[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 12:57 pm Title: Ex-Factor
Who's the sick, twisted perv now Riley? What a wanker. At least he recognized that Buffy never sounded that satisfied with him so I guess he has some brains. So is Riley cruzing for a set of twinlets himself? Maybe a guy and a girl set? Yeah, I think that's what he needs to totally understand why Buffy prefers her sweet twinlet roommates to him! Way to go the hotness. More please!
Author's Response: Ha, Riley's actually gay, but he lacks the inner resources to actually BE gay. Takes a strong person in this society, you know? Just kidding, I haven't actually thought of when or if Riley will continue to be in this story. But we shall see. Thanks for your comments.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 - 12:11 pm Title: Ex-Factor
I actually wasn't expecting Riley. I just love how Buffy, Spike, and William stuck it to him! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a bad idea to take on those three; you're already outnumbered, and who's going to be Will, Spike, AND Buffy in a fight?
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:01 am Title: Coming Together
well... i think it could be a possibility. But if joan of arc faced death because she heard voices... i know i can stand a rough time in morality's sake!
(and i am not thinking about hot, mind-blowing sex... i swear, i'm not)
Author's Response: hahahahaha. Thanks, I needed that!!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:30 am Title: Coming Together
Well if you have a LJ it's not under the name of 'Xela' or I would have add you already ;-). I'm German and I never heard the word 'kip'. Thanks to the Internet you can find all the definitions or that there are none *gg*. I'm sad to hear that you didn't find a beta there that did return your stuff too.
*gg* Spike and William were a bit too much for Buffy's ability to speak ;-)
Hot chapter :) I'm glad Buffy feels connected to them both and intend to make their relationship work, her 'MINE' statement. ~ And I don't think it was weak. It was more for them to find out they really want to be together. And it was still hot :)
Author's Response: And hey, kip is just one of THOSE words...I guess. it's under Aleekza. lol Thanks for your continued support!!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 05:05 pm Title: Coming Together
Enjoying it so far.
Don't know if you or anyone else has noticed, but Buffy always reaches for or kisses or starts sex with Spike first and THEN Will joins in. Is that just me seeing that? If she really does do this then is this going to cause a problem at some point? Just wondering.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for the initiating, there's something to it and there's osmething not. You'll just have to read more to see what it is :D
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: Coming Together
I found the chapter lovely. Now I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop. What's Xander gonna pull?
Author's Response: Let's just say that Xander is a massive ass...
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 01:26 pm Title: Coming Together
okay... i changed my mind. This is sick. and perverted... and totally selfish! I'm so envio... ahem, shocked by her behavior!
i can come to term with buffy/spike... soulmates, and destiny, and blah blah blah. Buffy/william... that's a nice alternative, it offers different scenarios... But buffy & spike & william? i am against it! it's immoral! she can't have both of them! she should behave like a good girl... choose one and give the other my address so that i can confort and redeem him!
Author's Response: I think this is one of my favorite reviews ever. But I think Buffy would track you down and beat the crap out of you. Just a thought...
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 11:33 am Title: Coming Together
That was defintiltly not a weak chapter at all. You showed so much emotion and love in this chapter it was great. can't wait to find out what the dangerous look was between will and spike.
Author's Response: :) Glad the emotion came through...and that look will be addressed
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 11:13 am Title: Coming Together
Not weak, HOT. Very Hot. K, cold shower now.
Author's Response: Ha, thanks, and save some cold water for me!!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 11:11 am Title: Coming Together
Weak? NO WAY! I love this story..Like I said before..You are touching on new territory here, and I think you are a brave author for doing so. I imagine there are a few people who will not read this simply because of the "taboo" subjects that this touches on. SO I say..BRAVO my dear, and carry on! lol
Author's Response: Well thank you. I must admit, I'm having way more fun than I should writing this... But your support is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 11:09 am Title: Coming Together
Absolutely loved it! Looking forward for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:31 am Title: Coming Together
Good god that was hot! Update soon, please?
Author's Response: Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 08:47 am Title: Part III
Oh I love this series of ficlet. I so glad I stumbled across them the other day. There isn't many Spike/William/ Buffy's or as I call them Spuffilliam's out there. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! There needs to be more S/W/B.
[Report This]Date: 08/09/2006 - 08:40 am Title: Coming Together
I didn't think that this chapter was weak by any means. I want to know more about the dangerous look in Spike and WIll's eyes? Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Eh, I dunno, sometimes you write something and it just doesn't sit well with you. But thanks for the comments, that look will be addressed forthwith! :)
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:44 pm Title: Coming Together
Great chapter! The emotion was so intense! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I was going for.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Coming Together
Weak? by whose standards, makes me want to go out and find a set of twins! (LOL) I loved it and thought it just the right amount of physical and emotional Spuffiness! And after I smoke a pack of cigs and have a cold shower..... well, just hurry and post more, cause I would really love to read more of this delightfully smutty, spuffy tale! LOVE IT! Thanks!
Author's Response: Mine, lol. You know...sometimes what you write just seems off, and you just can't fix it. And EVERYONE needs a pair of twins, I'm convinced!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Coming Together
great chapter
Author's Response: merci.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Coming Together
very nice.... :) yep, that about sum's it up!
Author's Response: lol, well thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Fabulous chapter! I'm glad you're going to give this fic some plot instead of just making it a PWP. :D Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2006 - 08:53 pm Title: Coming Clean II
Great chapter! Loved how Willow gave it to Xander!
Author's Response: Willow anger is a scary thing.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 - 08:24 am Title: Coming Clean II
Awe, loved Spike and William defending Buffy! (*cough* I checked kips but got no meaning.. lips? *end cough*) I see.. if Xander likes two girls (or Tara and Willow together), this is okay. But not Buffy and the twins. He's indeed a hypocrite. Awe, Buffy can be really lucky to have them :) Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
And to your A/N: Look here: Betas
There are some LJ communities for people who want a Beta and or sites where to look if you don't find one. Good luck! You don't have a Livejournal? You don't need it for asking a question there but I'm curious.
Author's Response: What, you mean you've never kipped someone?! Shocking. (Just kidding, I corected that, thanks.) And I've tried those resources, but none of the 5 betas I've tried have returned anything I sent them...so I figured I might as well as from a pool of people who are interested in the fic already. And I do have a LJ, browse a few of the communities there too.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 - 07:11 am Title: Coming Clean II
Great story so far! Willow was AWESOME in this chapter!!! The characterization is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Coming Clean II
Loved it! I am really, really (*blushes a bit*) enjoying this fic. I love how Willow defended them and showed Xander his double-standard. Great dance-floor stuff. I kind of got goose-bumps when Spike was thinking how he wanted to mark those two he loved publicly....Hmmm.
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you're enjoying it, enjoy away!!
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 - 04:14 am Title: Coming Clean II
Though there was no real smut...the dancing was definatly very hot..
Willow touched on a good point here! Guys have fantasies all the time about being with twins..But when it's a woman with two guys...well..everyone gets all up in arms about it. BTW..I loved what Willow said to Xander! She is awsome in this fic ; )
Author's Response: Ha, thanks, Willow is rockin' out in this. And it's true, double standards do still exist...but that's why we have fan fiction :D
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2006 - 02:44 am Title: Part I
I love this fic
Author's Response: thanks!
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