

Date: 10/03/2006 - 11:26 pm Title: Spike
And he now has the name. Figures that Angel was involved somehow. A bit more for tomorrow. Time for bed now.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Addictive
Always fun when Angel gets schooled. And love the pair of them "experiencing things" together. Great chapter.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Dizzy
They move fast. The perks of being sixteen I supoose. Great chapter.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Shy guy smile
Having the house to herself... Best present indeed. Awesome chapter.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Hands
“What do you buy one?”
Gotta love men trying to shop for women. And Buffy's crush, love that, too.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 10:47 pm Title: Out for a run
And they meet and the sparks are flynig instantly. I love it. And her mom couldn't have done what I think she did... guess I'll find out next chapter.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: Come back to me
Oh God! That was evil. She better wake up. *exhales* Okay I'm done. Definitely a surprise. ; ) Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: lol itll be spuffy, cross my heart!!!

Date: 10/03/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: Intro.
"he knew there name was something disgusting like ‘I fed my baby to a mongoose’"--Always love the close but not quite right thing. And William turning into Spike, always a fun transition to watch.
Author's Response: lol thanks, hope you keep on enjoying...

Date: 10/03/2006 - 07:48 pm Title: Come back to me
WHAT DID YOU DO????!!!!!!!! LOL. WASN'T EXPECTING THIS BUT LOVED IT ALL THE SAME. PLEASE POST SOON. GREAT JOB
Author's Response: EEEEEKKKKKKKKK im sorry lol, itll be a happy ending i promise

Date: 10/03/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Come back to me
oh pls pls pls let her wake up? im guessing she's in na coma or smthg since it wasnt too clear..but yeah..kind of a pity to not let e story develop further but i cant wait 4 e final chappie!
Author's Response: thanx for not being pissed, and she is in a coma. I was gonna go more into it in the next chapter but added a bit into the one i just posted instead, i didnt think people would be so mad about it lol, i hope the ending cheers everyone up....thanx for the kind words :)

Date: 10/03/2006 - 07:07 pm Title: Come back to me
what the hell???? Was that a new chapter?? Cause if it is, you sooooo need to rewrite it
Author's Response: sorry if it was confusing, i added some stuff in to try and make it more clear, but theres nicer ways to give your opinion without saying it like that.
L.
Date: 10/03/2006 - 06:26 pm Title: Come back to me
sorry but i did not like this! I loved how this story started and this chapter totally came out of no where. sorry but thats my opinion!
Author's Response: no. im glad youre honest and polite about it, its refreshing not to get the burns just cuz you didnt like where i took it :) who knows, maybe youll like the end, i hope so if you keep with it :)

Date: 10/03/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Come back to me
uhm...WTF? Ok I'm not gonna hit you I'll wait for the ending, but it better be good...lol :D
Author's Response: ill try lol, i cant screw around now can i? Not with the maker of the site making with the threats (jkg) ;)
L.

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:52 pm Title: Come back to me
I'm very confused... Hope the epilogue will be better.
Author's Response: i added some stuff to the last chap, it might make it easier....

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:49 pm Title: Come back to me
hmm I'm not sure I understood this chapter. I'm french so I thought it could because of the language but I'm used to read fics in english so I re-read it a few times and I still dont really understand. It's very confusing, I'm not sure what really happened, sorry :/
Author's Response: hey, sorry about the confusion, i added some stuff to the chap if you wanna give it another try, Buffy's in a coma. Has been since the night she sang at the bronze, the rest has been in her mind...
hope that helps a little bit

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:47 pm Title: Come back to me
ugh... not sure about this one, sorry

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Come back to me
loved it, more plz!!!!!!!!

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:42 pm Title: Come back to me
I can't believe Buffy's dead

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:39 pm Title: Come back to me
To say I'm confused is an understatement . Even after rereading it twice I'm still confused . Hopefully the last chapter will clear things up .
Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Come back to me
Sorry but I don't understand what happened here. I think you have to edit it. You left a gap (between them from the last chapter and now; what happened in between?).
Seems as if Spike and Buffy hasn't been together because of her singing.
Was she together with Angel then? Did he (Angel) give her drugs? Did he kill her with something else?
Angel had unseeing eyes but lives; what about Buffy?
What journey did Joyce sent Buffy to?
So Buffy lies in her bed; maybe not dead.
Sorry but his is a very confusing chapter.. maybe the epilogue makes it clearer.
Author's Response: i did lol, there was nothing that happened in between really, its been in her head, shes been in a coma since the night she sang at the bronze....i edited the last chap a little bit but i cant do much more than that. Hopefully the last chap will tie things together for everyone, sorry about my weird writing...

Date: 10/03/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: Hands
*Adds to her fave list* Love it story :)

Date: 10/03/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: Come back to me
Very confusing chappy. I guess I'll hafta to reread the whole thing

Date: 10/03/2006 - 03:44 pm Title: Come back to me
did she get really beat up by angel and somehow sip into a coma ro something???

Date: 10/03/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Come back to me
awww...such a very sad chapter. not gonna lie,there was a tear or two. make it better? maybe? more please!

Date: 10/03/2006 - 03:12 pm Title: Come back to me
huh?? this chapter was confusing... and wth?!?!?1