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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 11:13 am Title: Advice

Oh Buffy gave him indeed her number.. well he knows where she lives anyway :)
And now he remembered too that he didn't ask if Connor and Dawn were her children or siblings. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 06:06 am Title: Meeting

Ah, Buffy's siblings are Dawn and Connor. But it doesn't seem that they are simple to handle.
(Yeah, it's a difference if you dance for all the people but if someone you doesn't know speaks with you when you're topless.. but Spike was kind enough to let her change before he wanted to talk more). And it was nice that he offered to drive her home when he heart Buffy has to walk home.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 01:12 am Title: Meeting

More more more please!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/07/2006 - 12:52 am Title: Meeting

ooh, love at first site! or, animal sexual attraction at first site, but with these two, same dif...:-) it's perfect. more soon? pretty please? I love it!!!

Reviewer: Carley-Marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 11:49 pm Title: Meeting

Hey!

I think you've got a great fic started. I look forward to the ideas that you're bringing to the fic because I'm already getting some in my head about what could happen later in the fic..

'Till later,
Carley-Marie

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 05:52 pm Title: Captivating

The plot sounds interesting. (And the other reviewer is right: You should try to get a beta. It isn't always easy to see his own errors. Especially words that a spell check wouldn't get like spike, Spike, defiantly, definitely. I should know, when I forget to read a review properly I'm making the same mistake.) Well because Spike is a 'ladies man' he can't object Buffy's choice of work.

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Captivating

hmmmm....wonder who the blond could be??? lol. great job. please post soon. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: stacy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: Captivating

okay, not trying to be rude, but this fiction needs a lot of work. it's a bit hard to read. i would suggest spacing it out better and it couldn't hurt to get a beta reader. i just skimmed it and caught a lot of mistakes. for one, it's bloody, not bluddy. it does sound like a good idea, but a lot needs to be fixed. just something to keep in mind.

Author's Response: ive changed the spelling of bloody my spellcheck wasnt working at the time and ive spaced it out a lot better but thanx for the comment otherwise i wouldnt have realised

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 04:42 pm Title: Captivating

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 03:25 pm Title: Captivating

Ooh this excellent. Most certainly NOT rubbish. I love it when it's that instant, across-the-room attraction for those two...more soon pretty please?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Captivating

I'm guessing the girl is Buffy of course! I can't wait for the two to meet! So who is Buffy's little brother and sister and how old is she? Update soon please!

Reviewer: dragotiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/06/2006 - 02:02 pm Title: Captivating

cant wait to see where this fic goes. love it so far.

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