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Reviewer: Ashley Granchester Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2007 - 04:42 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

OMG, I just started today to read this fic and I must tell you that I’m speechless; I just could not stop until I got to the final chapter you posted.

The story is great and original, and so well written; I can’t wait to read more and more so please keep it up and thanks for gifting us with such great reading material.

Ash.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 05:36 am Title: The Monster in the Man

Their fighting got hot but the same way their issues did. And Buffy hit the bullseye now, why William is so angry. I hope they can go over it and sort it all out. Looking forward to the answer (how Buffy got sick). Good chapter, don't worry.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2007 - 02:20 am Title: The Monster in the Man

I love the way you have William wanting her so badly, but just like Spike, wanting all of her~ not being satisfied with anything less. For the few times that Spike actually threw Buffy out, it was because would occassionally get the self-respect that this William seems to have. I also adore the way Buffy finally "gets" where William's anger comes from, and how she realizes how much she's hurt him. Excellent update! I'm really looking forward to more. Soon, please? ;)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:39 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

nice update. It'll be intersting to see why she created Sunnydale

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 01:54 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

Even more interesting...

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 07:44 am Title: The Monster in the Man

This is incredible.

From light-hearted to sweltering to emotionally devastating and finally suspenseful, this chapter is perfection.

I am reduced to begging for more...



Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 07:42 am Title: The Monster in the Man

This is one of the chapters I have been waiting for, although maybe Buffy could have gotten a little nooky first.;-) Creating Spike the way she did in reaction to her perceived betrayel by Will makes perfect sense. It also fits very well that Will would be angry with her because of Spike. Very well done!! I can't wait to find out the answer to the question she posed to the doctor at the end.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2007 - 04:02 am Title: The Monster in the Man

Whoa! William was really harboring some serious issues, should be interesting to see if he and Buffy can work past them. Great chapter.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 11:18 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

very good question. why did buffy get sick??? and will willaim have enough heart in him to forgive her for what she's done/??? loved it lots and lots. post soon.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2007 - 11:10 pm Title: The Monster in the Man

i hate William.........

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 10:47 pm Title: Getting all physical

Ah crap, I was all excited for the FUN physical stuff...oh well. Cool chap!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 04:35 pm Title: Getting all physical

Happy New Year to you, too!
Good that the dinner went better; Joyce is really trying then.
Awe, loved William teaching her to defend herself, making her remember how to do it, through her memories / inner eye.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 03:43 pm Title: Getting all physical

Go Buffy! Kick some ass. Good to see her getting some of her own back :) Happy New Year!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 08:45 am Title: Getting all physical

Wonderful chapter! Loved the sparring session. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: ella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 07:01 am Title: An unexpected offer

"The Divinci Code" is a joke, right? ;) Apart from that, your story is well written and interesting so far.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 01:40 am Title: Getting all physical

awww! how sweet of william! i love him!

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 12:33 am Title: Getting all physical

Heehee, loved the sparring, wish William would get over the Spike hate

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2007 - 12:28 am Title: Getting all physical

loved it lots. buffy's adjusting well. and william is sooooo in love with her. wonder how their gonna get over the whole "you look just like my mortal enemy turned boytoy" thing. great job. please post soon.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 05:55 pm Title: Getting all physical

teehee...he's teaching her how to fight! how perfect! this is excellent...can't wait for another chapter!

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 05:37 pm Title: Getting all physical

Nice; very, very nice!

Yes, William is her Spike; although I do appreciate that he isn't happy with being the basis for a character who had so much blood on his hands.

I adore the way you write and was delighted to see an update.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2007 - 05:17 pm Title: Getting all physical

Please don't leave us hanging! I love this story, and this is a fabulous chapter. Please let the sparring continue!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2006 - 10:06 am Title: Promises

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Just another girl

Well done :)

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2006 - 08:41 pm Title: Promises

Even though it is sad, I look foward to more

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: Promises

Very touching and emotional chapter. Joyce's speech about how she took care of her and had to take care of her was poignant and got it across how worried she is and what she went through while Buffy was ill. Great job :)

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