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Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 09:06 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage

loved it. great job. please post soon. this is a mystery. i really hope they catch whoever is doing this.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage

That was kinda harsh of him! Update soon please!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 08:59 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage

THANKS FOR SUCH A RAPID update. I check for updates on my favorite stories at least once a day ... THANKS ... you never disappoint!!!! (Drives me nuts when someone updates once every few weeks or less or even abandons a story) Any how ...

This story is getting better and better by the sentence. Love how the tension as well as the understanding of each other is building.

Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter Four: Here's my Baggage

And another speedy update. I feel so spoiled! Great chapter by the way. :) We get more on Buffy's situation and Spike is already falling for her. I love it. Great chapter.
-Alyx

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 06:23 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

I'm hooked ... this is one cool fiction and such great twists already. It's gonna be a fun ride and I love that you update so frequently ... makes my day!!!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 06:22 pm Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again

Now isn't this a totally unique and refrehing Buffy character that you came up with. You definitely have one active and awesome imagination. So glad that you are sharing the fruits of it with us.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: Chapter One: Are you deaf?

YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Another Brat fiction!!! Too cool!!

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

I like the way the story is unfolding.....

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

In a way lucky for Spike that Buffy like to clean when she gets nervous *gg* Oh, and Spike is on/off with Anya.. I wonder if she thinks she must visit him when he doesn't answer the phone. Oh tragic: Parker was Buffy's boyfriend and he was killed when he was cheating on her? No I won't say something about sins and a revengeful God now... but it came to my mind. I wonder whom Parker did piss off enough to kill him. Cheating too? Taking money? Hearing something he shouldn't? Looking forward to read more of this :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 01:02 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 07:36 am Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Bam! Blunt Buffy. Liked how you threw Anya into the mix. Update soon!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2006 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Well, looks like Buffy still has crap taste in men! LOL. I wonder how Spike will handle his sobbing charge? A great update-- you're doing a good job of advancing character through mundane, everyday actions.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 11:09 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

oh wow. never thought that her boyfriend would be parker. he was always a dick on the show. anyway, i'm just wondering if buffy is ever going to be a suspect in this. i mean, she was the only one in the bar right? besides parker and gwen? is that going to be question in this fic? just curious is all. loved it great job. post soon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 10:06 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Aww, Poor Buffy. So now it's comforting snuggley hugs time? (Well, wet shaking hiccuppy red-runny-nose time for Spike probably). More please.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Wow...ouch. Poor thing.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

so didnt expect her to have witnessed the murders that way...that must've been a bummer..loved the chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

I enjoyed learning more about the crime, and Spike's personal life. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: effection Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

yknow what would be great? if buffy was just pretending to be deaf and it was her who shot her boyfriend and best friend. it'd be pretty bad-ass if she turned out to be the villainess through all her vulnerability.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Wow....I didn't expect that story! I can't wait to see what else comes next! Update soon please!!!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

i just read the first 3 chapters, and i really like this story! i can't wait 'till there's more!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

I love cleaning Spike. Please send him over.

Reviewer: Stephanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Wow, what an interesting twist. I certainly wasn't expect her to witness THAT! How horrible, although, maybe them getting shot in the head was revenge for the cheating (sorry, I'm anti-man at the moment...lol). I have to tell you, the thought of Spike and Anya together naked, makes me want to hurl, but I know that he won't be with her for long...uh, right? Just kidding. Great chapter. I can't wait for more. Update soon, please

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

interesting twist................can't wait for more

Reviewer: Alyxandria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Three: Tiny, Stoic Thing

Wow. Didn't expect her to be a witness to their murders *that* way. Good twist.
I liked this chapter. And I love the way Buffy and Spike are interacting.
Great job. And thanks for the very speedy update.
-Alyx

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Two: Let's Try Again

Spike has every right to feel embarrassed but Buffy did take it well :) And now he has to make it up to her again right? So Buffy will have an advantage. ~ And Spike has a lot of questions (he doesn't want to ask right now). But I think we'll get to now it sooner or later... ~ And Angel is her brother... mmmh I wonder who you picked for Buffy's dead boyfriend. Lol.. Spike is human, huh? Or like Buffy said: He is a man (about how is apartment looked like). ~ Loved the new chapter; thanks for the update :)

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