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Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter One

Bottom line ... If you're writing, I'm reading.

This chapter read very well. I am curious to see where you go from here. I know that it will be different than other vamp buffy stories ... you always have a cool original twist on things.

Reviewer: Shauna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Chapter One

So Angelus wants another four member family unit? This will definitely be interesting. It seems like it's off to a good start, and I'm looking forward to seeing what's next.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:31 pm Title: Chapter One

It's so..... dark. I didn't think you had something like this in you. Don't get me wrong, its not a bad thing. I think this is going to be good, I mean really, really good. Please write more.

Reviewer: ~Eris~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter One

You've got my attention!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter One

Some authors, when they warn angst... it doesn't get to me, I can bear and it's not a huge deal. But when you promise angst you certainly deliver. I'm not saying this as a bad, thing, it's really good, powerful even. Both Buffy and Spike's pain is just so real. And when Spike took her hand, just wow. I'm so glad he did that rather than turn away, it made all the difference in the world.

Anyway, I don't want to ramble on and detract from my point, which is: Really well written.

Reviewer: spikes_cj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter One

The warnings alone have me salivating. I can't wait to see where this is going. Definitely started off a lot darker than what I'm used to reading from you, but definitely not complaining.

Reviewer: dragontiff Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter One

ooh loved it.. cant wait for more

Reviewer: Priscilla Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter One

Very well written so far. I know you had to get her to a point where she was weak enough, and I love how you said it took her days to start screaming. That was a good show of her strength that not a lot of people try to portray. I'm really interested now and can't wait until the next chapter =)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter One

Interesting. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter One

very interesting beginning

can't wait to see where you are going with this

Reviewer: Tam/spikeslovebite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter One

one word....

MORE!!!!

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter One

And another winner. I love your stories. I never thought I would see you write a vamp Buffy story, but it looks very interesting, but then all your fics are and I love all of them. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter One

I am interested in anything you write, this one sounds interesting so far and I'm sure you will keep it enthralling.

Reviewer: jadedmidnight Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter One

I love this idea. Buffy as a vamp stories have always been a fav of mine. I really like the twist you took on this by having Angelus be her creator. I can't wait to see where you take this.

~Diana

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter One

I really shouldn't be suprised, at how great this first chapter was, really.....it's awesome as always....but of course it would be....I can't wait for this story to continue.....

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:16 pm Title: Chapter One

That was a gripping beginning. Drusilla's glee at the events was in character, and made for a nice sense of disconnect between Spike and his sire. Spike was nicely drawn, too. The length of time of the torture makes me wonder what Buffy's friends were up to while she was in his clutches. I'm intrigued by the premise, and can't wait to see how you handle this new Buffy.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/10/2006 - 06:14 pm Title: Chapter One

I'm interested! All of your stories are good but I have a feeling this might be one of the ones that stand out a bit more.Please continue.

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