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Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 10

I enjoyed the flashbacks. The Bronze flashback wasn't confusing at all, I love the fact that William was drawn to Buffy first. Great chapter!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

I like getting a glimpse into the past. I'm glad Spike let his feelings out with Buffy, too.

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 10

oooh, another twist, you're really good with those. amazing chapter!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 10

yep that was buffy he saw first...because she was with willow. hehe

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 10

loved it. kind of confused about the last flashback but very good job. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2006 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 10

Oh my God! He fell for Buffy first! That was her at the Bronze, wasn´t it?

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

Spike apologized and explained.. and Buffy understood why he slipped.
(I wonder if Spike had met both, Buffy and Elizabeth, if he would ever gave Elizabeth a second look or if he would have fallen for Buffy. Even if these two look alike, they are different persons.)
And Buffy had a bad conscience because of the thought she would take Spike away from Elizabeth. But I wonder who this Ben is. He was a bit too nice (sweetheart?) to her. Maybe Elizabeth had another lover? Indeed. Well this will make it easier for Buffy to accept that she is in love with Spike. And when they (Ben and Elizabeth) met later the child should be his.
Unexpected turn! Clever. :)

Reviewer: GoldenBuffy Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/16/2006 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter 9

Spike's a good guy. He didn't tarnish his wife's good name only punch the git in the nose, yay!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 9

love it

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wow! That was an unexpected twist. Spike certainly handled the news reasonably well. Can't wait to read more. Fantastic chapter!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 9

Definitely no the "perfect" image of her sister Buffy had in her head.....um, now I have to wonder if the baby is Spike's? She died in childbirth, and obviously, she wasn't showing or anything around Ben, since it's obvious he wasn't expecting to come back to her and their child....

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

loved it soooooo much. please post soon. and okay....liz was CHEATING ON SPIKE!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!! HUH. NEVER EXPECTED THAT. more please.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 9

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 9

So, does this mean that Ben could be Emma's daddy? Cause I think he'd seen that she was pregnant, and rather silly of him to think she'd have waited for him all this time to return. I see 'who's my daddy issues' being at least broght up.....or not.....


Kimber

Author's Response: I was actually wondering if anyone would bring that up. We'll say that Elizabeth had a thing with Ben before she got pregnant, so it could be a possibility that the baby isn't even Spike's, but not where I'm going with this. I like to think I'm not that evil...lol! More will hopefully be explained in the next chapter. I wouldn't want to give too much away. Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 9

Well, that was a twist! Good chapter. :)

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 9

wow, didn't see that coming. interesting twist, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

nice chapter, but ben was really a surprise. I wonder what else will happen.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 9

I'm glad they're trying it out! I'm a little surprised Elizabeth was cheating. Update soon please!

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 9

now that's a huge shocker...... love the updates and waitind for more!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my.......and the angst begins.......itt will be an interesting ride to see how you're able to bring Spike to love Buffy and she not feel like she's just Elizabeths' replacement.........but you've hooked me to read on to find out..........

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 8

I hope they talk goes well!

Reviewer: margaret Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 9

so the perfect elizabeth wasn't so perfect! glad to see william and buffy getting along...thanks for the chapter

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 08:30 am Title: Chapter 8

After the kiss Spike went away. And now it's awkward. Even more so? Because he said Elizabeth. That was a big mistake. Not only did he hurt Buffy first the way he tried to say he was sorry and then calling her with her sister's name? As if he doesn't see her, he only sees his dead wife.
Ah that's what is hurting Buffy the most: She thinks he doesn't see 'her' for herself.
Ah and now Spike that they have to talk. I wonder what it will bring.

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/15/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 8

great chapter, love this story!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter 8

good chapter

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