Loved the Chapter.

OH that is cute, It will almost be a shame to see them grow up.

That is sweet I hope nothing stops them form getting him.

Oh it is going to be sad when he has to go back.

I'm really enjoying this story. It gets a little distracting sometimes though, when you use so many non-American expressions (when not spoken by William) or describe school or college according to non-American practices (e.g. going to High School at 11, taking university-specific examinations, etc.) , that I'm often taken aback when I am reminded that they live in California. I am really liking this story and I know this is not an essential part of it. Just wanted to mention it and I hope you are not offended by it.

It was amusing to read because it was so clearly British. All the Americans spoke with British slang and phrases so it was sometimes hard to picture them as there original characters. They had their own strengths, though. I think the subplots with the other characters seemed to just get lost, but that didn't detract from the story because I didn't want to read more about them in the end anyway - but I kept waiting for Angel to be held accountable for his crimes. I liked little Buffy and William, but was glad to see them finally grow up - their escapades became tedious even if their interactions and relationship did not. I enjoyed the side characters and their life in Boston, but I think that some more angst would have added more interest to the story.

Loved the ending! Fantastic story! Can't wait for your next one. :D

It is a great story. thank you for sharing. It was nice they found each other at such a young age and it was true love and respect between them and their parents. So what does your wonderful imagination have in store for us now? I'll be looking for another story from you. Until then have a great summer.

William is clever :) I don't now it that thing that shuts down stolen mobile phones exists but it sounds neat :) (Uh-huh? Wrong medicine.. that one thing that should never happen and yet it does. That's really sad.)
And when their parents are coming they have to tell the truth.... I wonder if they'll tell how much money they have spent *gg*
They took it rather well, their parents. But Buffy said it all along: William is hers :)
Thank you, I loved it very much, enjoyed reading it.

loved it

That was a lovly story...sad to see it has come to an end. You did a great job with this one and I'm curious to see what you'll come up with next.

lovely ending, really liked the way Hank had already checked the legalities of them getting married.
brilliant work

It was meant to be... enjoyed !!