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Reviewer: cathou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: Picture Perfect

continues !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:53 am Title: The Reunion

How in th' heck did I miss reviewing this chapter?? Anyho ... I love the background information that was given here as well as the immediate adorable bond between William and his Gram. (too cool) It all just ads another wonderful dimension to this already droolworthy guy in buffy's life. With Glory, Lorne, Gunn, Tara, etc ... pulling for them, how can they possibly go astray?

such a great story!! Lovin' every chapter.

Thanks for sharing your talents

Reviewer: Mikaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Picture Perfect

Thanks for another great chapter. More soon please...

Reviewer: ccc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Picture Perfect

salut eille ton histoire est génial continue jadore !!!!!!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Picture Perfect

Oh, I love the plot twist. Great chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 01:42 am Title: Picture Perfect

Sneaky man, following his girl...I hope Buffy can put a voice to what she really feels, so that Spike doesn't get a broken heart.

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 12:04 am Title: Picture Perfect

AHHH! I just want to scream at Spike to just tell her. lol I love the song by the way.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 11:46 pm Title: Picture Perfect

wish that they werent there

Reviewer: kayla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: Picture Perfect

I actually love the song you used. I think it describes pretty well what Spike was feeling at the moment.
Love the plot. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Picture Perfect

Yay! Buffy wants to call off her wedding! Knew a missing Dru wasn't good. Great chapter!

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 07:42 pm Title: Picture Perfect

great chapter..enjoyed the photo play..cant wait to see whats in store!!!

Reviewer: spuff_me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: Picture Perfect

I like the way this story is unfolding. Very creative. I'm guessing Dru has something to do with Riley being their all of a sudden. Great update!

Reviewer: pretty cordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:53 pm Title: Picture Perfect

I love this story so much. I hope to see an update real soon.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Picture Perfect

I loved the photo shoot. It was cute. I'm wondering what Dru and Riley are up to, and why they are together in the first place. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 04:56 pm Title: Picture Perfect

Thanks for a great update ... I am going to go back a reread the previous chapters because I think that I've forgotten just how Dru fits into this whole story.

Anyway, I love the plot and the direction that you are taking it in ... very original. I am not so much with the grammar criticism as I tend to fix things in my mind ... as long as the story is a good one AND THIS ONE REALLY IS then I just tend not to let it bother me.

I hope that there is not a whole lot of angstyness ahead for your adorable couple as their entire friendship has always had some measure of angst to it ... building as the years have progressed. Hopefully with so many people noticing what a dynamite couple they make and with Glory on their side things will work smoothly in their favor and much Spuffyness will ensue. (that's just me being hopefull)

Thanks for putting so much work into entertaining us out here ... this truly is a great story.

Reviewer: Lara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 04:32 pm Title: Picture Perfect

I really like this story, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way; but you should really consider getting a second beta. One who is good with grammar and can keep an eye on your tenses. You constantly switch between present and past tense, sometimes even in the middle of a paragraph, and it's really taking away from the story.

Aside from that it's a cute story and fun to read. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Catherine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: The Reunion

eille continue c'est vrm bon !!!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: The Reunion

Ooh, I like Spuffy interesting. And the talk between Glory and Spike was good. Love the chapter and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: silvinne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 06:00 pm Title: The Reunion

Thanks for another great chapter! I'm loving this story. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: The Reunion

I really like how the story is developing....so much plot. But seriously, you need to get on with writing more smoochies for us : ) Great chapter and can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Jordan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 04:34 pm Title: The Reunion

Yes, I'm craving for more spufiness! More please.

Reviewer: Mikaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 09:50 am Title: The Reunion

I kinda wish Spike would say yes to owning the hotel. I'm dying to see the reaction on Snyder's face when he finds out who his new boss is. Great chapter. Hope to see an update soon!

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 09:23 am Title: The Reunion

I like that the story keeps changing, new things being brought in keeps me interested. I can't wait for some more Spuffy action though, maybe longer chapters would tide me over. (hint hint) lol

Reviewer: pretty_cordy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 09:09 am Title: The Reunion

Totally love how you're developing this story . And yea I'm looking forward to more Spuffiness!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2006 - 12:40 am Title: The Reunion

You know I love this story, and that I totally dig the way you are moving the plot. Having said that, I promise that I'm not into flame throwing of any kind, but I'd like to offer a brief amount of constructive feedback. You continue to mix verb tenses (past and present, present and future tense), which breaks the continuity of the writing. I know I struggle with it myself when writing, but this continued editing and refining will elevate this story to a whole new level. It was a nice twist to have Glory be the grandma that Will never knew he had. And I am seriously looking forward to your promises for more Spuffy!! Yeah, lucky us! Thanks for this wonderful story.

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