

Date: 08/13/2006 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter Two
it si so cute buffy kinda sounds like willow in some parts. but if i may a peice of advice pick up a book on greek mythology it might help you with the consept of a muse. other than that this story is wonderful please update soon.

Date: 08/13/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter One
nice hook . and i think if you were to try poetry again with something you really love it would turn out better than you expected.

Date: 08/11/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
Love it! And I'm looking forward to another update! Any chance there will be some Spuffy bickering? I always find that amusing :)

Date: 08/06/2006 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Two
I can already tell this is going to be a very cute story. Great idea.

Date: 08/05/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter Two
Well, this is indeed a funny one! I couldn't help laughing when Buffy cursed Zeus instead of something else...Very nice detail!
And I'm curious as well...What happened the last time Buffy went to earth? There's something, a Buffy history... I'm excited to find out!
Oh, and by the way...When Spike turned on the Sex Pistols, I knew which time the story takes place in... *slaps her head* ^^

Date: 08/04/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter One
LOL - this could be funny! Buffy is sent by the PTB...I didn't expect a new story like this, and I'm quite surprised - and curious as well. ;)
Shame on me, I didn't get if this takes place in the past or in the present..Spike as a poet confused me a bit, concerning the time, moreover I'm deadly tired, I guess I have to be careful about the hints! lol

Date: 08/04/2006 - 09:14 am Title: Chapter Two
tat is hilarious! lol wondering how he's gonna stand her bubbly-ness.... wating for more.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Two
Still liking it! Where can I get a Spike shaped muse? Sd

Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter One
Oh yeah!! A real live muse? What a great concept. Keep it coming. I love it so far.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter Two
"Uh, that's okay. I've never been a huge fan of lyre music."
Love that, they really are quite the pair. He'll show her all kinds of wonderful things about this world and she'll connect with his inner self. Can't wait for more.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter One
An interesting idea, though I'm sure Buffy is a very sufficient muse. Wonder what he'll find when he comes to. Great beginning.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:14 pm Title: Chapter Two
I like it, it's intereeeesting. Although, and please dont kill me for saying this i have good intentions lol, Buffy sounds a little unlike herself, evena as a muse. Kind of, uhm, Harmony peppiness to her. But I still really liek it please continue :P
Author's Response: First off, Harmony is an idiot. Buffy is not. Honestly, I was going for a little more of a Buffyboy-like enthusiasm. Also, it's the second chapter--give me some time to develop the characterization.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oh nifty... Buffy can get the things Spike needs even scotch *gg* and is very strong. And can do a lot of things even change his music. ~ This one is really fun to read. It's good after the angst in other stories. And it seems the fun will last for some time. Spike wasn't willing (able) to write yet. Buffy has to try better :) (And I really love this one.)

Date: 08/03/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter Two
I can see why you're having fun writing this. I had my doubts about the premise, but so far it's adorable! More soon, I hope?

Date: 08/03/2006 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter Two
Very cute and funny...Buffybot like. Can't wait to see what the incident was that got her sent to the file room.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Two
really got the impression of buffy being like the buffy bot from the show while reading this. she's all cheery and wide smiles with spike. loved it. really looking forward to the next update.

Date: 08/03/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter Two
Love the overall fun tone of this chapter! Buffy is chirpy, optimistic, cheery... irritating (but in a good way!) to Spike. I keep laughing at the banter they have between them, and at Spike's reactions. Keep going, love it!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Two
Very much like the extremely Perky-Buffy-Muse and I love Spike thinking he's off his rocker! I also agree with the fun-ness of this so far. Can't wait for more. Keep it going! It's GREAT! (Oh, I especially liked the part where Buffy offered to take off her toga to help inspire Spike - kinda surprised he didn't take her up on it though - very un-spikelike, but then, he did just meet what he thinks is a hallucination so, pretty understandable too).
Author's Response: Under normal circumstances, he probably would have, but at the moment, he's a bit weirded out by the whole thing. lol Thanks for the review!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Two
Its just too good! Something tells me that Buffy did something bad the last time she was down on earth. LOL

Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
haha, i love buffy in this fic. great chapter!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Two
i really like this story idea, cant wait for more!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Two
but I'm very drunk, you're very shiny, and I think I need to sleep this off."
still snickering over this line LOL
classic!

Date: 08/02/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: Chapter Two
oh this is going to be great. I love it all already. Do you want me naked that sometimes helps? Oh gods I am sure the restraint there was intense LOL. Awesome chapter keep them coming. I am looking forward to how the muse persuades him.

Date: 08/02/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Two
So funny! I love how Buffy doesn't really know things about Earth. Shoud make for some very amusing situations. ;D

Date: 08/02/2006 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
Funny. Keep up the great work.