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Date: 09/17/2006 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage

Yes- she's exactly the kind of 'complication' that he DOES need, when will silly Spike learn?

Fab again!

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

The poor girl. All she needs is a little Spike-lovin' :] Loving this completely!

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again

Awwh, this is going in a nice direction :]

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 09:53 am Title: Chapter One: Are you deaf?

Ooooh, nice :] I like this- though it looks like it'll be an angstey journey. xx

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Buffy is indeed jealous.. so Spike is testing her? To know if she is jealous? Lol and she told him otherwise. I wonder if he guessed right that she was jealous. Oh and not to know (or to know that Spike was with Faith) is eating away at her. Buffy sensed that Spike has put up a wall again? Maybe because he thinks he isn't worthy; hopefully they'll talk about that. And Spike noticed her to be quiet and started asking questions, yet he didn't get answers (he liked) even if he told her he never was with Faith. So Faith noticed Finn getting his hands dirty. That (hanging with thugs) and the amount of money he has now are not a good sign for a righteous cop. ~ Till next part!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

I'm glad the meeting with Faith went well. I enjoyed learning the new info about Riley. Great chapter!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

I KNEW IT!!!! **jumps with Gles** I just knew it :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Loved it.

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 04:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Sounds like Finn is up to no good. Which makes me question why he left her at the club to be attacked, was he the one who attacked her, etc. I'm even wondering if the gift was truly a peace offering or not. As for the gams-- poor Spike. Looks like by playing his fear of rejection too close to the vest, and by being too closed off, he won't be getting that crumb of jealousy from Buffy any time soon. Wonder what the mood will be like when they go back to the house? Great updated. Looking forward to more, please.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Unt Zee plot tickens ... I cannot for the life of me figure out what could possible be in store for these two ... although I have faith that you are truly a Spuffy girl at heart and really want these two together and not playing games.

I'm crossing my fingers and toes that the angst comes from outside sources ... jobs, Riley, her parents, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera.

Can we have another chapter of them in the sack please ... then on to the mystery. (Yes, I am shamelessly and bluntly begging for romance) Feel free to ignore me ... although I LOVE your writing/plots/creativity and how dang hard you work. Thanks Brat!!!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 03:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Hmmmmm


spuf

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Date: 09/17/2006 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Good chapter. :)

Reviewer: spikestheman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

OOHHH...knew that Riley was a fink....you go Spike and rat the bastard out...god I'm sounding like a cop...great chapter as always Brat:)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 03:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

GOD DAMNITT!!!! THEYRE PLAYING GALMES WITH EACH TOHER. i dont see why spike cant just admit his feeling and get into a relationship with buffy and that buffy should out right ask him what the hell hes up to. i love this story and am happy u updated. also i wonder wat riley was doing seein those thugs and i think that he might be the killer. i really hope spike and buffy get serious and start a relationship and that theyre happy. also i hope everything works out and they catch the killer before anyone gets hurt. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 02:47 am Title: Chapter One: Are you deaf?

ROFL. Seriously, I didn't even guess with the title and all, hilarious. Great ending line.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

great update and cant wait to find out more about riley

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 02:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty seven: The Ones You Least Expect

Hmmmm...I thought Riley was a bad guy! What's gonna happen to Spike and Buffy's realationship? Update soon please!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

Glad Buffy didn't accept the gift from Riley. Great chapter!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

great chapter...the plot thickens!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

LOL! As soon as I saw the line, "she has her ear to the ground if you know what I mean" I knew exactly who Faith was. ; ) That is so funny. *grins* I wonder what Buffy's reaction is going to be. Maybe she'll get to see what jealously feels like. Can't wait.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 11:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

I feel Spike getting in to trouble again!?!?

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

Brillant! I'm on the edge of my seat - but I think I know how the killer is

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

So maybe the other reviewer was right and Riley is the murderer; and even if he isn't, he isn't kosher. As a normal cop he shouldn't have the money to buy expensive presents. Well Spike explain his feelings that Riley's action had caused. And even if he didn't tell her yet that he loves her he has strong feeling. ~ And now Buffy is jealous :) So next chapter we see Faith.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty -six: Hot Under the Collar

Oh, that's going to go well...

And I haven't felt Riley was trustworthy this whole story. Something fishy there.

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