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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

*thump* I don't quite know what I was expecting..but I didn't expect the danger to Buffy to be that kind. I CAN see it...but I still didn't expect it.. I am betting that Will won't take no for an answer from Buffy from here on out. He won't give up til' he's drawn her out of her shell..

You can see in the scene where Buffy is kissing WIll, how terrified she is of losing control. She enjoyed the kisses..but freaked at the thought of losing more control..I think Will has his work cut out for him!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 09:45 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Awesome couple of chaps! Kissage! Yeah! What a bombshell Dru dropped on William, now he'll really have to be careful and watch over Buffy. Love it, need more please.

Reviewer: Mali Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

*audible gasp*

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 02:51 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Bombshell.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

Yikes! Didn't see that last line coming. I liked how Buffy was kissed senseless, though!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I'm glad Dru told William what Buffy's fate might be if she leaves. I can't wait to find out how William handles the info Dru just dropped on him. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh -- that was jarring. He better not go overboard though, because if he's overprotective, she'll run REAL fast :)

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I like that you have Dru as a good person in this even though I am not a fan of hers.

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

I so didn't expect that, but I can see it. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Thanks for the great chapter :D .

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Wow! Great chapter!

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Date: 07/09/2006 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Great, moving chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

Nice kiss. But poor Buffy. And Dru the nice sister is a good thing.

Enjoying the updates.

Reviewer: Megs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

I am loving this story!!!! the plot is soo interesting and the chemistry between the character is scorching!!!! .... I love this Buffy, she is so strong and so fragile at the same time .. this is by far one of my fav stories of yours and I'm pretty sure I've read them all!! Keep up the hard work! :)

Reviewer: Gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 10:18 am Title: Chapter Twelve

wow is right. Great chapter. I will miss all your fics while away.

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 09:06 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Buffy' character is pretty interesting..I have learned a thing or two about people..and I can see that between Buffy and Dru.. Not that I don't think Dru was a caring person..but Buffy was actually the more sensitive sister..she cares alot more than her sister did. She cared what her parents thought and it ended up affecting her more..

Also would explain why she is so frightened of letting the ghost in. She's the type of person that stays closed up to protect herself..because when she opens up, she is completely open and gets hurt easily bacause she cares so much. Can't wait to see how Buffy will react to this wopper of a kiss that Will has decided to lay on her! LOL

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Thank goodness! That'll shut her up for a while. :-)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter Twelve

Fantastic chapter! I loved the ending. Can't wait to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 02:19 am Title: Chapter Twelve

wow would be my last coherent thought if he kissed me too! Great chapter, I like that your peeling layers from Buffy, she's like an onion!!

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter Twelve

What a great story :D . Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2006 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Twelve

That man always seems to know what to say, even when he's speechless!! Guess actions do speak louder than words. A very nice combination of having William just listen to her, and then matter-of-factly rebut her when she undersold herself. "Wow." Yeah-- that about sums it up!!!!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Just caught up with your story. Good stuff. I hope this kiss-fest doesn't send Buffy running for the hills. :)

Reviewer: MarzBar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Intriguing AU tale. More story please.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

yep....wow would probably be my last coherent thought for a week if that man kissed me.. :) liked the update a lot!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Gah. Could there be anymore of a cliffhanger? Haha. Of course, I can't wait for the next update, because this was just too much to handle! Hopefully Buffy won't flip, because I'm guessing this is a first for her!

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