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Reviewer: Hermionesparkles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 26

Actually I kinda agree with the comments about Dawn. It was nice to have her around... at the beginning.

Author's Response: What beginning? She was in one chapter. I'm sorry you feel that way, but there's nothing I can do about it now. The rest of the story is already written and I'm not about to change anything. If you have a problem with it, you just don't have to read. I happen to like what I'm doing and that's all that really matters.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 26

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 26

I like the new developements in the plot. I look forward to finding out how the new storylines play out. Great chapter!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter 26

hmm, i actually think it's good to have dawn around. i agree that things would get boring if it was all about buffy and spike. you still have me interested and i can't wait to see if anything more happens with ben.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter 26

Mmm when Buffy is convinced that Ben is obsessed with Liz it can be that he'll start with Buffy now. She should be careful. Spike had the same thought...
But they should watch out for Dawn too seems Glory is abusing her.
And Willow spilled some secrets; I'll bet she feels a lot better now after she did.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 10:06 am Title: Chapter 26

I like the addition of Dawn and the realization that Ben is obsessed.

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 10:04 am Title: Chapter 26

cool a new chapter :) I liked it, although I do agree with Elize. Dawn is a nice character but this fic is based on a couple and their babies, not Dawn and her problems. Looking forward to more though ;)

Author's Response: It's not really just about Buffy and Spike. There are other people involved and I just can't forget about them. Just writing fluff all the time can get boring and I needed to keep things interesting. Dawn has an important part and I felt like bringing her into it. It wouldn't last for long and I do have more with Buffy and Spike. Patience is a virtue=)

Reviewer: elise Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter 26

Dawn once again... I liked the writing but the whole story about Dawn is getting a little boring. Could you maybe focus the next chapters on Spike/Buffy/their babies ? Dawn was a cool idea for one chapter or two but I dunno, it's less spuffy now.

Author's Response: No, sorry, Dawn has an important part in the story and I'm going to focus on that right now. It's only for about one or two more chapters, then it more focuses on Buffy and Spike. I figured just doing them was boring and I needed some kind of conflict, but it will be plenty Spuffy. The story is almost over, anyway. I have a few more chapters to go. They will be dramatic before I get to the happy Spuffy ending. Hopefully you'll stick with it, but I would understand if you don't. I know it's not for everyone.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter 25

Ah Ben is there again at the bar. But not getting drunk yet? Mmmmm....
OH! He lied.. he never slept with Liz, then Emma is truly Spike's.
Uh-huh.. Buffy meant well but now it seems that Dawn is in trouble.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2006 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter 25

good update

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 25

Oh......okay.....I see the family growing but not with any more babies at the moment....LOL....nice you gave us closure with Ben......nice touch.......

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 25

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 25

Glory is Dawn's mom? I wasn't expecting that! Update soon please!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 25

harsh mother, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 25

I liked Buffy's talk with Ben, i'm glad it turned out so insightful.
Poor Dawn, with a mother like Glory, no wonder she doesn't like to be home. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter!

Reviewer: trish Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter 25

uh oh, that doesn't sound very good. hopefully buffy can help dawn. loved the chapter!

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 24

Loved the update! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 24

*grins* The best way to chase Spike away seems to be indeed Dawn.
The chapter was fun :)

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 04:33 am Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter 24

more please

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 24

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 24

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 24

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 24

awesome, loved it!

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 24

lolx...Spike left because of Dawn. Update soon please!

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