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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 04:45 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Well at last Buffy knows a bit more why she went out with Riley. And I'm not mad to see that she thinks they'll never have more than friendship. And Spike was really jealous... Good though that Buffy had a good time dancing. Bad? That the murder was there and nobody noticed. Riley didn't look out for her because he wasn't on duty. Too bad for Buffy. I wonder if Spike would have been so lazy too because it was a date. Till next chapter!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 04:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Open Mouth, Change Foot

Oh yeah.. Buffy didn't like this thinking, using Anya to get her out of his system. And now she is doing what he wanted: all businesslike. I wonder if he'll like that more. Oh no.. and now Buffy is even going out with Riley? Not a good choice how he acted towards her before. And how much does saying yes to a date with Riley has to do with not to be wanted enough from Spike? *on to the next chapter*

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

I could be wrong but I'm starting to think that Riley could be the murderer or at least he's helping him in his job... Am I right? :)
Great chapter, can't wait to find out what's next.

Reviewer: mikim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh My GOD! IT's RILEY! Isn't it? It is, right? Oh gooooood gooooooood one! For some time I thought it would be Angel but now I know it's Riley! It is, Riley, right? Oh goood gooooooood one! I'm jumping on my couch here!
xxx
mikim

Reviewer: McChick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Ohhh This chapter was soooo good! Cannot wait for the next one and to see how Spike will react when he finds out Buffy got hurt when she was with Riley!!! Excellent work!

-Ashley-

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Now that was scary for Buffy.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 05:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh no! Poor Buffy. And although I generally hate Riley, this one isn't too bad. Saying that, I hope Spike doesn't hurt him to much. ; ) Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 02:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Whoa! What a scary unexpected twist at the end of the chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Wonderful update.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

spike n angel is so gonna have riley's head........ love the update !!!!!

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

oh, you have GOT to post soon!!!! loved it soooooo much. spike is gonna freak out and riley is gonna feel so guilty. this is good. who was that man in the mask??? i can't even guess of who it was but i'm guessing that it's gonna be someone that we're not going to expect. great job (as always) post soon.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 12:39 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

OK not what i was expecting, but WOW it packed a punch

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh, creepy! Nothing worse than seeing something in the mirror behind you! That was good-- wonder if Riley's "buddy" is the murderer? Could our not so innocent bumbling boy wonder be in cahoots with the baddies? Hopefully, Buffy will let Spike keep the nightmares at bay! ;)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

I'm starting to wonder is Riley helping the murderer or is he the murderer? I know he has to be one or the other. Especially since the chief really didn't release him and Gunn yet according to Spike and if I remember correctly.the reason he asked Buffy on a date was because he was about to leave. I hope Buffy gets back to Spike safely. I'm assuming those girls are going to find her passed out and call the police or something? Update soon please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh Boy, is Spike gonna be pissed off when he finds out that Riely wasn't constantly at Buffy's side. Date or no date, she's still in danger and he should of checked the restroom before she went in and stood guard at the door until she she came out! Not a very cop-like thing to do leaving her to wander and dance about by herself. Oh well. Great couple of chaps, can't wait for more and to find out Spike's reaction (and Angels) to this particular evening.

Reviewer: Gretchen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Great story. Can't wait to read more. Hope ya update soon.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 10:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Yikes! How scary is that!

Really good chapter!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

OMG I WONDER WHO WAS UNDER THE MASK!!!!!!! i cant believe that she was attacked, i really hope she wasnt imagining it and that she can tell spike who it was. in love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really hope that riley finds her and that wen spike finds out that she was attacked he realizes wat she means to him. also i hope that they get closer and start a relationship. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more. thanx

Reviewer: spufettesspufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh Brat! Buffy needs Spike!

I'm scared now and I hope Spike comes to the recue...kind of.

Frankly, he's being an ass here but then, what guy isn't! LOL!


spuf

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

OKay, now you see...I sorta kinda maybe thought that somethign a little like that would happen--but you definitely had it happen in a much better way than I cuold have thought up.....and great job explaining her date with Riley :) And Spike.....yes Spike....we'll just have to see what he's done/going to do, won't we?

Reviewer: cinnamon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

Oh. My. God.

I loved it! Keep it coming, Spike is sooo going to go off on on at Riley for letting her alone for so long. Really great chapter

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One: Layering

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: vs in nj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 07:39 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Open Mouth, Change Foot

Oh no,...Spike is going to be so jealous. Riley is going to get his ass kicked.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Open Mouth, Change Foot

Spike was a complete idiot and now Riley's in the picture! Good chapter!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 03:12 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Open Mouth, Change Foot

Oh boy... This isn't going to sit well with Spike. :)
Great update. More please? :D

Reviewer: Amanda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/09/2006 - 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Open Mouth, Change Foot

Hahahaha! Spike is going to have a shit fit.

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