

Date: 10/13/2006 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Five
This was one hot and hopeful chapter! Can't help but wonder why Buffy ran. Great chapter!

Date: 10/13/2006 - 06:22 am Title: Chapter Five
Whoa!! What a hot little chapter! I love it!

Date: 10/13/2006 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter Five
hey darling. I haven't yet written any review for this story. But it's a great one as always. Some hot scenes in this chapter as well! Can't wait to read how it continues. I can see some rocky roads ahead of us.

Date: 10/13/2006 - 04:22 am Title: Chapter Five
Steamy was an understatement! Very HOT

Date: 10/13/2006 - 03:57 am Title: Chapter Five
Wonderful chapter! I never would've guessed Buffy and William's evening was gonna turn out like this. Can't wait to read more!

Date: 10/13/2006 - 02:29 am Title: Chapter Five
You weren't kidding-- that was *way* steamy! Surprising that they jumped into it so quickly. I wonder if she thinks of herself poorly, and wonders if he does, too-- especially after his jealous rage when she wanted to be a nude model, and then again with Rico. Maybe Buffy thinks that William thinks of her as a slut, since she was scorned at her last job. But I hope that his actions didn't drive that point home with her. Maybe Buffy fixed William up with Alysha to try to get over her feelings for him, too. Then again, maybe you haven't told us the whole story about that summer when they were young and had gotten *close.* Just how close, I wonder? Thanks for the yummy update!

Date: 10/13/2006 - 01:02 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow! I was not expecting that. Great chapter. Lovely surprise. ; )

Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow, that was really intense. I am so glad that Spike finally made a move. Cant wait for the next update.

Date: 10/13/2006 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Five
Great chapter, but where will she got to? hope you update soon.

Date: 10/12/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Five
absolutely loved the spuffyness but i really hope that she doesnt regret it

Date: 10/12/2006 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Five
wow this is so typical buffy all with the running and stuff! i just want to know where she whent! i love primal spike! he whent all grr-y and caveman-y wow! i want to know what happens next! update soon!

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Five
Through this whole chapter I kept waiting for the shoe to drop... then it did. Then I was waiting for the other one to drop, and guess what? It did too! Lol. Good chapter.

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh my.....he finally admitted it, but now she's run away scared! Update soon please!

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Five
Yeah, I also wasn't expecting that to happen already. I was thinking it would be a dream or something. I figured you were evil enough to do that...lol! Well, of course Buffy ends up running away, but she didn't seem all that grossed out by what they were doing. I just think she was freaked because of her past, not necessarily because it was with him. Hell, I don't know, just making stuff up...lol! It was definitely a steamy chapter;)

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter Five
wow!!!!!!!! i was soooooo not expecting THAT so soon in the story!!!!! not that i didn't like it cuz boy was that hot!!!! lol. great job. please PLEASE post soon. I sense agst in the future!!!!! wonder what's going through buffy's mind after an experience like that!!! this is sooo good. more please.

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:18 pm Title: Chapter Five
Well, that happened a little quicker than I thought..

Date: 10/12/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Five
Uh Oh He better find her. She's freaking!
Great chapter as always brat!

Date: 10/12/2006 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter Four
I love spike loving Buffy first. It's a treat.

Date: 10/12/2006 - 05:13 am Title: Chapter Four
cute, I love the banter between them

Date: 10/12/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Chapter Four
Buffy's backstory was really interesting. Can't wait to find out where Buffy takes Spike. Wonderful chapter as always! :D

Date: 10/12/2006 - 12:50 am Title: Chapter Four
Very nice flirting at the end-- cute chapter. More, more!!! I'm turning into a greedy fanfic maniac, and it's largely your fault! Thank you for the fabulous update.

Date: 10/11/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Four
awww!!!! so cute!!! wonder when the cat is gonna be let out of the bag about spike's crush!!! post soon. loved it.

Date: 10/11/2006 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Three
great jo!!!! will really got angry at the whole 'nude art' thing. i think he overreacted a little too much but considering that he's crushing on him i kinda understand! on with the next chapter......

Date: 10/11/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Four
I'm glad you gave us some background on Buffy. I do know that that must have been horrible to live. But I'm glad that it wasn't something much worse. I think its cute that they are going to both try to act more like the other. Should lead to lots of bonding and UST. lol Can't wait. ; )