

Date: 10/20/2006 - 09:31 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I kinda really like Buffy in this chapter. She understands what she's doing...well to some extent. And I do think at the moment William deserves it. Looking forward to more.

Date: 10/20/2006 - 09:04 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
One of your stories is making me want to slap the hell out of Spike, and the other wants me to bitch slap Buffy. You're good.

Date: 10/20/2006 - 09:02 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Did I pick a good time to start reading again?? It got too angsty for me so I thought I'd let some time go by to let them begin to get together.
Man do you do a good job of creating a jealous situation ... as a reader I can really feel it coming off of both of them. Are these two good together ? I can't tell yet. He is wonderful (he always is) but she is so immature and really has nothing to bring to the relationship at all (guess that is you whole point eh?). I do know that Lilah is NEVER good ... yelch.
Maybe Fred would be a good match is this Buffy isn't going to shape up. tee hee

Date: 10/20/2006 - 01:49 am Title: Chapter Twelve
How very sad-- crying on the kitchen floor. Here's hoping she can put a voice to those thoughts to help him see her reasoning. Maybe that will help him to be patient, even if it isn't what he wants, because he could see it's what she needs to do for her own self-esteem. And hopefully Buffy won't throw in the towel with William before she even tries to be with him. More soon, please!

Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm not sure whose side to take on this. I mean, on the one hand, he's a stand-up guy and has been pretty much waiting for her for ahwile. But for her, she's unstable as far as herself - she's jumped around so much she doesn't have roots to keep her steady, and she wants to grow those roots on her own... while William wants to aid her in that process, which as sweet as that is, it's something she should do on her own, for her own sake. Bah, but you know all this, lol. Anyhoo, lovely chapter. :) I don't know whether to thank or curse you for making me think so much, lol!

Date: 10/19/2006 - 09:53 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm really enjoy the story your developing :)

Date: 10/19/2006 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I enjoyed reading both William and Buffy's POV. It's a shame they just don't sit down and talk things out, but I guess emotions are running to high at the moment. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Fantastic chapter.

Date: 10/19/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Looks like Buffy and Spike are misunderstanding what the other wants. Great chapter!

Date: 10/19/2006 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Awww...they're still not together! At least I know Buffy wants to be with him though.

Date: 10/19/2006 - 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Excellent chapter! While reading I could really understand both of their sides. Him, not wanting to let her go, and Buffy who needs to do something for herself before getting involved with somebody else. Interesting conflict and well written too!

Date: 10/19/2006 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
ARGH! The angst! Good update!

Date: 10/19/2006 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
i really wish they would get together soon

Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:51 am Title: Chapter Twelve
As much as I root for Spuffy and wanted them to get together as fast as they can and get groiny - there are instances, such as this one, when I wish they don't. Good for Buffy for trying to get her head together - I understand perfectly how she feels, what she's going through right now and in his impatience he didn't see that. Like a proper caveman, he couldn't wait, couldn't see reason.
Buffy really needed this. Really needed to get out there on her own, dip her toe in the big bad world and stand, not wobble or leaning or whatever, but stand.
How she will end up falling with William though, now that's an interesting thing I have to see. Maybe he said something, maybe he did something... I don't know, that's what got me hooked on this story of yours. :) Should I even tell you that I love this chapter?
Oh yeah, all authors like that! So, yeah... *g* I love the chapter. A bit angsty but it's realistic.

Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:50 am Title: Chapter Twelve
Got to let her grow up a bit I think.

Date: 10/19/2006 - 11:12 am Title: Chapter Twelve
stubborn buffy and spike are never fun!!! but they're cute so....anyway, i really think buffy made the right decision in moving out and into willow's but if she thinks that it'll simple things up with her and spike then i'm not so sure that is gonna work. and as far as william is concerned, he's pushing a little too much. i mean, i sort of understand why and all. he loves buffy but has had time to deal with his feelings a bit. buffy hasn't and he needs to give her time. and buffy needs to stop running away so much!!!
ramble much?? lol.
kinda have a lot on my mind so forgive me if this review was all over the place. loved it soooo much. please post soon.

Date: 10/19/2006 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter Eleven
Ooooooh.. Can I sympathize with Buffy and want to shake her at the same time? You just showed me I could. Well done.
But Will is so.....oh god.

Date: 10/18/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
The ass-out hug!! LOL Priceless!
Good chapter! :)

Date: 10/18/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
poor William :( good chapter though, I kinda glad she didn just jump into bed with him :)

Date: 10/18/2006 - 04:13 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Wonder what happened to make Buffy so afraid of relationships. Great chapter!

Date: 10/18/2006 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter One
Love it!!!!!!

Date: 10/18/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
loved it soooo much. awwww poor william. please post soon.

Date: 10/18/2006 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
Aww, sad. Looking forward to the next update though.

Date: 10/18/2006 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
i really wish that she would give him a chance

Date: 10/18/2006 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Eleven
What is the matter with that girl? Passing up on all that hotness that is Will? Crazy

Date: 10/18/2006 - 09:54 am Title: Chapter Eleven
they're gonna kill each other sooner or later if this keeps up..... love it n waitng for more!