Reviews For Eyes Wide Shut
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Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: first chapter

Wow. Very cool start. Really can't wait to read the rest of this.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:21 pm Title: first chapter

Very very interesting.........looking forward to more of this!

Reviewer: Spikes4Flowers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:11 pm Title: first chapter

Outstanding opening to a story it's not like any other I have seen. I really would like to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 04:07 pm Title: first chapter

This sounds very interesting. Totally unexpected especially the blind part. And I so hope that he didn't do that to himself. *shudders*
It was really nice: a nice beginning with an undercurrent of *something* that put me a bit ill-at-ease (but in the good sense as in "there's something hidden there and I wanna know what/how/why" kind of thing) but still drew me in.
very good job ;-)
mikim

Reviewer: aoife Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:56 pm Title: first chapter

oh wow, i don't think i've ever read a spuffy story anything like this. it sounds brilliant, i can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: Vo6 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: first chapter

He wakes up blind! How wiggie is that and still is drawing ok you have pulled me in hook line and Spuffy sinker. I have to get back to work but please please please add more

Reviewer: RecordBreakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:34 pm Title: first chapter

this is different never seen a Spuffy story like this before please TBC with it it be a shame if a great idea only had one chapter. a good sold opening that really pulls you in.

Reviewer: Calls to me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:32 pm Title: first chapter

I was not expecting the blind part now I'm dying to see where you take this from here. Great writing style can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:30 pm Title: first chapter

Oooooo! This story rocks! Has a great intro I wanna see more!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 03:03 pm Title: first chapter

This is a very interesting and different story. I'm looking forward to more....soon?

As far as not being a 'native speaker' I think you have done very well; there were only a couple of mistakes

Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:59 pm Title: first chapter

wow! that's amazing! i always love it when i read a story so original and out of canon... even for an AU! lol
i wonder if buffy too will have hidden talents...

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: first chapter

simply wow...like really freakin wow...you had me the minute i started reading but the end...wow i love it excellent start...i am dying to read more...guess i'll have to wait..but for now i shall beg you to plz plz plz update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: addielogan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:26 pm Title: first chapter

omg i did not expect that but it was awsome anyway keep it up

Reviewer: Liza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/26/2006 - 02:09 pm Title: first chapter

Interesting beginning, but it was kinda disappointing to find a beginning where I was expecting a finished story. You might want to take the label "completed" off of this story, coz while the writing itself will draw people in, the fact that one comes in expecting a one-shot is likely to upset your readers.

Otherwise it looks good so far, looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Sorry, I already did *blush* thanks for reviewing ;)

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