scene here ... dang you are good. I hope that she will heal and not freak out. They are a great couple ... heck HE is perfect for any of us out here in fanland. LOL

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 04:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty six

LMFAO - she named his cock Spike! that brillant!

but seriously, most of that was really sweet :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty six

WONDERFUL!!
I LOVED this chapter! I loved her naming "him" Spike and I really love the ending!! This is a fantastic story!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty six

wow!!! that was good!!! that was really good. great job. i really love this story. please PLEASE post again.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

well.....will buffy give in? or will she run again? loved it. really felt like i was reading my own life a little bit...well...except for whole hearing/seeing dead people thing. lol. great job.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

I didn't expect her to name it Spike! I'm glad things went well for them! Hopefully Buffy will be more open and end up staying with William. Great chapter! Update soon please!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

William was such a sweetie in this chapter. What a perfect first time for Buffy. I was so pleased to see Buffy throw caution to the wind and decide to enjoy life a bit. Can't wait to find out what happens in the morning. Loved Buffy's closing line. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

really liked the chapter. very believable. more please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

Yummy! Please sir, can I have some more! Well if I were with William that's what I'd be asking! That was so totally hot and most excellent. Wonderful Chap full of Spuffy goodness! Thanks so much. More please. I love it! (and how nice of the ghosts to stay away for at least this night). Again?

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

GRETA CHAPTER, VERY EROTIC, YET SENSITIVE. LOVE THE RELATIONSHIP

Reviewer: Saltygoodness Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 08:04 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

Loved it! This is one of my favorites. Great update. Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

Buffy's elated response had me grinning!

Reviewer: Pam S. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

That was nice.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

She named it Spike. She named it Spike. That was just too much. VERY HOT chapter. Need a cold shower now.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

Very hot chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

Ha, she named his penis Spike? That's too funny...lol! I'm still cracking up from that. Damn, looks like she might have that Slayer stamina if she already wants to go again. This was a hot chapter=)

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty six

I don't think she could have had a more sensitive or patient man for her first, lol. Such a sweet yet erotic chapter. Can't wait for the next morning! Such a great update an I'll be awaiting the next!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Awe, Buffy was dressing up.. and that took Spike's breath (ability to speak) away. ~ Do you think that maybe they were lacking in the energy to coexist around you Has Darla found a way to take the energy of the ghosts? Just guessing. ~ Anyway, William is really smitten with Buffy, huh? Loved it! Till next chapter :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Am really loving this! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Oh possessive and masterful William. I like it.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

Fantastic chapter! I loved the steamy turn William and Buffy's dance took. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

oh, HOT! I like it!!

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

I half expected Buffy to freak out and run away when he said that... I'm glad she didn't. I hope that she chills out enough to enjoy having him around, let alone falling for him.

Reviewer: DanID Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

I am thrilled that Buffy and William may finally be coming together..BUT...Is Buffy making a big mistake by leaving the ghosts? They kept their end of the bargain..what will be the consequences if she breaks her end? Great update!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2006 - 12:30 am Title: Chapter Twenty-five

And again with the Woo-whoo! My, how you can turn the conversation on a dime! You take the scene from a nice, comfortable, compatible conversation, and then you crank the sexual tension up about 1000 degrees! Nothing can be sexier than a man who knows what he wants, has the ability to actually communicate what he wants, and the confidence to go after it!

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