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Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Into the character

I loved it!

spuf

Reviewer: mikaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 09:09 pm Title: Into the character

wow.....I can't believe what jst happened! and they haven't gone inside the hotel yet. Update ASAP please???

Reviewer: kassie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Into the character

its so beautiiful..n ya...oh so very vivid n tear-jerking...cant wait 4 e next one '',

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Into the character

I don't know if Spike is brilliant or just totally into pain and suffering. Very clever "plan" if he was trying to get Buffy to realize she doesn't love Riley. Lorne is convinced and so am I that they belong together (well of course I do - I'm into Spuffy!) Sure hope Riley hears about this little deal and blows a gasket! I love it when Buffy tells him off so I hope she gets the opportunity to do the same in this tale. Love it, more please.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 12:54 am Title: Into the character

I can't believe you did that!! Spike proposed?!? I don't think I'm very coherent right now, you kinda just blindsided me. Damn, but this will be fun. ; ) VERY much looking forward to more. Wondering what they will do next. Ooh! and I can't wait to see what all of their friends are gonna say.

Reviewer: candace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Into the character

i loved when he "proposed" to her. haha. cant wait to find out what happens next!!!

Reviewer: Angharad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Mom's Intuition

I think you have a good story going here. I would just like to offer some constructive critisim. The verb tenses are not very consistent. I think you are aiming for a standard narrator voice, with most of the story told in the past tense. But it seems like every other sentence is in present tense, instead. This is just a grammar issue, but it is distracting me, making it more difficult to follow the action in the story. A beta reader could probably help you smooth things out.

Again, I am enjoying the plot and the characters. I hope you keep working on this.

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 09:21 pm Title: Into the character

Liked this chapter? I loved it!!! Call me sappy but I actually had a lump in my throat during the proposal scene as it was so tender. But good grief... come on Spike & Buffy.... can't you see what's right before your eyes??? And gee, maybe you should act on it??? I'm hoping Lorne will accidently lock them up in the banquet room overnight and they are forced to admit how they really feel about each other. Or at the very least maybe another "peck." Great chapter and please, keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: spuff_me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Into the character

Yay! Another update! I'm loving this fic so much. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Into the character

Wow! This chapter is so awesome. I love it so much! Can't wait till the next update :-)

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Into the character

loved the chapter...totally looking forward to lorne...more please!

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Into the character

So, sweet! Spike giving Buffy his moms ring. You know Lorn is not a fool. I hope he starts to push them together! YAY! Thanks!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Into the character

i cannot believe he got ot of the car and proposed!! thats probably how he would have always imagined proposing to her too....that would kill me knowing it wasn't real.

i real like this fic. can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Into the character

This last chapter was so well done I just had to read it again (which I almost never do) which prompted me to reread the entire story ... I NEVER do that but I just wanted to get my bearings again ... that last chapter is even better the third time. Really well done ... your fans are gonna eat this up.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Into the character

Absolutely loved this chapter! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Into the character

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!
Cool, cool , completely awesome chapter ... love the ring and proposal and all of the chemistry that is going with it. Very creative. My favorite chapter so far. Love this direction that you are going in. Cannot (but will) wait for more !!!!

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Into the character

i absolutely love this story! great update!!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 10:11 pm Title: The real me

So the boy is loaded! Well, that should make things a bir more interesting, or at least give him many more options when it comes to wooing (when he decides to woo in ernest) afterall, he HAS to get Buffy away from (gag!) Riley (gag!). more please.

Reviewer: Brittney Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: The real me

Oh yay, please update soon. I love it!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: The real me

Lingering thoughts of the kiss ... ahhhhh. She is wearing his bracelet and he is being such the gentleman ... this is going down a great path. An update tomorrow would be completely cool!!!!
Thanks for creating such a sweet and touching story.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:28 pm Title: The real me

So, William has some money.... huh, I don't think that would change anything at all. I don't think the chapter dragged at all. It was great always.

Reviewer: spuff_me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: The real me

Hi I just read all you got and I loved it! I hope you'll post another chapter tomorrow....

Reviewer: Mikaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:49 pm Title: The real me

This is definitely getting more interesting! I hope you'll update soon.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: The real me

loved the chapter!...cant wait till the next update..i wouldn't mind some of that money..not all...just a little..

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: The real me

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

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