

Date: 10/29/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: lying to B
love it, can't wait for more.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 07:12 pm Title: lying to B
If Spike ever finds out what went on between Faith and Buffy.....I'd hate to be Faith. Great chapter!

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:28 pm Title: lying to B
oh come on! how can you have her believe that skank, please don't let her get captured by disgusting Parker and Faith, and let her believe Spike. Then hwve Spike kick Faiths ass.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 10:15 am Title: lying to B
ahhh!!! u have 2 update soon and clear this mess up with Faith! ahh!!!

Date: 10/29/2006 - 09:21 am Title: lying to B
I'm not surprised, once a skanky bitch, always a skanky bitch. That's why I never bought the whole redeemed from crazy bitch act of Faith's on the show.
I was so glad that she didn't get a spin off as Faith the Vampire Slayer.
Okay, I've vented.
I hope Spike clears things up soon.
spuf

Date: 10/29/2006 - 08:56 am Title: lying to B
What a B*tch !!! And unfortunately Buffy will probably believe her. Enjoyed the update and waiting for the next chapter.

Date: 10/29/2006 - 08:56 am Title: lying to B
I really liked this chapter, nice job. I was wondering how you would introduce Faith. Cant wait to read more, I really enjoy this fic ;)

Date: 10/29/2006 - 07:43 am Title: lying to B
Faith's such a bitch! I hope Buffy will find out the truth and her relationship with Spike will survive! Really can't wait for the next update!=)

Date: 10/29/2006 - 06:38 am Title: lying to B
That bitch! Oh, and I was thinking she was pretty decent >_

Date: 10/27/2006 - 09:38 pm Title: a warning
Wondering what Faith plans to gain by approaching Buffy. Spike finds out and she's good as dead. Great chapter!

Date: 10/27/2006 - 07:43 am Title: a warning
It's official ... you've spent time in a gang.
Great writing. Love the attention to detail and the character building. Just awesome.
Author's Response: for a little while I had connections. I'm sorry that I haven't responded to your reviews. I am not going to be a far better author and give you back the responses that reviewers deserve. Thank you for your wonderful words, they mean a great deal.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 07:42 am Title: interlude
Completely perfect chapter. I know we'll find out in time why Spike is so damaged and how Buffy is some sort of a mafia princess, but for now we know all we need to for this brilliant story to work.
This was such a tender yet powerful chapter ... great writing.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 02:06 am Title: a warning
I hope Faith doesn't cause too much trouble for Buffy! What's she plan on doing exactly?
Is Parker really going to kill Riley or is he going to make an exception this one time? Update soon please!

Date: 10/27/2006 - 12:47 am Title: a warning
great update

Date: 10/25/2006 - 06:38 pm Title: interlude
What exactly is Hank and what relation does she have with Masters? Is he her godfather or something? Update soon please!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: interlude
Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for more!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 05:21 pm Title: interlude
great chapter!..more please!!!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 09:59 am Title: interlude
great update

Date: 10/25/2006 - 09:32 am Title: interlude
Good update. Liked the end.

Date: 10/24/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: the harsh light of day
Can't wait for more! Great chapter!

Date: 10/24/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: the harsh light of day
Is Jacob going to be trouble? Update soon please!

Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:10 am Title: the harsh light of day
loving it

Date: 10/24/2006 - 07:34 am Title: the harsh light of day
Well ... I am coming out of the wood work, or should I say website, to finally leave a review. I have been faithfullly following this story and I was really liking it. After that last chapter ... I am REALLY LOVING IT.
You know what you are doing with this plot and with these characters and this story is very believable. Are you sure you didn't spend time in a gang?? Each character is so well developed and so well put to use in the story. Spike is very complex (isn't he always) but so perfectly suited for Buffy and vice versa. I love what you are doing with her chaacter and I am sure that you have much more to reveal as the story unfolds. I don't see why he feels she deserves so much better than him seeing where she comes from (mom being such a mess). I am sure you'll get into that later.
Great story, great character development, love everything about it.
I've now delurked and will be leaving reviews ... I am officially hooked and a fan.

Date: 10/24/2006 - 05:39 am Title: the harsh light of day
I dont like that Jacob guy. What is he up to? Great chapter, as usual ;)

Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:49 am Title: the harsh light of day
Good chapter.