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Reviewer: Nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Damn those pesky rules. Write more soon please.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Spike's response to waking up with Buffy was no surprise, but Buffy's enthusiastic response was. I loved the line: "She'd still be a virgin if he asked her to suck him off, wouldn't she?" It wsa so crude and male is made me laugh.

Buffy's imposed virginity is a hefty stumbling block, but I like the way the attraction is building with no end in sight.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I bet Spike loved to wake up with Buffy by his side. Buffy was too tired (sleepy to notice what was going on. Ah, against the rules. But good to know that 1.: If Buffy wants not to go back (so now it seems the she is doing her job well and doesn't need to fear to be punished) she can decide to get mortal and 2.: she won't die when she does (because she is so old) instead she'll have the rest of her years regarding the age she looks like (at last I did understand it that way). but Spike had no idea what he wanted past her body, and he couldn't rightly ask her to give up everything she was just so he could get his rocks off That's right.. so Spike made the right decision at the moment. So as it seems it will be hard for both of them. Most recent developments? Loved it :) But they have a long way to go if they want to make it work, being together. It won't get easy if they decide to do it.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Seven

ahh!! i love it it. such temptation. so hard to resist. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 05:26 am Title: Chapter Seven

ahh!! i love it it. sure temptation. so hard to resist. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 02:13 am Title: Chapter Seven

Awww, so sweet and yet so sad, but of course, you always provide happy endings, so I'm not worried. ;)

I love Ben & Jerry's (who does, honestly?) but I've never heard of the Phish Food, gonna have to go look for it now... You're bad for my health Addie, lol!

Good chapter. :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter Seven

i don't know how she can resist him!!

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter Seven

aww addie that chapter was sweet yet sad. can't wait to see how this one turns out.

Reviewer: satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2006 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Seven

Oh, god, the tension is enough to kill. You're laying it on real thick, you know that don't you? I love it. The situation is unreal, perfect for these two.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Let's see. An eterninty being a muse for a bunch of stuffy, grumpy, full of themselves men or a night of passion with Spike and turn into a human who could then spend many many nights of passion with Spike? Hard decision... NOT! Think of the bright side Buffy, you could still inspire Spike, never have to return to the file room and have many many many wonderfully erotic moments in his arms - it's a no brainer in my book. More please LOVE THIS TALE!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I just read all seven chapters, and i'm really loving the story! Can't wait to find out what happens next. :D

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Seven

oh, i'm loving them!!!!! lol. this story is developing amazingly. great job. i know at one point these two are gonna say to hell with the rules and break them......don't care how long that's gonna take. it's enough for me to read how close these two are getting with every update. great job. post soon.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Seven

loved the chapter...hmm, lets see being pure or a finishing off life with spike...a battle of wills and yet it appears as if purity can be thrown out the window at any moment..heres to hoping...really wanna see what she'll do..cant wait till next chapter!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Awww, poor Buffy!

LOL...and now, I'm thinking About an Anya who's never had sex. I didn't know she could exist!!

Reviewer: Elanor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 10:19 pm Title: Chapter Seven

You really captured the longing and the tension. I really liked that second kiss -- comfortable and not angsty awkward. Lovely chappie!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Seven

You've yet again managed to entangle lust with love unitl you can't quite tell the two apart anymore. Though I must say that those two do lend themselves to that quite well. And she has an OUT!! :) Okay, so maybe I'm prematurely excited, but I've got to love that little clause there. And that bouncing around in Spike's brain... Well, I just cannot wait for more. I love this one. Update soon!

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 09:46 pm Title: Chapter Seven

I love this story. It is so cute and I just adore Buffy. My favorite lines this chapter:

"He leaned forward, his voice dropping several octaves and taking on a husky quality Buffy couldn't help but tremble from. "It's longing, need, and release all rolled together in an orgasm of words."

By Zeus, Buffy wanted some of that… "

LOL! I got a good chuckle out of that! Thanks for the humor in this. It is delightful.

Reviewer: Carrie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Chapter Seven

this is so great! now that we know that she'd become mortal if she slept with him, we know how much she has to lose. anyway, its spike...i mean, come on! lol. update soon!

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Seven

aww. poor buff......

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Ooooh, the beginning of UST. Yippee! Spike is right, they so can do other things and still keep Buffy a technical virgin. *Looks forward to*

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Seven

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Seven

hmmm, they care for eachother... Yet, both wont voice it. And she is going into his room and sleeping next to him... I don't know what to think.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Of course, out here in fan-land, we would all chuck the ole virginity out the window in a blink of an eye to spend a life time with Spike. BUT since this is your story Addie, I know they have to go through a lot of sorting out of feelings and logistics. It is really getting good ... better and better with each passing chapter. Thanks again for sharing your creativity.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Seven

So Buffy is a virgin, I guess that a muse would be pure and innocent, but then again, as Spike said how can one inspire if they have not felt the emotions ? Poetry can be passionate. I think it is going to get interesting. I think Spike can show her what true passion is, but first he will need to sort out his feelings for her before any steps are taken. He will need to search his heart, and when he does, she will know what is in store for her. Great job and thanks

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Seven

very interesting twist so buffy is a virgin and must give up everything in order to sleep with spike or is it gain everything. how cute............ even more so is the fact that spike thinks she should be with someone more deserving. can't wait for more.

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