[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 07:20 pm Title: Into the Light
Well, I for one, am enjoying this fic. I knew something drastic had to happen, what with the way the meeting with Buffy's parents went and their meeting with Xander. Something had to happen. Can't wait for more and don't let anyone's comments get you down. It's your story. Screw everyone else.
Want to see more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And you'll see much more! Trust in the Spillfy! I won't premenantly split them up.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 06:51 pm Title: Into the Light
I'm SO glad I'm not the only one to think it's SLOW!!!!!
Author's Response: And you left ME this comment...why?
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 06:31 pm Title: Into the Light
Poor Buffy. Exactly where is she and how long has she been there? Will Spike and Will find her in time or will it be too late? I hope they find her soon. She's going to be soooo traumatized. I can't wait for them to find her. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Questions you'll find the answer too! And ones that are BIG ones for Buffy (which is why they should be big ones for you!) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 06:10 pm Title: Into the Light
Oh no.. if I understood that A/N correct Buffy is in a group of "self-proclaimed Christians" that try to "deprogram" her because 'she had sinned'. For me that's only a sect but I fear they are good in "deprogramming" (brainwashing). I hope Buffy can resist them (won't believe them) and only pretend "to have been healed". We'll see.
I still wonder if it were her parents that betrayed (= wanted to save) Buffy. Or if it was Riley or all together? Looking forward to the next chapter, hoping that then help is on its way.
Author's Response: Sects are different from cults (at least in the english languages) Cult has a very bad connotation, while sect is more like a division in one larger group. thanks for the review, help's going to come!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:37 pm Title: Into the Light
Too much angst can kill a story.Just hope the readers will stick with you cause I dont think I will. Disappointed
Author's Response: The disappointment apparently goes both ways.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Into the Light
Don't you think you guys are a little unfair ? ok we're all unhappy about the pace but honestly what can we do about it ? At least, we could try to send constructive reviews. A friend of mine (the one who adviced to read this fic) decided to give up because she didnt like the angst (too much according to her). But maybe things will turn out better than we think.
Author's Response: I'm not against pointing out that Spillfy will still be together...and you might find that thier family grows in the end...I'm definitely not going to break up my trio over, well, anything. At all. So I don't understand the death/doom/destruction scenarios.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Into the Light
Oh dear, my inner vixen is currently beating the hell out of Caleb. Ugh! Great chapter. Really well written. Looking forward to seeing how Will and Spike are faring. And I'm really looking forward to what Buffy will do once she's had time to readjust to life outside the hole. Also, I'm interested to know how long she was actually in there for.
Author's Response: Ah, yes, my big secret. I'm glad everyone's asking, because that's what Buffy's asking herself. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Into the Light
wow I thought I was the only one upset about the pace
Author's Response: This comment means absolutely nothing to me...other than to say are you upset about the pace or the characters? Because there's a rather large difference.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Into the Light
Still got me curious as to who has taken Buffy and how soon the boys will find her. Update soon, please
Author's Response: There will be a big break very very soon. Promise!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
I'm so glad the next chapter is up so I can read it too. Off I go
Author's Response: You're lucky! No waiting period!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Into the Light
It was kind of a wickedly delightful surprise to see Caleb-- very interesting. I can't wait to find out how much time has actually past-- obviously enough for her to lose weight, so I'm guessing at least a few days or a week. Great update! I like the way you are alternating between Buffy's experience, and then how Spike and William and reacting. I wonder why Buffy dreamed of Xander and Willow, though. More soon, please. BTW, I wholeheartedly agreee that too much of even a good thing is very, very bad-- thanks for making your feelings known. I really appreciate it. ;)
Author's Response: Well, I'll tell you it's been over a week...but not how much over! And Buffy had already gone through Spike and William and the things that happen in your brain because of sensory deprevation...lets just say it isn't pretty. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Into the Light
Oooookay let's just say it was not what I expected. I was hoping for William-Spike-Buffy reunion
Author's Response: You're a few chapters early ;) But it will happen.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:09 pm Title: Into the Light
Death to the bible thumpers? lol
Author's Response: Seriously. They give real christians a bad name.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Into the Light
If I were you, Spike and William would have found Buffy a long time ago...............................................................
Author's Response: Yeah, if I were actually the one writing the story, Riley never would have been in the picture, but the characters had other ideas.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:47 pm Title: Into the Light
SIGH i guess i will have to wait for spuffy scenes :(
Author's Response: Indeed...unless you hop over to me personal site and read a couple of the stand alone fics that are popping up as soon as i write them...you just have to look for them.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Into the Light
nice chapter! I liked all the religion/cuture "hints" (not sure about the english word) you mentioned.
As for the pace, well I already posted a message on your site about it. I dont agree with the pace either but you're writing the story so it's not like we can really do something about it. I always liked angst in a fic but just a little touch of angst. Still reading and still loving it though!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. And too much sugar rots the teeth; gotta mix some sour and salt in there, otherwise you get too much of a good thing. So consider this the dose of angst for the entire story, including singlets and whatever comes after this period in their lives.
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: Into the Light
Well as you said, you're the writer, you do what you think is good for your story. It doesn't mean we readers have to agree with you though. I personally think it's too slow but you're the boss.
Author's Response: Yep, I am, and I'm not going to compromise the integrity of my story because people are impatient.
Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:33 pm Title: Into the Light
oooooo new chapter. No spuffy though :(((((((((((((
Author's Response: Nope. The Spillfy is on hold ofr the time being. Sadly. I'm actually going through withdrawl myself, so I've started writing one-shot stand alones! You can find those on my personal site if you look hard enough ;)
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:31 pm Title: Into the Light
funny that you mention the pace cause I was talking on aim with two other readers about Twinlets (GREAT fic btw) and we all agreed that the rhythm was too slow concerning Buffy's kidnapping. Angst is good... for a while but not for too long. It's up to you anyway. I just hope you won't lose too much readers cause this story is a special one! Nice chappie btw!
Author's Response: It's been three chapters. That's not long at all, especially considering how long I had them doing pretty much nothing but screwing each other's brains out. Not that lots of sex isn't a bad thing. And the reader's I'm most likely to lose are the ones who NEVER comment, so I don't know they're there in the first place...
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Into the Light
Well, I agree with just about everything you said (in both author's notes) so I guess there's not much for me to say except that I continue to love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you. It's amazing how authors get it and other people just don't. BTW, I'm really enjoying reading your fiction too! Blood Child seems like it's going to be a fun ride!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
Well, at least they're looking, and they don't think she's left them. From Xander's reaction, I'd definitely say he's behind the kidnapping. Would you please please please find some way to kill him off? I'd really appreciate it... :-) Poor Spike and Will, they're so distraught! and poor Buffy!!!
Author's Response: Of course they don't! Spillfy love! :) As for Xander...I'll work on it. Maybe we can have a super great" what would happen if..." chapter. Thanks for the reviews.
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2006 - 05:10 am Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
Ah, poor Spike and Will... they think Buffy has a surprise for them. It won't be what they are expecting..
No, not easy for them. And nobody of their friends knows anything. The only good (to say so) they (Gunn at last) noticed how less Xander cares. Maybe he knows more...
Looking forward to more (as always)
Author's Response: :D Hopefully, I'll not disappoint! Thanks for the supportive reviews!
[Report This]Date: 11/24/2006 - 01:25 am Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
OMG STUPID ASS XANDER, I HOPE HE ROTS IN HELL!!!! i think that he knows abotu wats happening to buffy and that he had something to do with her getting taking. i love this story and am so happy u updated. i really i hope that will and spike fine her and that it doesnt take to long. also i hope that shes ok and that everything works out well. please update as soon as u can, I CANT wait to read more and see wat happens in the next chapter. thanx
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review! I'm really glad everyone's been following this story; warms my heart.
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
What a nice way to end a day full of turkey... a Twinlet update! All I have to say is that Xander better not have had anything to do with Buffy's kidnapping. Bad enough he took the news and responded like an ass (typical). But so help him if he is in cahoots with those fanatical people. Great update.
Author's Response: Merci. And I'll send him a memo about how you feel.
[Report This]Date: 11/23/2006 - 09:56 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
good update
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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