

Date: 11/08/2006 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter Five
I really like this story! It's so hot!!! I wonder when they'll both give in to their desires. Hopefully it'll be soon!
I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update as soon as you can!
Thanks!

Date: 11/07/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Five
Buffy is still very young, and Angel is a lot older than her. I guess with him around she have to act / be more mature, doesn't have the opportunity to be 'young and careless' for once, in the sense of having fun.
Oh yeah, and how Buffy likes to flirt with William.
You almost had me with Buffy's dream. She too did think it was real first *g*.
Maybe that was what made Buffy impressible for William, being sexual frustrated?
I wonder why Buffy is doing nothing: It's not that she would be welcome to do her old job, but isn't there a job she could take or is it Liam that wants her to be 'his wife only', a trophy for him?
Liam doesn't know what's going on (like knowing Buffy).

Date: 11/07/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Five
Buffy should have let william comfort her more. Probably right though it wouldn't have been a good idea. lol.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter Five
Okay, that dream was, uh...whoooweee! *fans self*
Considering her ramping up of the flirtation at the beginning (stepmom's foot + stepson's penis = bad idea), I was actually glad to see Buffy tell William that being in her bedroom with them both underdressed was not a good idea. I want to see them get together, of course! But I think I would feel more sympathetic to Buffy if giving into her desire for William wasn't just because she's immature and needs to keep having male attention even though she's married now. It's funny because while part of me feels protective towards William, another part thinks that he's already more mature than Buffy is.
I'm really intersted to see how things develop now that Liam's revealed his temper. Like William brought up in a previous chapter, Buffy is completely dependent on Liam financially - it'll be interesting to see how long it takes for Liam to start taking even more advantage of that than he already has.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter Five
Great update. I like Buffy acting her age around Will and stuffy old Angel. Will is so much more her style.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter Five
Amazing chap. I always thought that buffy'd get a divorce or something before they did anything together but the taboo makes it that much more interseting. Not to mention original.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 06:33 am Title: Chapter Five
hmmmmmm dreams are starting nothing like a good wet dream. Liam finally showing he is just a total prick. I mean really why have a wife anyways, he just wants a pretty jewel on his arm when he needs one. They have escort services for that. Well things are going to get rather complicated from here on in,but hey i am with you all the way.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 05:49 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow, Laim is showing his true color shuh? I just hope he doesn't start to physically abuse Buffy, that's never any good. Great update. I was rushing back and fourth waiting for you to post. Need more,lol.

Date: 11/07/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Five
Liam is a jerk, and I can't wait for it to blow up in his face. Buffy is naughty to tease poor William like this... and I think she is starting to realize that it is not meaningless flirting at all. please update soon...

Date: 11/07/2006 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter Five
oh oh, seems like William had to witness those outburst more than once and judging by the dream, Buffy is soon going to be in a lot of trouble LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter

Date: 11/07/2006 - 01:17 am Title: Chapter Five
Wow, what a hot dream. *eg*
I'm pretty sure that Buffy would so like that her dream comes true. ;)
Oh god, Liam is such an idiot. I think he has an affair or something like that. He's acting all strange and treats his wife like shit.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Love the story!

Date: 11/06/2006 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
The monster seems like he's lost his leash-- should be an interesting rest of the summer. You do a great job of hinting at the kind of man Liam is when William pokes his head in and is glad her face is just tear-stained-- very well put.

Date: 11/06/2006 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Five
Buffy's definitely playing with fire where William is concerned. Rubbing her foot against him like that? Definitely attracting trouble. However, I can't blame her at all, especially with Liam being such an asshole. Poor Buffy did not need him to overreact like that; though I can see where that might lead her to really start doubting her relationship with Liam right now.
Great as always!

Date: 11/06/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Five
good update but just out of curiosity is liam doing any cheating on buffy?

Date: 11/06/2006 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Five
In his boxers!!!!! Sorry, but the image of the two of them in their next to nothings in the bedroom is a little hard to take. And then they just got dressed and went downstairs to eat breakfast? This isn't going to last much longer. Will it?
Sd

Date: 11/06/2006 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Five
Buffy's flirting was charming, but not harmless at all. She has William under her roof 24/7. He was already hyper aware of her, and the flirting has ramped that up even more. The dream was erotic, and now her guilt has caused a misstep with Liam.
You're doing a good job keeping Liam from being a complete jerk, so far. You're painting signs of past abuse (William checking for bruising?) in his marriages. I'm looking forward to the decisive event that gets Buffy and William together - I hope Liam blows it in a really big way!

Date: 11/06/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
Liam is such a jerk. Can't wait for Spuffy. Keep up the good writing.

Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Five
That was mean of him! I hope she leaves his ass and goes with William. Hopefully that'll be soon. Update soon please!

Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Five
Oh Liam is such a prick, and Buffy is just starting to see the mean streak that he has. it's a good thing we know who is there to appreciate her and comfort her. I think he chose Buffy not because he loved her, but because he felt she wasn't in a position to make demands on him, and would be another trophy wife. I love how the plot thickens.....great chapter and thanks

Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter Five
Wow, Liam is quite the meannie.

Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Five
I knew it was only a matter of time before Angel showed his true colors!!! I love the UST !!!! Please update soon...this story is HOT!!!

Date: 11/06/2006 - 08:03 pm Title: Chapter Five
Wow I love Buffy flirting with poor William !!!!! This was a hot chapter !! I loved it

Date: 11/06/2006 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Five
"Relieved he saw her face was only tearstained." as spposed to say, bruised? I think William knows more about his father than he's letting on.

Date: 11/06/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Five
Hmm... Trouble in paradise. That dream was quite the impressive little bout, and I can't wait to see how things will continue with these two passionate individuals. Great chapter, as always, and I can't wait for more.
P.S. Hate to bring it up here, but I completely support you about the BSV.

Date: 11/06/2006 - 07:49 pm Title: Chapter Five
Hmm... Trouble in paradise. That dream was quite the impressive little bout, and I can't wait to see how things will continue with these two passionate individuals. Great chapter, as always, and I can't wait for more.
P.S. Hate to bring it up here, but I completely support you about the BSV.