

Date: 09/19/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Uh-huh.. Cecily wants a baby to get more money. Good to see that for once Spike doesn't agree to what she wants. Even better that he had the 'epiphany' now that he'd rather have nothing then something from her and her family. Will that be enough to stop things he's doing that goes wrong? Like his marriage, his drinking, his cheating? I hope.
I wonder if Doyle told the send Spike away when Brandon was born. Good to see Spike wants to see this son :)

Date: 09/19/2006 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Yay Spike and Buffy talking and laughing. I was worried for a minute Doyle was going to propose or something!

Date: 09/19/2006 - 01:38 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
“I’d rather have nothing than something from you and your family.”
Now he's getting it, lol, lets just hope he decides to actually do something about it.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

Date: 09/19/2006 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter Twelve
From experience, they always do burp at the wrong time.

Date: 09/19/2006 - 06:44 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Great update, looking forward for more

Date: 09/19/2006 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Wow! This chapter really gave is a good glimpse of what a horrible person Cicely is. Loved Brandon's gassy 'hello' to his father. Can't wait to read more. Wonderful update!

Date: 09/19/2006 - 04:51 am Title: Chapter Twelve
so sweet .....

Date: 09/19/2006 - 03:09 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Interesting twist, making Cecily want a child. I'm so glad that Spike can't even conceive of it (no pun intended). Great interchange between Doyle and Buffy, and a nice moment between Spike and Buffy.

Date: 09/19/2006 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Twelve
AWWWWWW!!!! cute!!! that wife of spike's is a real.....witch with a capital B!!! she's just gross. i guess i can understand a little weeny bit why spike sleeps with other women. anyway, can't wait for the next post. what's going to happen next/?? will buffy let spike into her and her son's life or will she make it hard for him at first???? only way to find out is for you to post...like NOW!! go on!! get to it!!!! lol.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Once again your two fics get a single, combined review from me--but this time I actually have a good reason...I'm fixing up the dying computer right now and submitting two and making it actually process something twice just might make ti go boom...........and I'll shut up about the ev0l computers now and tell you how I just love this story so, so very much...I love how Buffy is portrayed, I love how Spike is portrayed....I love all of it :) And I'm not just being all 'I love it' tonight, I really do...and yeah, computers all day make me a little...not so eloquent (and kill my spelling) but great update on both fics :-)

Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
ooo, I hope Doyle isn't gay. It would be so good if here were a stand up heterosexual friend o' Buffy's. I like Doyle. I especially like it when he calls Buffy "Lass". : )

Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
It's so amazing how you can fall in love with your child in an instant! I hope Spike's revelation puts him on the road to freeing himself of Cecily and her family and brings him closer to his little family. more please.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 09:58 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I think you pretty much covered it as far as causing the fandom to hate Cecily (wow ... couldn't make her any more detestable if you tried)
I am really hoping that Doyle is Buffy's best gay guy friend so that he isn't getting his hopes up romantically ... cause we girls know that unless it's a gay guy friend then 95% of the straight ones want more than to be there for us in a time of need. I'd sure hate to see Doyle hurt in any way (always loved his character --- glad you're using him)
Loved the last scene ... Spike like a boy at Christmas ... he'll figure out that to have his son and Buffy he'll be the richest man in the world.
Another great chapter ... you sure elicit emotions that cover the spectrum ... contempt, disgust, hate, hope, wonder, love ... felt them all while reading that last chapter.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hopefully Spike will come to his senses! Great chapter!

Date: 09/18/2006 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Cecily really is a bitch. I hope he just up and leaves her one day. I think Doyle might cause some problems though.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 08:52 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Do I sense that Doyle might have a thing for Buffy? If so, that could sure complicate things... more.
Good chapter. :)

Date: 09/18/2006 - 08:47 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Why doesn't Spike jsut leave Cecily! Even if they don't get a divorce, can't he just leave her? Move away? When's he going to leave? Update soon please!

Date: 09/18/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
awwwww!!!! cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Date: 09/18/2006 - 07:45 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
THANKS FOR UPDATING!

Date: 09/18/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Ok Spike, if you ever want to have a spot in your son's life, it's time to poop or get off the pot! more please.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Spike is jumping conclusions... because he is jealous and / or was left out during the pregnancy. Oh Spike to idealized her when she wasn't in his reach? And yet or because he is on his way down, heavy drinking now. Is he deep enough to go back, change? Looking forward to find out.
Doyle? A good friend, but he didn't have the right to tell Spike to go especially when Doyle got bitter and told him to stay away (bitter why? because he wants Buffy?) even when Buffy told Spike about everything? It's Buffy's decision; he is old enough to make her own errors.
Yet he hears what Doyle said because he didn't try to talk to Buffy.
I wonder if he'll change now or if it takes more. If his wife or his father in law finds out that he has a child he'll get a lot of pressure and/or trouble. He should get a divorce before they find out. (On the other hand, they have money and if he wants a divorce they'll maybe find out, searching for dirt. ~ See still reading till now.

Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Told you I"m reading these chapters in parts ;) In a way it's nice because I get to read parts of this story twice--but then it leaves so little for me to read...and I'm making no sense, sorry.
I like that you've jumped to the baby already being born instead of working through Buffy's pregnancy; I think it'll put Buffy and Spike in a much different situation...besides the obvious....and change things for Spike as well :) And I really don't make sense this morning--great chapter, though :D

Date: 09/18/2006 - 07:48 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Great name, How did you think of Brandon? :)

Date: 09/18/2006 - 05:01 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Poor Spike- good chapter though, I like the way you are building emotion

Date: 09/18/2006 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Oh you talented you , you break my heart all over again !
Great conversation between Doyle and Spike, I agree with everything Doyle said.. but I'm just waiting for Spike to react. And now that he has seen his beautiful son , will it be enough to make him realize that he has the power to change his life and Buffy 's life ?
Okay , I'm dying to read the next part , and dying to know what Spike will decide.
It was a gorgeous and moving chapter.
Spike please , go to Buffy and ask her to forgive you .. but get rid of Cecily first !!!