Oh, that´s soo sad! Make me cry, but I like.
But, don´t seems that Spike take soo much time to found her. In real live, she probably, or already be dead for a cut in a vital organ or should be a lot of time to call for help.

While this was well written I have to say that I HATED THIS FIC. If you had posted a "character death" warning I never would have read it and now because of this horrible experience I will never read another one of your stories. Isn't there enough angst, death & saddness in the world? Why did you feel the need to add to it - even if it is just fiction - you've created and unleashed some unhappy, negative vibes with this story as far as I'm concerned.

Author's Response: Okay... I'll say thanks for the well-written compliment. And I'll also be nice and say "sorry, i forgot to post a character death warning when i first posted it up. MY BAD.I hope my story hasn't cost you SO MUCH grief that you can't get on with your life..." Only one of my other stories has a character death and I did remember to put up a warning. I'm sorry, it was a mistake, i forgot. I guess I didn't realize it was such a life or death situation. And... 1.) I DID put up a character death warning in the summary at 6:15 AM this morning... so there was no way you could have read the last chapter without realizing there was a death. 2.) The first chapter I posted up contained an author's note suggesting that everyone go listen to "A Little Fall of Rain"... and if you listened to my suggestion, you would have realized there was no way something happy could have come from this story. But i guess i shouldn't just assume you'd listen to it and again... MY BAD. 3.) I really don't give a damn if you never read another one of my stories. As far as i'm concerned... it's your loss and none of my business. 4.) What... are you saying i'm tipping the balance of good and bad in the world? What, is karma gonna come bite me in the ass? How come I never get reviews like this for my happy stories? "Thanks, melissa, for setting out happy, positive vibes in the world. I think good things will come your way." Goddamn... if you don't like it, just say so. don't get so fucking emotional.

Really touching story...The end made me cry...Liked it!!;)

Horribly sad ending. I feel so *cheated* on Buffy and Spike's behalf. They would have been happy and the instant Spike realizes that, everything falls apart. I know in your AN you said it wouldn't be a fluffy ending, but you really suprised me with this one. Great fic though. Again, so SO sad.
Thanks for sharing.
-Alyx

Author's Response: thanks for the comment, I'm sorrryyyy for killing her and having such a sad ending.

wow. very haunting ending. very well written, but it might be a good idea to post a rape/non-con warning and one also for character death. A lot of readers try to avoid such things when reading fics and a little heads up is usually appreciated.

Author's Response: Thanks. Sorry bout the lack of warning... i won't forget next time.

that was horrible. how could you make her die? i really regret reading this now. you know, a warning of a character death would have been appreciated. i usually like to avoid those. and having her get raped on top of that? i'm at least relieved that you didn't go into details with that. sorry, i didn't care for this.

Author's Response: Sorry, I meant to add a character death warning and forgot.

OMG! Talk about a nail biter......that is exactly what I was doing while reading this. I absolutely love it. Please hurry and add more.

i like this! cant wait till next update

Great update! (And so speedy too!) They have a very comfortable relationship - I like it. And I'm very interested to see how this ends. Thanks for sharing!
-Alyx

Well now I am really curious as to what happens tomorrow.

love this strory!! cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Oooo! I sense some angst coming! Yay! Angst is my favorite! Especially if it involves Buffy, Spike and another woman. I can't wait to see where this story goes! I love the first chapter! You write so realistically. It's amazing how you evoke all these different emotions. I really can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you possibly can! Thanx!