Reviews For My Immortal
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Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: Ten

great story hope you finish it

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2007 - 03:41 pm Title: Ten

Ah Buffy got away on her own. I wonder too who is responsible (hiring Riley).

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2007 - 08:14 pm Title: Ten

I love it and congrats on getting married.

Author's Response: thank you

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2007 - 07:19 pm Title: Ten

Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2007 - 04:55 pm Title: Ten

What's gonna happen next? Update soon please!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 04:19 pm Title: Nine

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 01:08 pm Title: Nine

Chapter nine? Must be a new one for me then. :)
Oh bad.. Spike left his computer on when going to rescue Buffy. Now Lindsey found something and is giving informations away. Not good.. and nobody noticed.
Bad! Now Buffy walked into a trap and Riley seems to have won. I hope that won't be the case!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:50 pm Title: Nine

Uh oh....what's going to happen now? Update soon please!

Reviewer: Samantha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Three

Doesn't make too much sense at the moment,
Few spelling errors, thoughts in italic could help to be able to read it.

Reviewer: Escaflowne,Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 02:35 am Title: Eight

I think that Spike could be a bit more edgy and Lindsy could be more of a pretty boy but hey its your story. The twists are pulling me in and Im hooked to the idea that Giles is the boss and that Werewolves are behind the evil side.

Reviewer: Escaflowne,Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2006 - 02:20 am Title: Seven

Now things are getting good I feel the connections and the mystery. Im pleased with the style of characters its good to read something new. so please keep it comin.

Reviewer: Escaflowne,Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 03:37 am Title: Six

I think that the killings are too sudden and without backstory its hard to see where this really fits. On the plus side I like the touch of sible rivalry and the court leads me to believe that things can get worse for these characters.

Reviewer: Escaflowne,Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 03:25 am Title: Five

Im curious now to see what happens, this man has me feeling rather enraged at his forth comming but I think it brings new light into this mystery. I plan to read till I feel bored

Reviewer: Escaflowne, Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 02:25 am Title: Four

I feel a bit left out like the lovers are in a mid crisis that isnt finished I would like to know more before the story grows . these characters have some life to them that gives me a clue into who they try to be.

Reviewer: Escaflowne, Dante Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 02:09 am Title: Three

This has a touch that ripples in my mind and its quite encouraging. I feel a sort of thirst for your characters lust and tention its spine tingling.
Please bring more to this.

Reviewer: Brett Clayton Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 03:11 am Title: One

It has Spice and intruiging story so please write more. I like how Spike is so laxed yet trying to be badboy.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 12:57 pm Title: Eight

Hi,
did you delete the story and upload it now again? Or did you changed it? I've read till chapter eight before. Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: hey cordykitten, no i did not delete it pari did i think there might have been a glitch on her end because she said that there was no story there. so i just reloaded it. but added a few differences. i am going to update soon so keep checking. thanks Paige

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 11:15 am Title: Six

I do like the tweaking. I think you did a good job, with creating this story line and following characters backgrounds like Darla's. Also, the setting seems sp real even though you speak little of it. But, other then that the story seems to come together wee, it is a more adult-like reading not so much with the content but with the style and way it was written.
Please update soon, it's wonderful
Thanx

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 01:26 am Title: One

Different. But interesting! :)

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