

Date: 11/23/2006 - 09:11 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
AHHHHHHH!!!! They have to get her back and totally kick creepy guy's ass!!!! Can't wait for the next Chap.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'll have that chapter up soon!

Date: 11/23/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
How are they going to find Buffy? Updaet soon please!
Happy Thanksgiving!
Author's Response: Just have faith in the Spillfy! That's all I can say.

Date: 11/23/2006 - 06:54 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
Xander is a jerk. This is serious! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Merci!

Date: 11/23/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
Buffy is missing the twins are practically hysterical and all you can say is happy turkeyday?! Hmph. *wink* Great chapter. I feel so bad for them. This is a very exciting twist in the story and I'm on the edge of my seat for more. Happy thanksgiving to all you people who celebrate it. Us Australians will just sit back and wait till Christmas. : )
Author's Response: They gave Buffy extra gruel on account of Thanksgiving? That's the only peace offering I have ;) I'm sure I'll come up with some Random Austrailian holiday to congratulate you all on! lol Thanks for the review.

Date: 11/23/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
Grrr.... I hope Xander gets eaten by wild animals......
Author's Response: ha, there's an idea I hadn't considered... :D

Date: 11/23/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: Something's Rotten in Denmark...
This is gripping. I am a little confused as regards time, but perhaps it will be come clear as things progress. Besides Buffy is not only in a situation that would petrify the hardiest of beings, she is also beiing drugged; that's got to mess with your body clock yet more.
Poor Will and Spike; their plans of an intimate evening turning to horror as realisation dawns.
Well done. I'm certainly looking forward to more.
Author's Response: No, they're not on the same time line. Buffy's definitely been there for longer than a night. It should become fairly clear when their timelines begin to mesh...because Spike's and Will's will jump forward. (There's only so much waiting angst I can write...and deal with myself ;) )

Date: 11/22/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
i hope that her guys find her soon and that her captures gett lots of time for this
great fic
great chap
cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :)

Date: 11/22/2006 - 01:39 am Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
*shudder* That is one hell of an experience... I would absolutely HATE being in a situation like that. Poor Buffy! This method of torture is meant to drive its captive insane - I thought before these people would only try to convince her otherwise, but never this... this method is so barbaric and cruel.
Excellent chapter... it was intense and I love it. I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: It's not really meant for insanity (though it could easily go that way) but more to disorient; it's more about loosing track of time and eventually convincing yourself there's no hope. But it's not fun. Thanks for sticking with it.

Date: 11/22/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
good update
Author's Response: What thank you! Love your kind words

Date: 11/21/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
The plot twist is very, very disturbing & distressing. This isn't a flame--I'm sure you intentionally set out for some major angst, and you have achieved it. Your words do an excellent job to paint a vivid picture, even though you are describing a completely dark room. It seems pretty clear that her captures were religious zealots, based on the previous chapter. I respect other people's beliefs and opinions, and I respectfully ask that you consider other people's beliefs, also. As a Christian, I always cringe when Christians are portrayed in a horrendous light. But the reality is, anything taken to extreme is going too far. It will certainly be interesting to see where Will and Spike take it from here-- I like Buffy's ponderings about if they think she's left them, and would they move on. I can't wait until she sees how fiercely protective they are of the ones they love! I think you know I'm a big fan of all of your works, so please consider my comments in light of that fact. Looking forward to reading the next chapter in this interesting twist which I didn't see coming. Hoping you'll also post more Haven soon. Cheers!
Author's Response: I always consider other's beliefes when I do anything. This isn't about christianity; it's about extermism and making judgments about others. It wouldn't exactly work if Buffy was kidnapped by Muslim extermists, ya know? And when people hate, they usually need to find something to justify their hate...because they know it's wrong.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
OMFG WAT THE HELL!!!!! WHO ARETHESE PEOPLE AND WAT ARE THEY DOING TO HER. i love this story so much and am SOOOOO happy u updated. i cant believe wat theyre doing to her and i really hope that spike and will find her soon and kill who ever did this. also i hope that everything works out well and that spike and will dont give on finding buffy. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next. thanx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!

Date: 11/21/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
great job on this part!!
Hey guys, chapter 20 is here!
http://ebontier.tripod.com/twinlets4.html#20
Author's Response: lol, thanks. And I see you've found my personal site, that's always a bit ahead of this one...

Date: 11/21/2006 - 07:51 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Please tell me that you'll update soon and not leave me hanging. I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Well. I honestly can't help myself. As soon as I get the next chapter written, it'll be up.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 07:37 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
*whimpers and hides* I hope there's a happy ending...
Author's Response: Have faith in the Spuffy. Be strong with the Spuffy!

Date: 11/21/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Wtf? What are they trying to do to her? This is crazy! I like but its so crazy.....
Author's Response: It is. And I think you'll get the idea soon. But it'll be an interesting crazy, I hope. And very different than anything else out there..

Date: 11/21/2006 - 06:39 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Oh my gosh. Where is Buffy? Who's taken her and how long has she been there? Is she going to be okay? What are Will and Spike doing? They must have noticed her gone already! I can't wait to see how this goes! Update soon please!
Author's Response: My head's spinning with the questions! But I have them all answered, so...keep reading!

Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
You really did a great job on this chapter. Now I'm dying to know how Spike and Will are faring.
Author's Response: Thank you. It's rewarding to know , and I appreciate your kind words!

Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:29 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Well I am curious as to who is doing this but I missed my twins in this chapter. I hope they are worrying about their Buffy.
Author's Response: Next chapter, I promise.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:23 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Your quote distracted me ;-)
I thought first they would Buffy drug to the food. Can be the smell ("sickly sweetness") too.
But she can see, right? It was only dark I guess but if she would be blind she wouldn't see the food.
I really hope Buffy won't give up now!
And I hope even more that anybody saw something or will brag about it *sigh*
If she stays too long she'll lose her hope.
Anyway still loved the update :)
Author's Response: They did drug the food; they also used the vents. And if you've ever been in total darkness, you ARE blind.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
i liked how you dealt with buffy's reaction at being abducted. this is a sad truth, but almost always the worst side of being kidnapped isn't the physical one... they can starve you, drug you, leave you alone in the dark for ages or even beat you. Still, nothing broken you as the certainty your loved ones have, somehow, forget you.
do u think i can love this chapter... and hate a little bit the author? really not much luv, i promise! ;D
Author's Response: Yep. What we come up with in our minds is always scarier than the reality.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 05:06 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
I HAVE to read Spike and Will's reaction. Really good chapter! I loved it. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: It's going to be bumpy. But I'm glad you're enjoying this.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: Idle Hands
well... maybe "hate" is a bit strong but... seriously, girl! after all that smuttyness, you're giving me a heart attack!
i'm thinking "mum and daddy dearest" now... (when i saw them i thought they were going to put her in an asylum... Arkham maybe? lol)
i'm almost glad i missed an update, or i'd have died waiting! (and that's the only reason i don't hate u so much!)
;P
*thow herself on the 19 chap in a hurry*
Author's Response: hahaha. Well thanks. And all will be explained; I feel like the all-knowing shaman at the moment. MUWAHAHA

Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Wow. This is seriously intense. What are they doing to her? How long has she been in there? Please let Spike and Will find her!!!
Author's Response: So many questions, so many answers...just in future chapters.

Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:41 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
Love the angst, love the plot!! A good story wouldn't be complete without a good touch of angst imo! Poor Buffy, I really felt bad for her, she must have been locked for days now, I wonder who did this, I bet this stupid Xander and her parents has something to do with it. I cant wait to see the next part. I dont hate you for this 'cliffhanger' but I will if you don't update soon lol (jk) ;) Great job on this chapter! Just a question about the plot, will the twins find her soon or will it be only in a few chapters ?
Author's Response: haha, duly noted; no long times without updates! You'll have to read to find out what the plot has in store... ;)

Date: 11/21/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Beauty in the Breakdown
I don't hate you at all. I've just read this along with the prequel and found it to be a pleasantly fluffy yet steamy distraction. Now it's turned sinister and I adore it!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for sticking with me, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy.