

Date: 08/08/2006 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 13
I CANNOT wait until Angel gets his due, and I think the train is coming and he is standing on the tracks !!! I am hoping this revenge is so sweet. He has so many bad qualities, and so phony, that I am amazed that Cordelia was so blind, however not for long. I am glad that Buffy is going with William, they are each the half of the other's whole. Love the story, great chapter and thanks

Date: 08/08/2006 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad she's over Angel, ignoring parker and going away with William. I can't wait to see what happens when they're on their own. Update soon please!

Date: 08/07/2006 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm so glad William and Buffy made up. Loved William and Buffy's talk at Luigi’s. Great chapter!

Date: 08/06/2006 - 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
loved the chapter! will william give up his plans? really wanna find out...cant wait for more

Date: 08/06/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
I hope Wiliam doesn't ruin his chance at Harvard and Yale just because of Buffy. That's not very fair. Update soon please!

Date: 08/06/2006 - 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
wow...angel = major ass. love the spuffy moments!
more please :)

Date: 08/06/2006 - 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
its sweet whats going on with buffy and will. and the part where buffy was feeling jealous about will hooking up with the waitress? :] i dont know what is gunna happen....

Date: 08/06/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thanks to Angel cheating on Buffy she broke up. That's good. But first Buffy got busted because she wasn't in school. Not so good. And deep down Buffy fears that she will loose William (even if it didn't prevent her from rebelling and going out with Angel and therefore hurting William). She forgot that Angel has most likely killed James back then. Good to see that Buffy was jealous when the waitress flirted with him. But I wonder what will happen if William can go to Harvard or Yale. ~ Looking forward to the next part :)

Date: 08/06/2006 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
great chapter, hope buffy realizes what she's doing, and that angel is bad news

Date: 08/06/2006 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Angel is such a creep! It figures that he would be the cause of Buffy and William's first big falling out. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter.

Date: 08/06/2006 - 06:36 am Title: Chapter 11
Angel was annoying Buffy because William easn't there... she didn't like it. ~ Well after what I heard from Angel (read) I don't think he's innocent. I think he turned his and James's roles around. ~ What is the matter with Buffy all of a sudden? Going out with Angel? What about William now? She hurt him. This is bad... Things will get very difficult with her and William if she'll continue. And she saw where it let James, being with Angel.

Date: 08/06/2006 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter 10
I thought I had read this chapter but I didn't review. So first ch. 10:
Growing pains indeed. William won't go to the school because Buffy doesn't. Some day they'll have to separate; may it be for school or for work. Yet they'll will still be together :) Awe to both for the gift for their parents :) Aweee but they got some presents in return :))

Date: 08/06/2006 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 11
loved the chapter!!! i still hate angel, he was a jerk when he was little and now he's an ass, keep up the great work, i cant wait for next chap

Date: 08/05/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think your story idea is cute, but where is yoiur punctuation? You seem to aoid using periods and apostophes for the most part. It's weird. Just a thought. :-)

Date: 08/05/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
Uh oh...I hope Buffy doesn't keep hanging out with Angel. He seems like bad news. I hope she doesn't get in any major trouble. Update soon please!

Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter 10
They're so happy! Update soon please!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it. :D

Date: 08/02/2006 - 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 10
loved it...want more of the soon and with many pleases!!! cant wait for more!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 10
so are they keep up this brother/ sister love? im still confused with how its gunna get spuffy. unless it doesnt?

Date: 08/02/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Loved how Buffy just came out with the baby photo comment, typical child droping the adults in it - serves susan right - glad she didn't spoil thing though - more please

Date: 08/02/2006 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 9
I loved the story. I thought it was very good. But there was one part. After the wedding at night, the transition from night to breakfast the next morning wasn't really clear.But other than that., I loved it!

Date: 08/01/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad Susan didn't ruin the wedding. The kids were so cute as usual. Wonderful chapter!

Date: 08/01/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
They guessed right.. Susan is divorced and didn't tell. But the secret is out now.. Buffy did tell it. So Susan knows they know. ~ Loved the wedding! Even Susan couldn't make it worse :) Loved it.. really did.

Date: 08/01/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Update soon please!

Date: 08/01/2006 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9
Good update!