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Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 08:37 pm Title: The ups and downs

Move out, Buffy, move out

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: The real world

Just starting readin this. I tend to let fics get to at least 10,000 words before I start them. Very interesting idea, and I love how you turned Normal Again into an AU. :D

Reviewer: brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 07:05 pm Title: The ups and downs

can't really blame buffy for her blow up at her parents there. She did live a whole other life, grew up in that life, whether or not it was in fact real. What Buffy in Sunnydale went through did help shape the real Buffy now...it's hard for them to understand, but I can see where Buffy would be frustrated with that. Great job, babe :)

Tried the sweet potatoes yet? :)

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 06:56 pm Title: The ups and downs

i understand why buffy's parents are so worried and concerned but buffy is absolutely right. those experiences are apart of who she is even if they didn''t really happen. her parent's just expect her to be like she was before and it's just not gonna happen, especially after everything that she's been through. great job. please post soon. loved it bunches.

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Date: 12/03/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: The ups and downs

I'm so glad that she's taken that stand. And an interesting peek into the goings on contemporary to her hospitalisation...

Awaiting more as always.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2006 - 05:40 am Title: An unexpected offer

Great chapter :D

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Date: 11/30/2006 - 05:35 am Title: The night continues

Loved it :D

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Date: 11/30/2006 - 05:27 am Title: New friends

Loved it :D

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: An unexpected offer

A nice, cozy view of the two of them working together-- very sweet. Mad props and big love coming your way-- More soon, please?

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 03:50 pm Title: An unexpected offer

awwww.....so cute and non angsty which leads me to believe that angst is probably coming up soon. great job. loved it. lots.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 12:23 pm Title: An unexpected offer

Ah.. it was about the job and Buffy did think the worst... it's hard for her to trust life not to send her hindrances in her way. Good to see her so carefree at the end of the chapter, at her new job.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2006 - 03:50 am Title: An unexpected offer

Awww... sweet chapter! Can't wait to read more. :D

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 08:32 pm Title: An unexpected offer

i love their playfulness!!!!

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: An unexpected offer

awww! they are adorable together!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: An unexpected offer

Very sweet. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:28 pm Title: An unexpected offer

Aww, yay! They're so happy together! Absolutely love that he offered her a job...they have such fabulous chemistry! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: The night continues

Wow, hot kiss. Love that he was tender and thoughtful and Buffy was blown away--or was she connecting it to Spike and all the times she wouldn't let herself get carried away with him? Whichever it was, I love where it's going.

Megan

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:25 pm Title: An unexpected offer

They're just so adorable togehter, love it. She seems to be adjusting well and their relationship is slowly growing day by day. Great installment :)

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: An unexpected offer

I really like this!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: New friends

Wonderful. Was worried for her when it came to being put on the spot, but I'm loving William. Just one thing, sometimes reading Buffy saying accidental Britishisms throw me right out of a story.

Buffy raised her eyebrows at him. “Try it and I might have to kick your arse.”

Do you have a beta? A beta could catch little things like that and it would improve the flow and make the characterisations sharper. I hope I haven't offended you as I know how easy it is to be sensitive about such things Despite that hiccup, I'm seriously loving your story.

Megan

Author's Response: Thanks for your review Megan. As an Australian author I have no doubt I make these sorts of gaffs all the time and just don't know I'm dong it. So yes I absolutely do want to know when I do it, otherwise how can I improve my writing. If you feel like putting you hand up I'd be happy to send you the next chapter for checking. *big grin*

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 06:08 pm Title: The true taste of wine

Oh wonderful! I'm so glad that Buffy's being forced to voice this, as I'm sure it's something we've all wanted to know!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:57 pm Title: Beer turned you into a what...?

An adorable chapter. I love the parallels, that Buffy is going to this Spike--let's hope she knows herself better than she did in Sunnydale and treats him well.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:51 pm Title: How's Now For You

This is a wonderful concept. I'm feeling really sorry for Buffy's confusion and am looking forward to finding out why Buffy doesn't remember William at all.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:44 pm Title: Why are you here?

Oh wow, profound at the end. Really enjoying this.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:37 pm Title: The real world

Wow, very intriguing beginning. I think you've set up a really viable plot option. Looking forward to learning more about Buffy's new life.

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