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Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 29

Oh, what will happen next. I'm glad he found that journal. More please.

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 11:24 am Title: Chapter 29

awww, a little angst, great!! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2006 - 11:20 am Title: Chapter 29

oh no, i hope buffy's okay.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 09:07 am Title: Chapter 28

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 05:36 am Title: Chapter 28

Loved the scene between Buffy and her parents, and i'm so glad Joyce and Hank decided to take in Dawn. Fantastic update!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 28

good update

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 28

That's a nice solution. Poor kid. This'll do a lot of good to prepare her for adulthood.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 28

What a great turn!

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 28

love this story, finally got a chance to start reading it, its kind of sad what you said at the beginning of it about not writting anymore. I have read many of you storys you are a good writer.

Author's Response: Yeah, don't worry about what I said. I've been working on another story lately that I plan on posting after this one. I guess I'm not quite ready to retire yet...lol! Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 28

If Buffy got beaten before it's understandable that Dawn's fate gets to her, she feels for her even more.
Good solution; and no hard feelings between Buffy and her parents either.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 28

Hopefully it'll be okay for Dawn now. Is Riley going to make an appearance? Update soon please!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 28

Oh such a better solution.......much better......and a lovely daughter and parent reunion......


Kimber

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 28

aww, i like the idea of dawn being cared for by buffy's parents. her speech was really great. loved the chapter!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 27

hope everything works out with dawn. loved the chapter!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/23/2006 - 03:22 am Title: Chapter 27

I liked Spike and Tara's talk. I feel so bad for Dawn, i'm glad she has Buffy and Spike to lean on. Good update.~ Happy Thanksgiving! :D

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 27

more please

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 27

Okay, color me confused.....but just how old are the twins now....it was just like they were born and now their walking.....and what's Emma doing?

As for Dawn.......it's your story.....it she fits into the story for you....that's all that is important.....

Kimber

Author's Response: Well, we'll say that the twins are almost a year old. Buffy mentioned to Lindsey that she had them about six months ago, so they're older than that now. I tend to skip around sometimes. I don't really say how much time has passed, but I would usually reveal it somewhere in the chapter. They just grow up so fast. Emma is still around. It's hard to always fit them in there, but I wanted to put something about Buffy and Spike spending time with the kids, so no one would forget about them. I hope that made some sense...lol! Thanks for reading=)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 27

Happy Thanksgiving to you too :)
I'm glad Dawn took the courage and asked Buffy to help. And you know what? I'm not mad because Glory died because the way she treated Dawn wasn't right. But the was to ill (drug addicted) to notice.
I loved the update, don't worry.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 27

Wow....they have a lot of kids in their house now. Is Dawn going to stay with them permanently? Update soon please!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 27

wow, i feel so bad for dawn. i love her character and i'm glad to see her in the story. i hope everything works out for her. great emotional chapter!

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 27

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/22/2006 - 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 27

I like the inclusion of Dawn into the story, to me it shows that they aren't so selfishly wrapped up in themselves that they ignore others. (as kinda happened in the series)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 26

Lovely little chappyie.......Willow and Tara, lovely getting them together......now what to do about Dawn....hmmmmmm.

Kimber

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 26

Uh oh....I think Ben's going to be trouble! Poor Dawn, Glory's hitting her. Update soon please!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 26

loved it

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