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Reviewer: Tanja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:38 am Title: Epilogue

Great story! Sequel please? (^_^)

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:54 am Title: Three

It is amazing how Buffy lies to herself. Still loving it!!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:54 am Title: Epilogue

Ok-that just screams SEQUEL!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:50 am Title: Seven

ok-on the verge of tears. The only thing stopping it-the epilogue.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:40 am Title: Six

You know, sometimes, they should just duct tape their mouths shut!! AAAAAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:10 am Title: Three

It is amazing how Buffy lies to herself. Still loving it!!

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2006 - 07:46 am Title: One

I have been waiting til it was finished to start reading. Great so far!!! I was not expecting that bargain. She has really had her marbles kissed out.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Epilogue

The idea that Spike would send months searching for something to protect Buffy is charming, and I like that you left her reaction to the imagination. I was a bit worried by the melancholy tone in the beginning of the chapter, but you ended it on a hopeful note.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 01:01 am Title: Epilogue

Very nice note of hopefullness at the end-- I'm glad you didn't end it on the glowery note of Spike's own personal brood-a-thon. A very sweet, wonderful gift to give the Slayer. I hope you consider writing a sequel to this that picks up when she lays eyes on him again-- that could be smokin' hot!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2006 - 12:33 am Title: Seven

Very sad-- sniff. It's kind of nice to see Buffy being the vulnerable one, here.

Reviewer: Cece Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Epilogue

I hope this is seen as constructive criticism:

I don't know, even with the positive spin that my mind could come up with, it seemed a little rushed to me.

I know people have said sequel, but really it could be continued without a sequel. It just feels like there was so much more that could have happened, and things could have felt more complete.

Even with a "sequel" it would feel more like making another posting with the rest of the chapters.

I like the story, the end just didn't do it for me.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 07:43 pm Title: Epilogue

i smell a sequel :D

Reviewer: zoegrace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 04:25 pm Title: Epilogue

very nice story, but i really would have liked for there to be some closure between these two. This story doesn't feel finished.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 04:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Spike has gone for four month now ... and got Buffy a pendant that will protect her against magic. Nice gift.
But that is it, the end?
*sigh* It is too open for me to like it much. Like what about Buffy: Even if she dated an endless line of wankers, he found it unbearable to be apart from her Whom is Buffy dating if she is? What thinks Buffy of Spike leaving, what did she do in these month, does she miss him?

Even if the end is slightly hopeful regarding the Spuffy, it's is more open than I like it. I need my happy end you know? I've read in the comments that you will maybe write a sequel. When you do I reread this one again. Maybe I'll like the end better when you finished the sequel. That depends on how the sequel is ending. ;-)

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 11:34 am Title: Epilogue

Nice story! I liked it a lot :)

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 09:12 am Title: Epilogue

a wonderful story.... PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE do a sequel..... please..... hope to see the sequel soon.... love the story totally!!!

Reviewer: marie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 08:52 am Title: Epilogue

loved the story thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 04:37 am Title: Epilogue

I so hope Buffys ok and glad to see him. Can't wait for the epilogue

Reviewer: Dreylin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Epilogue

An unexpected end to a story that begs a sequel. I'm sure many people acutally will beg for one, and while I'd love to read a continuation of this story, I find I kind of like the idea of a story that doesn't tie everything up in a neat little fluffy bow. I frequently enjoy it when they do, but often they get there too easily, and those stories tend to lose my interest. None of your stories has ever lost my interest. I like that this one leaves room for the imagination.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Epilogue

Loved it!!!!!!!! Wounderful story. Great ending.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 12:33 am Title: Epilogue

Should have known he couldn't stay away. Hope she likes her present, and perhaps realizes what she's lost, in order to save her heart. Lovely story. Leave one with a bit to think about. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Seven

That sad irony that perhaps there hearts were in it long before they knew they were. A sad but believable possible ending for their little engagement. Great chapter.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2006 - 11:32 pm Title: Epilogue

i didnt understand this chapter at all

Author's Response: I'm not sure what you didn't understand. For this to be in character, spike and Buffy could't rush into a too sweet happy ever after. Spike went away in anger, found something to help Buffy through any magical problems she might have out of love, and now he's decided to go back to her. I'm planning a sequel to get them back together, but I still think this stands okay as it is. Thank you for reading it though. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Nicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2006 - 10:32 pm Title: Epilogue

Oh, I hope you write a lovely sequel to this story. Fantastic.

Author's Response: I don't know about lovely, but there will be a sequel. I just have to gel a few more ideas together and off I go! Thanks, Nicki.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2006 - 10:23 pm Title: Epilogue

Yay! he's going back! right? he IS going back, right? how could he have let four whole months go by? why didn't Buffy go after him? well, I guess she didn't really know where he was, but still...NEED SEQUEL!!!! Please please please!!!

Author's Response: LOL, that's the plan. Of course this IS Spike, so leeway must be allowed for it to pan out the way its supposed to. The four months...hmmm, reconsidering that a little but he had to have time to let her live, let ehr be with beefy no-brain Riley, and find a warlock who could give him what he wanted in the amulet. Ultimately he stayed away for her--because he's that kind of guy. Okay, so that's more OOC than I'd ordinarily like, but it fits. LOL. You guessed it! There is a sequel in the works. No guarantees on how fast I cna write it, but be on the look out. Thank you so much for commenting throughout. It was wonderful to hear from you.

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