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Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: An unexpected offer

I'm leaving you LOTS of love! The dialogue between these two is perfect; I can picture the scenes so vividly and the more I read the more charmed I am.

I'm sure that there will be trials ahead, but given the way you write, I'm certain I'll enjoy the journey.

Thank you for putting a smile on my face on a Sunday night as I prepare for the gruelling week ahead....

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2006 - 05:11 pm Title: An unexpected offer

At least he's lightening up, yeah? ^.^

Reviewer: SixStringBaby Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/21/2006 - 01:41 am Title: The night continues

Woohoo for first kisses! I have an inkling, but I'm excited to find out what Will's idea is.

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 03:56 pm Title: The night continues

Awwww...that was so sweet. I love how he's taking it slow and easy with her and how she's responsive to him. Great job, babe :)

Reviewer: zeta0497 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 08:59 am Title: The night continues

That was so sweet!! I love this story :o)

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 08:06 am Title: The night continues

Whilst I have been hoping for a reason as to Buffy's previous mental state, I realise that that may not be the story you want to tell. Nevertheless I am enjoying the story you are telling and really feel for Buffy having to assimilate into such a different world.

Lovely kiss at the end there; I'm all a-tingle!

Author's Response: I generally don't like to give clues for what will happen in future chapters. But I will say this: the story isn't over yet. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 07:09 am Title: The night continues

Aww... What a sweet goodnight kiss! Loved the chapter. Can't wait to read more. :D

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 06:13 am Title: The night continues

Buffy is dancing happily... I guess she forgot for a moment that her mother controls her steps.
And again Joyce stopped the fun.
The goodnight kiss? The way Buffy was affected she loved it *g*
Wonder what idea William got to see Buffy more often.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 04:38 am Title: The night continues

Damn annoying mothers...

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 02:27 am Title: The night continues

this was a really good chapter (even with the joyce phone call) great job. why do i feel like badness awaits in the next update??? post soon.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/20/2006 - 02:06 am Title: The night continues

woo! love it!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 11:48 pm Title: The night continues

loved the kiss!!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: The night continues

Very sweet-- I love the internal debate that is waging inside of him before he finally decides to kiss her. Can't wait to see what he proposes next-- hopefully shacking up!

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 11:16 pm Title: The night continues

I was iffy about this when I started, but I was hooked @ the first chapter! I really like it and hope to see more updates soon!

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/19/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: The night continues

teehee...yay! Happy Spuffy kissage! Love it! Poor Buffy is suffering from a bit of overprotective parentage, though...hopefully Will will be an nice remedy for that :-) can't wait for their date!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/17/2006 - 12:28 pm Title: New friends

I wonder if Buffy answered the question why she hated Spike so much....
Good that Buffy didn't back down and agreed to meet some friends of William. Zac is fun *g*
Seems to me that Buffy will fit into Spike's group :)

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 08:46 pm Title: New friends

Oh boy. I feel for her. This has to be hard. And she must be missing her friends even if they don't exist. The new ones are cool, but you know...it's just not the same. Even if Zac is like Xander. :) I'm loving this!.

Author's Response: Absolutely. I had such a hard time developing new friends for Buffy because I love the Sunnydale characters so much. The hardest part of writing this story is sticking with the initial concept in its strictest sense. But I'm really glad that I have because it's been great fun to write.

Reviewer: a lady never tells Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 11:44 am Title: The true taste of wine

wow. that last sentence really got me. bravo!

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 05:54 am Title: New friends

i absolutely love William!!! he's is so sweet!!! and his friends seem cool too! :) more please.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 04:07 am Title: New friends

William's friends seem really nice, I hope the rest of the evening goes well. Loved how William covered for Buffy at the end of the chapter. Great update!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2006 - 03:03 am Title: New friends

Interesting to see her try to interact with a new group of folks. Loved Zac's line about Buffy thinking Spike was rude!

Reviewer: sevvy_o@lj.com Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 10:04 pm Title: New friends

Awww, William is the sweetest. I really love this story. =)

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 09:20 pm Title: New friends

Ooh, new friends! I like them already. Sweet chapter--I love how Buffy and William are around one another.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 06:18 pm Title: New friends

Seems like a successful start to the night. What along, arduous adjustment this is going to be for Buffy and wha a wonderfulfriend she has in William.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: New friends

Yes, William is a rude bastard, lol

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