

Date: 09/30/2006 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter One: Mine
Absolutely loved it. Don't know how anyone else read it, or what you intended, but I was constantly expecting one thing to happen, and then something totally different occurred! It's hard to write a B/S story that surprises.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's nice to hear that I'm surprising people :-)

Date: 09/30/2006 - 08:26 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
hey loves the story..look forward to more..N

Date: 09/30/2006 - 07:23 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
Very good, very intense! Keep going, I´m looking forward to your update.

Date: 09/30/2006 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
Can't get enough of Spike in his 'dark phase.' Luv what you've created. Please update soon.
Author's Response: yeah, me neither! it's just so much fun to write...thanks so much!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:39 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
Just started reading and am enjoying the story very much!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:23 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
I would have liked for Spike to stake Dru, but I think now he's finally coming to his senses. I like Buffy's stubborness.
Author's Response: Ooh, Spike staking Dru, now there's a nice idea...:-) yup, she can't be Buffy without that nice stubborn streak!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter Two: Bound
Ooohh! Almost, Buffy!
You've got me very curious about Buffy's past. Can't wait to read the next part.

Date: 09/30/2006 - 03:06 am Title: Chapter One: Mine
This is a great start. I'm very interested in more!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:19 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
great story so far

Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
spike is such a goof!!! post soon. really want to read where this goes!! i have a feeling these two are gonna drive one another crazy....but in a VERY good way. loved it. post soon.
Author's Response: :-) Yup, gotta love it when they get under each other's skin...thanks for your support!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Two: Bound
great job. loved it.

Date: 09/30/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter One: Mine
okay....loved it. bit different but very good. on with the next chapter.

Date: 09/29/2006 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Two: Bound
OOOOooo! More please!

Date: 09/29/2006 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter One: Mine
First: Great summary....I don't know about you, but for me those are always hard, so I thought I'd tell you that yours is great.
Wonderful start to the story--great job with the characters and setting everything up :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, the summary was hard to do--I'm glad you liked it :-)

Date: 09/29/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: Chapter One: Mine
I really liked this, original premise and good characterizations. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! I definitely will...can't say how soon the next post will be, but I promise it will happen!

Date: 09/29/2006 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
Hmm, this is interesting so far. You write really well. I haven't seen something like this yet. Good work, can't wait to read more=)
Author's Response: Thank you! that's really nice to hear--both about the originality and the writing. thank you for reviewing! :-)

Date: 09/29/2006 - 09:39 pm Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
Ooooooh me like! Very intense beginning and you can't go wrong with a protective (neanderthalic perhaps?) Spike in game-face can you? Looking forward to your next update. Oh and BTW - Is Buffy just strong here because of her martial arts training or is it something more?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yup, can't get enough of protective Spike (and I think neanderthalic definitely describes it well :-) At the time when I wrote it, Buffy was able to push Spike off of her mainly due to her martial arts training, his being completely distracted, and pure adrenaline, but who knows....
Author's Response: oh--I just realized you probably meant when she punched the fledgling--*doh*--Well, same general idea, just without the complete distraction ;-)

Date: 09/29/2006 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Snapped
So far this story is amazing......can't wait for the next update....great job
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll do my best to update as soon as I can....