[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 10:51 am Title: The Waiting Game
Oh! poor things! I'm torn between wanting to tuck them in and going to smash in the faces of the people who have buffy. Decisions, Decisions. If xander's responsible for this have will and spike beat him up! Bad! Like hopspital for a week bad!
Author's Response: haha, how about a compromise? Give 'em a peck goodnight and then dash off to break out Buffy? ;) And Xander will get his own. I just have to figure out what that is.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 10:12 am Title: The Waiting Game
cant wait for them to be reunited
Author's Response: I'm working to it; I just have to set it up credibly.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 08:43 am Title: The Waiting Game
Try not to be stressed though I know it 's hard not be during finals. Looking forward to any updates you can giveus.
Author's Response: Yes, well, mostly it's trying to learn the French language. That's not an easy thing. *le sigh* But I have Spillfy to keep me sane ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 08:33 am Title: The Waiting Game
Oh, poor will and Spike!!!!!
Author's Response: Poor Trio in general. But I'm sure they'll come through this stronger. Um. I'm pretty sure I can gurantee that o_O lol
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 08:06 am Title: The Waiting Game
Ignore all the ignorant comments. I know, easier said than done, unfortunately. I love this story. A bit of angst and waiting is good for the souls of us readers. If they can't handle it, then they shouldn't be reading it. They should also be keeping their comments to themselves if it's not constructive. Looking forward to reading more. Good luck with school, etc.
Author's Response: I agree, but people will always be people. And I honestly don't think many of them think about what they're saying. Thanks for the kind words.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2006 - 06:20 am Title: The Waiting Game
Glad to see the update.
Author's Response: Merci, glad you took the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2006 - 08:54 pm Title: Into the Light
hurry up and update don't leave me in suspense... do they find her?
Author's Response: But of course. I would never seperate the Spillfy permenantly. They're way too much fun to write!! I just need to set it up the rescue credibly.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Coming Clean II
This story is so cute. But xander is such a jerk in this one. .You should do..something bad. to him....
Author's Response: I'm thinking very long and very hard about it. Any suggestions?
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Into the Light
The plot continues... I loved the update. Yes, like many of your readers I enjoy smutty goodness (especially since you are so good at writing it). However, I really like how the angst and the pace is building tension and additional emotional substance to your story. Not only does it enrich the characters but it also enhances the overall story.
I also like how you incorporated Caleb into the story. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I find that Caleb is a bit under-used. But I really appreciate your comment, and I'm really glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2006 - 02:24 pm Title: Into the Light
Sweetie, at one time or another I think every fic writer has had to endure the dreaded flame chapter. Just remember for every one flame or negative remark, ten other people are reading, enjoying, and trusting the writer.
Sometimes, I see in comments some of the more overzealous readers trying to persuede the writer to reach a conclusion faster than they writer intended. While some are ill intentioned, I don't think the majority are trying to be mean spirited, but just so invested in the characters that they are impatient to see what happens to their character.
This should indicate to you that your story is compelling, the characters well written, and slow pacing or not - people *are* reading. They are so interested in your story that they can't wait through one plot heavy chapter to see what happens. Wow.
Spin it positive, don't get discouraged. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers,
Nina
Author's Response: Thank you. I really appreciate that. It just irks me when people say demeaning things and then expect someone else to listen or respond in the way they want; I mean, it just doesn't make sense. Really, thanks for the comment. It made me smile!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 09:50 pm Title: Into the Light
cant wait for them to rescue buffy
Author's Response: You'll have to wait a bit more, but it will happen.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 09:37 pm Title: Into the Light
Hopefully we'll find out who did this to Buffy! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, we definitely will. And there will be hell to pay Thank for hte review.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Part I
Xela i love this story and don't think you should let people who have probably never and wrote a fanfic upset you i mean i wish i could write any kind of story. So Tell them if they haven wrote anything before to try and see how long it take them to write something of quality that makes sense and if they have wrote something before they should know vhow long ti can take to write a story
Author's Response: :) Thanks. I'm kind of embarassed that I let them upset me in the first place; I'm just chalking it up to end-of-semester stress. Your review really made me smile. Oh, and I LOVE your name. Ares was the hotness and Xena totally should have tapped that whenever possible! lol
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Into the Light
Ok - I am seriously surprised by some of the reviews.
The pace is NOT too slow; rather to my perspective, it is building the tension and horror of Buffy's predicament. Of course I desperately want Buffy to be resuced and reunited with her lovers; however if that were to happen immediatley there wouldn't be much of a story. Furthermore, if Buffy's kidnapping had only been for the duration of one chapter, surely it would have seemed forced and merely a triviality?
The addition of some considerable plot has enhanced this story from a steamy albeit very well-written bit of fluff, to something of genuine substance.
The inclusion of Caleb is perfect and I was suitably disturbed by the Stepford-nunness that is Mary.
Excellent update and well done for tackling an issue that is so rarely addressed but can cause so much damage.
Author's Response: I was too, especially in light of me asking people NOT to discuss it, which I suppose was a bit of hopeful naivety on my part...ubt we learn. Thank you for this comment; it's nice to read something with substance. And I agree, a one-chapter problem/resolution is a horrible idea, and it would take the level of the story down. And i'm really glad you liked Mary (well, in the sense of her role in the story.) Thank you, sincerely, for your comment.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 10:16 am Title: Into the Light
your pace sucks!
Author's Response: hahahah. Your review is trite, banal, and holds absolutely no weight with me. But it did make me laugh and roll my eyes; I haven't been able to do that a lot because the French aren't big on sarcasm or eye rolling. So thanks!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 07:45 am Title: Into the Light
I'm so glad you put your author's note in the beginning. People who think places like this don't exist are plan ignorant and give religion, as a whole, a stinking bad name. Great chapter, can't wait for Will and Spike to ride to the rescue!
Author's Response: Indeed. It amazes me how many people can live in denial of things that go on so close to them. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:51 am Title: Into the Light
Well I for one do agree with the other comments concerning the slow pace but as someone said several times, what can we do about it ? Obviously the writer doesn't want to take it into account.
Author's Response: It's been three chapters; and solving hte problem of Buffy's kidnapping has to take time, otherwise it becomes ridiculous and predictable and would ruin the entire story.
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:23 am Title: Into the Light
Poor Buffy! She seemed scared out of her wits! I know I would. I love the plot woven into this - great chapter, and hope to read more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. And sensory deprevation is quite scary...but she'll come through it OK, she's a tough cookie!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Into the Light
I agree, Angst is good for the soul, but Spillfy is good for the libido and my hubby thanks you for your talented Spillfy scenes!
As far as anyone flaming you for you "religious" segments in this tale? Well, they can stuff it. I've had friends in "religious" cults and I'm totally for annilating all CULTS - they are bad! and Cults that KIDNAP and hold people against their will with brainwashing and deprivation techniques are especially BAD! (so glad you used Caleb so we can all hate him!) I hope Buffy can hold out, or at least be recoverable when the twinlets figure out what's happening and find a way to get her out of there!
Personally, if my daughter (I don't have one, but if I did) decided to move in with 2 guys and become lovers with both of them and the 2 guys were also into an incestous relationship with each other as well as with my daughter - I'd be squigged out a bit, but I'd like to think that I'd support her right to live her life even if I didn't agree that is was best! My main concern would be marriage and children, how would that work? I guess they could always create their own "religion" and like the early Mormons allow more than one spouse (only reverse it that wives could have more husbands instead of one husband with multiple wives) I like that idea..Well, I'm rambling and really I just wanted to stay, I'm still loving it, "religious culty angst" and all! Thanks! more please. (Oooo, and maybe, just to keep us all high on sexual tension you could have Spike and Will remember some sweet Spillfy moments while they are trying to find Buffy? Well, just a selfish thought on my part -- please carry on with YOUR story YOUR way).
Author's Response: Yes, cults are very very bad. And this is fiction; we're allowed to bed all the rules. And I suppose marriage and children would be worked out between the trio; I personally don't believe in marriage because while my own parents aren't divorced, I've seen way too many of my friends suffer that. And you can considered yourself married without actually going through the official ceremony. What oyu believe is more powerful than the state. And I'm actually working on a series of stand-alones in the twinlets-verse...you know, stuff that I can't incorporate into the story because it just doesn't fit. So perhaps they won't have to remember. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Into the Light
DAMN THESE ARE SOME CRAZY ASS MOTHER TRUCKERS!!!! i LOVE this story so much and am so happy that u updated. i cant believe that calebs the priest, hes so creepy. i really hope that buffy doesnt give into the crap that he's preaching and resists watever they want her to do. also i really hope that spike and william find her and save her and that everything works out and theyre happy together. please update as soon as u can, im DYING to read wat happens next. thanx
Author's Response: They'll be fine. I PROMISE you. I wouldn't break up my Trio. I like them way too much for that!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Into the Light
This is great........keep on writing
Author's Response: Thanks! I will, no worries.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Into the Light
I gotta say, I didn't expect to see so many negative comments about this chapter. I talked about the pace with Peter (another reader) but I thought I was impatient (well I'm never patient anyway) so I'm surprised so many people think like me. Maybe we are just all too impatient.
Author's Response: To be fair, I am keeping you on tenterhooks as far as how long Buffy's been there. And that could have a lot to do with it, because it seems like forever with Buffy, which is how I intended it, even though it has NOT been forever. So that could be adding to it.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 08:15 pm Title: Into the Light
So freaky! it that someone who "loves" you would put you though something like that. I don't even want to say anything about the freaky Religionist people.... will be seeing how Spike and William are doing? With Buffy it seems like she's been there for a long time, how long has it been? :)
Author's Response: People do some really interesting but misguided things in the name of love. And you'll find out how long it's been soon.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 07:45 pm Title: Into the Light
I'm still with you. As a reader, I understand where people are coming from when they say that too much angst puts others off from the story... but as a writer, I'd say keep doing what you're doing. This story's been captivating from the beginning, but I must say that while the smut was nice, I'm more interested with the plot and where you're going with this right now. So rock on!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I can understand that I ripped the Spillfy out of their world...but I did warn everyone. And it's going to make everyone stronger, so whatever. It will go ahead as it will.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 07:27 pm Title: Into the Light
Amen to the person who mentioned too much angst in the first place. Hey would someone be ok to write new chapters with a different version ?
Author's Response: What?
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