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Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

That was really sweet!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/18/2006 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Poor Buffy is desperately trying to hold on to that control...Afraid that is she lets herself go she'll be lost. And the truth is... if she does let herself...she WILL be lost. She just doesn't get that she will be lost in Will..and that is a good thing. You can't help but ache for her....*sigh* Very emotionaly charged chapter!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Let's hope this break-down Buffy is ready to share some of her past with him-- to explain why she's so closed off. Maybe she'll even be so brave as to share her feelings with him! Really looking forward to more!

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Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love the way he communicated his feelings to her-- He told her what was in his heart without out-right declaring it and freaking her out. I like his forceful insistance that they keep snogging, followed by a demonstration. Very cute, and very, *very* hot!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Goodness, girl! You're going to get Buffy so hot and bothered that she'll get over her fear of intimacy pretty darn quickly! Very nicely done-- William is so sincere and calm. By not making sex seem dirty, but rather showing Buffy the beauty in the physical expression between two people, she should be able to get over at least some of her hang-ups pretty soon.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Whew! That was getting *pretty steamy*! Seems like William did the right thing by distracting her-- nothing worse than her jumping into bed with him, only to regret and pull away later. Great chapter!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Great chapter! More soon please.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Loved the chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: mark evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Thanks for the chapter :D .

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 02:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

See how he is, just so hot and sexy and then, the moment she get scared, the second she objects, he becomes this sweet tender comforting sweetheart. She's gotta give into him sooner or later beause he's just so perfect (even if he is a bit devious at times). Wonderful update. more please.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

Well yeah: Buffy taking the work would have been too easy, huh? And then it got hot... but the snogging was too much for Buffy after this day. Good that Spike isn't leaving her. ~ Good chapter! :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

loved it. glad buffy had her a good cry in this chapter. she needed it. glad william was there to hold her. love this story lots. post soon. great job.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

Hopefully this is not two steps back for Buffy.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 10:04 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

It seems like he might be getting through to her. I hope this makes them closer. Poor Buffy is so scared of what she's feeling. I hope she accepts it and William. Update soon please!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2006 - 09:24 am Title: Chapter Eighteen

I had a feeling it might be too soon for that, but it was still a pretty hot chapter. Can't wait for more=)

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I think that will be a spectacular fight. Thanks for a wonderful update!

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I finally started this one and read all 17 chapters today. I absolutely love it. Very different plot and they are so cute together. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Thanks for the chapter :D .

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

loved the way william took control. post soon.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

that was quite a speech! glad he at least put something out there. i wish buffy would have said a little something more back to him... but apparently that will be coming up soon :)

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

LOL......That was hilarious! William had quite a speech there...then all Buffy could ask was "What is snogging?" Very cute : ) Uh Oh..looks like Will is going to get it when he gets home...Though Giles just might get her to agree to a job...Guess we'll see!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Hope Buffy takes the job! Great chapter!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 05:08 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Great chapter, good to see him breaking down her walls, and a mention of Giles .:)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow...he sure was sneaky bout the museum. I wonder how this will go. I hope she stays in London. Update soon please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love Buffy's passionate innocence in this story. And William is just too adorable for words with his "snogging" speech! Great update. so looking forward to more!

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