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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

LOL neat, Buffy's trick, the clothes vanishing thing. :) Sure Spike loves it, he is only a man. And Buffy gets bolder now, trying out what Anya said was possible for her. First time for Buffy experiencing an orgasm firsthand, not secondhand. Yeah, sometimes a little word makes a big difference. I'm glad one misunderstanding is out of the way. *grins* Indeed, Buffy's ability to talk to Spike even if she had her mouth full is need. Too bad she'll loose it when she isn't a muse any longer; at last it is highly probable that it will happen.
*gg* (Buffy asking if she did break Spike)
*nods* Spike is different, he needs Buffy, being near her. I wonder where they'll go from here and what will happen when Buffy's time is up... ~ Till next chapter! Loved it.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

YOU WILL NEVER hear any complaints from me on your posting schedule of more and more and more LOl. I am so happy they worked through this lil bit of angst. I am sure they will work something out, that will settle both thier libidos.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Hot Damn! That was fantastic! Need to run outside and have a smoke after that! Whew! Next, a cold shower I think... yeah, that's the ticket.... I feel better now! So Buffy has made a neat little "discovery" for her unprecedented attraction to Spike. I wonder how far she'll take that idea? More please.

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

It just keeps getting warmer and warmer in here...

I really love this Spike that you've written, how adoring and careful of Buffy he is. And Buffy's innocence contrasts delightfully with her eagerness to perform naughty sexual acts on Spike. I think the is one of the most fun AU parings I've read.

Oh, and Buffy not knowing what balls were are where they're located? And Spike trying to concentrate long enough to give her directions? TOO freaking funny! It's those little touches you put in that make the chapters so believable and real.

Reviewer: stateofmind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 07:05 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

HEY LOVING IT CHICKEN BURGER UPDATE SOON PLEASE I REALLY WANT TO SEE MY HAPPY ENDINGS. :D U CANT SPLIT THEM UP THERE ARE SO HAPPY :D

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved the the yummy Spuffy lovin'! Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

So, a thought popped into my head when I finished this chapter, I thought I'd share it with you... and I quote (myself, lol): It'd be really spiffy if she were to do an epilogue with Spike's poems.

Anyway, that was it. Now that doesn't mean that I want this story to be over so you can write the epilogue by any means, Just sayin' that was my thought.

Along with this being a good chapter. :)

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/20/2006 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

wow. cant' wait for the next chapter. more soon please. i hope everything works out okay

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I just don't know what to think about this.... I mean, they have to end up together. Someone it going to spill about them I'm thinking Anya will....

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

I love the misunderstandings they have because Buffy doesn't speak metaphorically, which is how Spike interprets everything. She seems so innocent because she is so very literal- not quite Anya-like, but almost like the Buffybot. Cute update.

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Well written, enjoyed this chappie very much!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

awww!!!!!!!!!! that was soooo hot! and the little bit at the end was adorable. i really love this story!!! isn't their time together going to be coming to a close soon? i probably shouldn't worry about that right now but i'm just curious as to how this is going to play out once buffy has to leave spike. please post soon. great job.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

"Perhaps the Powers had allowed this attraction between them because it was the best way to inspire Spike."--Hey, whatever rational keeps up this amazing relationship, and I'll deal with it. And a nice little bit of telepathy during oral sex, that would be quite handy. Her innocence is quite endearing. Really looking forward to more.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Loved it!

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Oh so very hot !!! What more can I say ?? Except that we see how Spike gets his inspiration...so what kind of inspiration will he get if things go further??HMMM Thanks

Reviewer: Shauna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Every time I read this story, I'm torn. On the one hand, I really like Buff y as a muse, and I think it'd be neat, although very angsty, to have her remain a muse (and I know you've gotten tons of hell for "too much angst" on your other story). But on the other hand, she and Spike just make each other so happy, and they love each other so much, that I want them to have sex (plus, if they did have sex, it would be hottt; what they've done to this point has already been very hot!). I don't know that I can see her being happy as a muse after investing so much of her heart and her love into Spike. Gah!

This was very, very good! As always.

Reviewer: Nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Dang!! Sweet too.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

LOVE THIS STORY, THANKS

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

liked this chpater, I like to see them happy.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:32 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

This story just makes me smile, and I love that Buffy now has an explanation (excuse, really) not to second guess the attraction any longer. This is sexy and funny and entertaining as all get out.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

You know what's cool about this story?? The angst is definitely out there looming in the future (is she really going to leave?) ... it's not "in our face", forced into each chapter or series of chapters. (So as a reader, I can enjoy each chapter and put the angst into the back of my mind temporarily) l love that each chapter resolves itself and the story is endearing and sweet.

I know that angst is out there looming but I still love each chapter with it's humor, innocence and passion. (whew can you write passion!!!) Such a great story with lovely, unexpected and well received twists and turns.

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

i thought that chapter was romantic, sexy, and quite funny. buffy is sounding like anya in a way it is funny but good.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Steamy.. great update, looking forward for more :-)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

So glad that Spike got his inspiration back. ;-) If only were all so lucky to be so inspired! This story puts a smile on my face. I love the way Buffy is written and they are so sweet together. Is evil Drusilla going to make an appearance?

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