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Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 10:58 pm Title: Interlude 16/17B - Blood Ties

Excellent and mind-whirling dream sequence.

So much going on in Angel's mind. Memories, regrets.... no wonder he doesn't want to sleep.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Welcome to the Fishbowl

This is just terrible for William. And excellent storytelling from you. I literally feel nauseous having read the things William suffered.

going to get some water, and then read more.

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Date: 06/26/2007 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 15 -The Unfriendly Skies

Oh the evil that is man...

Poor little Will. *sigh* *weep*

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Date: 06/26/2007 - 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Torn Asunder

Weeping now...

Gonna go read more.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Something Wicked This Way Comes

Oh no no no!!! Not Nathan Chalmers again. He's just looking for an excuse.

Onward...

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 08:49 pm Title: Interlude 12/13B - Boys Night Out

Oh, so many questions!! Must read more...

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Date: 06/26/2007 - 07:14 pm Title: Interlude 12/13 - Sins of the Father

Gunn's a good man.

And poor Connor.

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Date: 06/26/2007 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Soul's Betrayal

Dawn's shirt - hilarious!

Oh drat! Heart-breaking, especially for Dawn and William. And Buffy. Of course, for Buffy.

Now I'm curious how Connor will react, now that Dawn's gone and Angel's to blame.


Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: Interlude 11/12 - A Hundred Bottles of Beer on the Wall

The shadow of a man... I'm interested to find out what's going to happen to this Xander. He's not doing so well, is he?

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Family Matters

Ha!! Dyed in tweed. Laughing out loud.

LOL!! An offering of cats.
What a freakin' great chapter.

It's every bit the way Angel and Wes would have handled things, with Whistler (perfect name, btw) and Nate, being 'dyed in tween' will never understand.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Playtime at the Hyperion

What is going on with Buffy and Wes? One minute corporeal, the next - non!

I love how Buffy called him "Mr. I'm so important I used to have two names!" Funny.

I'm still totally wrapped up in this story. Off to read more.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2007 - 03:01 am Title: Interlude 8/9 - Sunday in the Zoo with William

Go Charlotte!!

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Date: 06/26/2007 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter 8 - The Coming of the Dawn

Yes! Dawn's there. I so thought she figured it out, but it turns out she's only close.

And Buffy... omg! Buffy's right there, listeing in. Must read more.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 7 - On the Right Path

Ha! That danged Immortal. Good description of him. And now puzzle pieces are coming together.

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Date: 06/25/2007 - 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Shuffle Forward

Oh wow! Wow!!

Neat addition to the cast; can't wait to find out what he's up to.

I love Gunn and Anne in this. And Nina, too. Oh, and I just laughed out loud over the hair gel and Giles' reaction to having William thrust into his arms.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 06:20 pm Title: Interlude 5/6 - Discussions with my Sister

Ah, so now we know more about Mr. Chalmers. I bet Lydia's not out of the game and I'm glad to read that she survived the explosion at the Watcher's Council.

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 03:36 pm Title: Interlude 4/5 - Death Comes A'Calling

Ach, Dru! And a fine Dru she is. This is just getting more and more interesting...

Reviewer: CelesteAvonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/25/2007 - 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Breathing Space

Yay!! Connor's home. You've pegged Connor's voice too. Loving it!

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Date: 06/25/2007 - 02:20 pm Title: Interlude 3/4B - Buffy's View from the Garden

Here's me joining in Buffy's hope to bring the Immortal down, hard!

Great Buffy P.O.V. Looking forward to more...

(my apologies if this is a duplicate; I forgot to sign in!)

Reviewer: Celeste_Avonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2007 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Ties That Bind

I am enjoying this story so much. I like Anne and Gunn being there; it's a nice addition, and you write Gunn extremely well.

Reviewer: Celeste Avonne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2007 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - A Fly in Amber

Oh, this is good stuff!!

I love that completely Buffy line: "Get me out of here. My nose itches."

So glad to be reading this!

Reviewer: Yash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2007 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost

I love this story. Keep up the excellent writing. I'm so glad the doctor was able to help Will a little.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost

so glad you haven't abandoned this story, even though it has been a while its always good to get another chapter

Reviewer: Eternal_red Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost

What a pleasure it is to be reading this story again and be sucked straight back into it.

Thank you

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/14/2007 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 27 - Little Boy Lost

Thanks for the update! I love this story.

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