

Date: 04/11/2007 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Great!Keep on writing please!

Date: 04/11/2007 - 02:48 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Oh, boy......now they're getting in deep. Still want William to go and make something of himself somewhere safe and far away.

Date: 04/11/2007 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
He got rid of Drusilla... smat move! And also, he finally admits to himself and Buffy, that he needs her (although he is very drunk)... they still have a long way to go.

Date: 04/11/2007 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
wow... intense.

Date: 04/11/2007 - 12:18 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
i really thought spike was going to leave la. but i guess that was just wistful thinking on my part. great job. loved it lots and lots. post soon.

Date: 04/10/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm so happy that happiness is on the way!!
Feed the muse!

Date: 04/10/2007 - 10:05 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I'm glad he FINALLY left her. Maybe now some progress will be possible. He still doesn't know about Liam's abuse. Buffy's words were just crying out for help. If only Spike could be her knight in shining armor. Now there's a chance. Hopefully he takes it.

Date: 04/10/2007 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
I wish the two could have a happy ending. Their love story is so sweet and you are a very good writer!

Date: 04/10/2007 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Man oh man! That raw need they have for each other is at once touching and so very sad. Heart wrenching even.
Really wonderful chapter. Looking forward to more. =)

Date: 04/10/2007 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
This is good-- while they both know that things aren't going to be easy, at least they're acknowledging their needs to themselves, if not to each other-- but then again, Spike sort of did at the end of the chapter. Only question is whether things are going to stay open between them in the future, and just how (if everything goes well) they're going to escape from Angelus. :) Loving the fic!

Date: 04/10/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
What a great chapter! I love that he wrote her poetry!
I love this story

Date: 04/10/2007 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
more please

Date: 04/10/2007 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
YAY an update. I love this story, really really love it, and this was a fantastic chapter. I can't wait to see the interaction between them in the next one. Thanks for a great update!

Date: 04/05/2007 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
As usual, I will be anxiously awaiting another chapter.

Date: 04/04/2007 - 05:46 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
yeah, they wouldn't let Spike visit at a shelter. What fun would that be?

Date: 04/02/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
Hooo doggy, that was hot. I do miss the old William though, and I'm glad that Buffy can see that he isn't completely gone. I really hope that things can work out for them and it won't always be this dark . I totally respect the way that you want to do this story, and can see why you don't want Buffy to just leave Liam, because honestly in some cases that isn't the way it happens. You're right about that. Can't wait for another chapter to be up!

Date: 04/02/2007 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I have become just totally obsessed with this fic. Something about their shared misery and their fear and refusal to own up to each other about how much they care, it's just so sad and lonely. And it feels like Buffy's so close to being able to admit how she feels for him, and you just want Spike to be as sweet to her as you know he wants to be. Even though you know he's not ready for that yet, and Buffy's not ready to accept it from him yet. But man, I just want to give Buffy a hug in this fic.

Date: 04/02/2007 - 07:58 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
I totally agree with your A/N about Buffy. Women that are abused don't always make the right decisions. Let's hope Spike will help her too

Date: 04/02/2007 - 07:26 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Love it!
I really like the dualism you've set up here. Buffy in a physically and mentally abusive relationship and similarly she draws all the neglect she feels onto William. I don't think she means to but she treats him like crap and I can't wait to see how it's all going to unfold, and if they'll both stop being so stubborn and realize that they're perfect for each other beyond just comfort.

Date: 04/02/2007 - 01:41 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
yeah....buffy going to a shelter would not work in this story. i just...wow. it was really hard for me to read this chapter cuz it reminded me so much of the show in s6. at least buffy's not causing physical damage. she's still using him though and that's gotta smart. i mean, spike may want her too but this has to piss him off, her doing this to him. i thought he'd give her a piece of his mind in this chapter but i guess you're saving that one for later (i hope). forget cheating on liam, buffy has got to know that hurting william like this is wrong.
okay...i'm done. lol. buffy's just really high on my shit list! lol. i can imagine that it's like that for a lot of your reviewers. anyway, love it bunches. can't wait for more. amazing job!!!

Date: 04/01/2007 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
My initial thought was "no! don't touch the bedspread!". It is a rare talent that can make me forget my fear of cooties, but you, Addie, have succeeded. (And these are a particularly dangerous breed of cooties - sleazy motel cooties!) Bravo!
Cooties forgotten, I can't get over how heartbreaking these two are. Thinking back to where they started, their relationship had such a sweet innocence to it. Now they are drawn together, in a terrible place, all innocence gone.
I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait to see where you take us next. They can only go up from here, right? (I know it might take a while to get there, but I'm in it for the long haul!)

Date: 04/01/2007 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
One last time... Of course. But to truly play out this little romp like it were the last time, that is well worth the deception. They need each other and I just love it. Amazing chapter, please, update soon.

Date: 04/01/2007 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter One
takes more than that to squick me!! i think it great so far!!

Date: 04/01/2007 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen
I love this story. You have me hooked on every chapter.

Date: 04/01/2007 - 11:02 am Title: Chapter Seventeen
Wonderful chapter. Their pull to each other is both heart-breaking and heart-warming at the same time. And I can't see this being their last time - famous last words.