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Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 01:18 am Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

very evil cliffhanger

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

I'm seriously suspicious of Riley now but Brat, you have a way of surprising everyone! :D First you led us to believe that Riley is indeed the masked man then you have this chapter and Riley was in the car. Huh. So unpredictable - and I'm loving it! More please!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

OMG I WONDER WHOSE UNDER THE MASK AND WHERE RILEY IS TAKING BUFFY. i still think riley has something to do with the murders and that the mask dude was a ploy for spike to get buffy away from him. i LOVE this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really hope that buffy is okay and that riley doesnt hurt her. also i hope everything works out and that spike and buffy end up happily together. please update as soon as u can, im dying to see whose under the mask and where rileys taking buffy. thanx

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

oh, this is soooooo not good!!!!!!!! riley is bad news. i can feel it and i think buffy just followed him into a trap. spike is gonna loose it!!!!!!! i want him to loose it!!! riley seriously needs his ass kicked!!!! loved it!! wonder who the masked wonder is. more please!!!!!!!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Buffy, don't listen to stupid Riley, he's up to no good.

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Let's Work Together

Wonderful chapter! I'm very curious and suspicious about Riley now, I feel he might be behind all this somehow. Will keep on reading tomorrow, I'm too tired to write coherent reviews now. ;)

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Rain on My Parade

Uh-oh, not sure if that's good or bad. The kiss was amazing though, hope they can clear the air soon about that. ;)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Uh huh...Riley was too easy a choice.

Okay, I have a sick thought...I think it's Angel. I think Angel has been trying to scare Buffy, that he realized that she's too vulnerable after all....but the real point is that he killed Parker and Gwen because he found out they were betraying his sister. And no one would ever suspect the brother that's out of town...but really, who else do we know that's a big guy, huh?
Not even sure he wanted to hurt Spike...not really.

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Make the Nightmares Go Away

Oh, cool change of POVs here! I loved to find out what Buffy is feeling regarding Spike. :D

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Fortress of Solitude

*lol* Poor Spikey, all confused and trying not to fall for Buffy, I don't think he'd succeed though. ;) I'm loving that you're writing in his POV, very neat. :D

Reviewer: Mari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Five: Oh, What a Beautiful Morning

Hee! I wonder how he's going to get out of that. I'm loving this story, honey, I'll try my best to catch up with it tonight. :D

Reviewer: smg fan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Keep going, its good so far. By the way you might want to fic this sentence "The masked man was stronger, but Spike was stronger and ..."

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Got a bad feeling about this. Could Riley have a partner?? Great chapter!!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Uh oh.....Riley's taken Buffy! I hope she's okay! Can't wait to see what happens when Spike finds her gone! I wonder who the masked man was though! Update soon please!

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

I smell kidnapping! Great chapter!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

quite freaked out about this one. I don't know which way is up. But I am waiting to find out.

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

Goddamn Riley. Ugh! Looking forward to see what happnes next.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

So Riley was outside when the shot was made. And will got through the garage (where Buffy is?)
Uh-huh.. the man that got shot wasn't Riley because he found Buffy now. I hope for Buffy that Spike is wrong; if not she is in very very deep trouble now. Oh no, very wrong! Buffy is going with him. Maybe that was Riley's plan from the begin.
And let me tell you: This cliffhanger is as evil as the one before was :)

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One: Murderer, Murderer, Murderer!

Dum dum dummmmm! Who is the maked man? Is Spike right?

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

hmm why do I have the feeling that Riley is one of the bad guys...
Great update, cant wait to see how the cliffhanger is gonna turn out!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

ooo the suspense!!! cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

god how dumb can she be? no way in hell would i leave without knowing spike was all right.

Reviewer: Ki'mmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

OK, that chapter whipped me right out of my usual hoping for Spuffy lovin' and put me into the murder mystery action !! (Which is a feat in itself since I never really cared about the murder ... hee hee)

Gotta hand it to you, that chapter was very cleverly written ... my mind was all over the place (because you led it all over the place). First I'm thinking it's Riley, then I'm thinking it's Angel (please don't let it be Angel) then I'm thinking it's someone working WITH Riley and now we have a kidnapping going on. GADS, I am on the edge of my seat here ... great job Jen!!!!

Reviewer: stateofmind Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter Thirty two:Showdown

ok thats just evil you cant leave it there update PDQ please :D

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-One: Murderer, Murderer, Murderer!

AAAARRRGGHHHH I just started to read this story today and I didn't realize it was a WIP I thought it was finsihed and now I'm dying to read the rest. It's damn good please update soon. !

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