

Date: 10/05/2006 - 11:03 am Title: Prologue
Please post more, I like it!

Date: 10/05/2006 - 10:57 am Title: Prologue
Ok...post more right now, right now I say. That was soooo good, got me hooked now.

Date: 10/05/2006 - 09:38 am Title: Prologue
BIG SMILEY FACE FROM OVER HERE SWEETIE - UPDATE SOON PLEASE

Date: 10/05/2006 - 08:48 am Title: Prologue
Great start so far. i like what you've done so far. You have a really good writing style and can't wait to see where this story is going to go.

Date: 10/05/2006 - 08:47 am Title: Prologue
What a wonderful introduction! The emotions seem so authentic. Am looking forward to the backstory as well as what they choose to do next. I hope you'll post more soon.

Date: 10/05/2006 - 08:45 am Title: Prologue
So far, the alone feeling that they both have makes for a good union. I am anxious to see what transpired before to bring them to this point, was it the Acathla scene? Anyway I will be looking for more and thanks

Date: 10/05/2006 - 07:42 am Title: Prologue
Loving it so far. Has makings for an amazing story. Can't wait for more

Date: 10/05/2006 - 04:53 am Title: Prologue
this seems to have the makings of a good story. the make up feels professal not like some who make the story feel like a child is writing a composition at school i'm looking forward to how it delveoples

Date: 10/05/2006 - 04:00 am Title: Prologue
Well so far it looks good. :)
Good writing style.
Unfortunatly its too early for me to say anything about the story. Good premisses tho.
Hopefully you will add in the next chapter some details about the fight (how come that Spike was the one stabbing Angelus).
So far I like it. Hope to see more soon. :)