

Date: 11/03/2006 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
“Just look at them…if they were ten years older, I’d be worried!”
Perfect chapter- this is everything I'm looking for in a nice end-of-a-long-day fanfic right now =) Love it!

Date: 11/03/2006 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so adorable! Exactly what I needed after a long, harsh day :) Besides, it's about time I started to read this one!
I love the brutal honesty you can exibit with kiddie characters. I laughed my socks of at Angel's “I hate Riley, he smells!”- it was so obviously what Angel has always wanted to say! Loved it!
And little buffy and spike are unbelievably cute! I'm sure I'll adore this one!! xxx

Date: 11/03/2006 - 07:27 am Title: chapter 18
OO, when do you update?
I will admit i preferred this story when they were cute toddlers, and in my opinion it would have been a good drabble with them just as toddlers, but i like the way this story is going.
Please update soon
Avid reader!

Date: 11/02/2006 - 12:56 pm Title: chapter 18
This is taking interesting turns. I can't wait for more.

Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: chapter 18
Loved the chapter! A jealous Buffy is always interesting. I look forward to finding out where things go from here.

Date: 11/01/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: chapter 18
Glad to see an update. I was so used to frequent ones that I thought you had given up on us. I can't wait to see some Spuffy action (hint hint) :)

Date: 11/01/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: chapter 18
Wonder what's wrong with William. Great chapter!

Date: 11/01/2006 - 05:40 pm Title: chapter 18
Good to see you updating again :)
And Buffy got jealous of Holly (she is really annoying, Holly I mean).
And not Buffy and William ah well how should I put it? Things are changing? They didn't argue but they weren't okay either.

Date: 11/01/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
While I like the story, it's adorable, I couldn't continue to read it. The punctuation errors drive me friggin' crazy.
I understand when you're writing, you just want to get it out and worry about the small things later, but maybe you should try a beta?
Other than that, your idea is wonderful, and the story is very enjoyable.

Date: 11/01/2006 - 04:20 pm Title: chapter 18
I'm really glad to see this update, since this is one of my favorite fics. Hmm, I hope nothing happens between Will and Holly, loved Buffys name for her :"little-miss-let-me-shove-my-tits-in-your-face"..Hope you update soon again

Date: 11/01/2006 - 11:12 am Title: chapter 18
Uh-oh...looks like Buffy's got an attack of the green-eyed monster! More please, soon!!!

Date: 09/14/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: chapter 17
please update soon. I am really getting into this story.

Date: 08/24/2006 - 03:03 pm Title: chapter 17
Good to see Chad and Marco are clever, trying to find a way out of the gang. ~ Mmmh-hmmm Buffy wants her new friends to believe that she and William are a couple, not brother and sister (well step-siblings, not blood related) because she don't want to get into a relationship. Interesting. :)
How bad for Cordelia that she trusts Angel. She'll be disappointed. He isn't trustworthy. Too bad she didn't see him read her diary. Yeah, she'll regret ever getting together with him.

Date: 08/24/2006 - 11:05 am Title: chapter 17
Cordelia will find herself in a lot of trouble hanging out with Angel! Great chapter!

Date: 08/24/2006 - 11:01 am Title: chapter 17
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE

Date: 08/24/2006 - 04:43 am Title: chapter 17
You're doing a great job of fleshing out Angel's character, he really is a jerk and nothing but trouble. Learning more about him makes me worried about what's gonna happen when Buffy returns home. Good update.

Date: 08/24/2006 - 01:34 am Title: chapter 17
This is good but do you have to spend over half of the chapter on Angel and Cordelia. Really a lot of that stuff can be skipped. What you want to go into detail on is the Spike and Buffy parts. Please please please consider your audience.
Author's Response: Without giving the plot away, i need you to see how Angel and Cordelia's relationship is, to how he reacts to when Buffy gets back from New England. If I'd have left it at he just considers her a 'bang' or a quick shag, then it wouldn't make sense to the plot, so please have patience.
Author's Response: I hope you stick with it, you'll be rewarded!

Date: 08/23/2006 - 07:07 pm Title: chapter 17
Wow...Cordelia has become quite the actress! Update soon please!

Date: 08/19/2006 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter 16
they are so lucky that they met benny...loved the chapter...

Date: 08/19/2006 - 04:52 am Title: Chapter 16
William and Buffy sure were lucky to meet someone as kind and helpful as Benny. I enjoyed the glimpse into William's head, looks like we finally know William's feelings for Buffy are more than just brotherly. I can't wait to see where things go from here. Wonderful chapter!

Date: 08/19/2006 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter 16
I thought, i'll just make myself a sandwich and read the chapter.....i've just had to send out for take-away - and i KNOW i'll get a headache from the MSG, but i just HAD to have a Chinese!!! Hmmmmmmmmm dim sum!!

Date: 08/18/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!

Date: 08/18/2006 - 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 16
Tell the truth: Did you get hungry writing this chapter and the last? *grins* The menu did sound good *gg* And William even met another student. ~ Wow rain and thunder.. a lot of it and now they are out of power. ~ So both did some thinking about the other yet thinking it will be against the law. Well exactly " is my sister / brother " .. but only in the eyes of the law, not blood related. (That should them be able to marry, or?) Awe, they were very lucky! Buffy got a job and the found a place to live. ~ Loved the chapter :) And Buffy hasn't checked why William is feeling so awkward yet. *g*

Date: 08/18/2006 - 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
Loved the chapter! Please update soon!