

Date: 11/07/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two
Loved it. Please update soon.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty two
loved it!!!!! great job. glad u posted. more please

Date: 11/05/2006 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-one
hahaha. I really love this story. :)

Date: 11/02/2006 - 11:23 am Title: Chapter Twenty-one
Loved this :D

Date: 11/01/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-one
This is great! I loved this chapter!

Date: 11/01/2006 - 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-one
Buffy isn't believing Spike yet.. so she doesn't know either what it means for Spike to be willing to become mortal for her.
And she even fainted *gg*
This part was fun :) Well not for Buffy *grins*

Date: 11/01/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Twenty-one
Ah, what a mess....

Date: 11/01/2006 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty-one
spike's in trouble now!!! hope buffy isn't too hard on him. post soon.

Date: 10/31/2006 - 11:50 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-one
great update again

Date: 10/31/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Oh Boy! She's going to pop after that explaination! Great job Brat!

Date: 10/31/2006 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
loved it but i hope she doesnt run

Date: 10/31/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Slowly we'll come at the end of the known chapters. Then I won't know what will happen *g*
And now the truth is out. Looking forward to hear Buffy's answer.

Date: 10/31/2006 - 01:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
This is the perfect place for a cliffy. I remember I was really anxious to see what comes next when you were still writing this :D

Date: 10/31/2006 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen
I think there's a glitch here or something. I am constantly seeing deep written as Addiep, for some reason though it is mostly in this story. I am sure you don't do this on purpose, but it happens very often. For instance in this chaper - "She swallowed and took a Addiep breath" - see? Yet, there are 'deep's that are written correctly. I don't know why or what is making this happen. :( For the longest time I couldn't decipher what you were trying to say at all when I ran into this. I thought that you were doing this specifically, but after about 5 chapter I realized that something else is doing this. It's really annoying, though *pout*
Other than that - well done. Sorry about the ranting :)

Date: 10/31/2006 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen
well done :D

Date: 10/31/2006 - 07:09 am Title: Chapter Twenty
I say that he's getting a bit ahead of himself:P But anyway, jay! He told her ooh ooh! oh she's gonna freak I'm sure heheh

Date: 10/31/2006 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Well, that was enough honesty to chase Buffy away and think Spike is an escapee from the Funny Farm.
Enjoying the updates.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
loved it sooooo much. wonder how buffy is going to respond to spike's question. boy, was it a question!!!! lol. please post soon.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
Bit early to spring immortality on the girl, eh, Spike?

Date: 10/29/2006 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
yeah! Buffy said it! Finally she admitted what she's feeling!
Great job Brat!

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:48 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Aaaargh nooo I want more! I've just read this story in one breath and it's amazing! I love it sooo much please update sooon! Ooh ooh I can't wait 'til she finds out about him it's so cool and it'd be awesome if she'd become immortal too - and I'm rambling...

Date: 10/29/2006 - 06:54 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Go Buffy! Love seeing her take the risk.
That comment about Artemis cracked me up! Talk about a woman who needs a man... BWAH!

Date: 10/29/2006 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Well, will Buffy be able to handle the truth?

Date: 10/29/2006 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Heeee! Addie is new as a name for Spike's mom :) I wonder if I'm guessing right about the name.
Yeah, a childhood like Spike had isn't easy to explain to a mortal ;-) Addie saw it too. For Spike this all (the special things) was normal. Yeah, Spike is stuck between a rock and a hard place... he can't tell her and he can't lie to her well without getting caught. He wants her to be with him whatever it takes (becoming mortal or immortal). But now he knows that he reached another step he wanted to reach: Buffy told him she is falling in love with him, yay :)

Date: 10/29/2006 - 01:44 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
wow. didn't think buffy would admitt it so soon. i mean yeah, this is a good way into the story but this is buffy we're talkking about. she is soooo stubborn. loved it. please post soon.