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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Gotta love it when William gets all forceful like that. I love how he took charge of the situation and laid his intentions on the line. The museum job twist was very clever of William in an incredibly sneaky way, he must be one fantastic lawyer... lol. Can't wait to find out how Buffy reacts to this development. Wonderful chapter! :D

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

I lov ehow their relationship is starting to slowly grow and push them together. I honestly love this story and can't wait for the next chapter update!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Old William is a sneaky bastard with this job idea. But, how else is he going to get the ball rolling with her?! Besides, maybe she'll feel more settled and useful...maybe she'll feel more settled to slip into some other activities...of a more recreational nature. ;-)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

So Spike thinks Buffy is horrified by the thought of being his girlfriend. (Or she wasn't too happy because he was very eager to take it back. Well she didn't say it so maybe not -yet-.) But William will see to it that they are on the right path *g*. He even got her work. So it would be easy for her if she decided to stay (what she'll do hopefully).

Reviewer: Pam S. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 09:40 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

Still nice and sweet.... but I know a little angst is coming...

Enjoying the developing relationship and the calm yet agressive understanding of Spike.

Reviewer: rk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Seventeen

I love this story...please keep writing the chapters so quickly...it's awesome...I love that Buffy's giving in a bit more...

Reviewer: Renee' Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2006 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Ok, for a minute, I seriously thought Buffy had nodded off and was having a dream while Spike showered. I'm so GLAD that was not the case! Interesting that this Spike is as bold as Joss's- I really like that. So, yeah, basically- good update and thanks for it!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Wow..My last trip to the bookstore was NOTHING like that! lol haha Buffy got caught looking at a sex book..that had to be embarrasing..well....at first anyway ; ) Great update!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

loved it. hope buffy doesn't lay into william abou tthe 'girlfirend' thing too much in the next chapter cuz i have a feeling she's going wig a bit. lol. great job. please post soon.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

and just how does buffy like this new title? can't wait to see what her reaction is!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I feel really ridiculous; I think I actually started sweating a little bit. Subtle sex in public I'll call it! Nice job.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I like this much better. A more open and accepting Buffy who's experimenting with her feelings for William. I can't wait for them to be together seriously. Great chapter! Update soon please!

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

hey Brat, sorry I havent reviewed for awhile...but I have been lurking and reading of course....so Buffy is THAT naive huh?...well William will just have to showher all about it...really getting into this fic Brat...as always love your quick updates:)

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

WOW - was not expecting that - what a nice surprise!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 05:00 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Okay, happily, I was wrong about being in public slowing them down. Using the book store for foreplay was delightful and erotic, and I laughed at William's response to the clerk.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Awww... kissing lessons from William, that Buffy sure is one lucky girl! Loved how William referred to Buffy as his girlfriend. Wonderful chapter! :D

Reviewer: aj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

ok that was HOT

Reviewer: jazz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 02:23 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

"Girlfriend?",,,,,,,,awww,,,,,,,,,this story is so cute. I can safely say I have become addicted......I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh :) Spike caught Buffy looking into / reading a certain book. And Buffy got a lesson :) And a new title too: Girlfriend. I hope she likes it as she liked the kissing :)

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

OMG, again with the HOTNESS of just a bit of kissage! She's gonna cave isn't she! Please tel me she's gonna cave. He's just so sweet and hot and tender and sexy! SHe's gotta CAVE! More please.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Well, second base.

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

OOOOh! Love it!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/15/2006 - 10:46 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh, evil place to leave it. I've once stumbled across some of those books myself when I was in a bookstore. My friend and I were amused by them. We just kept looking at the pictures...lol! Now, if I had a guy like William to look with me, I'm thinking things would be a bit more interesting. Loved the chapter=)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/14/2006 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

The kissing was emotional and sexy, and quickly got very intense. Nice way to put a halt to the action - out in public they can have some space and clear their heads. This was an entertaining chapter.

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