

Date: 10/31/2006 - 09:27 am Title: Chapter Three
i can't wait to read next chapter!!

Date: 10/31/2006 - 08:17 am Title: Chapter Three
I cant wait to see what happens, I want some spuffy action! Amazing!

Date: 10/31/2006 - 08:02 am Title: Chapter Three
It's too bad young women fall for jerks such as Liam. Buffy needs to grow up a bit.

Date: 10/31/2006 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Three
william sounds down-right yummy! i don't blame buffy for staring :) lucky girl hehehe
very much enjoying this fic :)

Date: 10/31/2006 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Three
oh yeah!!!!! big trouble is coming for these two but trouble makes for a better ending. you've proved that with all of your stories and i expect no different with this one. great job. please post soon.

Date: 10/31/2006 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Three
I really like this, can't wait to read more. Buffy and Spike both lusting after each other, yum. Why did Eve lie and say Spike tried to molest her? Was she just a cold hearted bitch just like Darla? And Laim, what a jerk, he believed his wife over his son, grrrr. Lovely update need more. *smile*

Date: 10/30/2006 - 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Three
Hehe...it's already happening! Update soon please!

Date: 10/30/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Three
Still reading, and eager for more!

Date: 10/30/2006 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Three
This sounds like a very cool storyline. Hope Spike and Buffy's lunch date goes well.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Three
That must skip a generation…
*iz ded from laffing*

Date: 10/30/2006 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter Three
"That must skip a generation…"--Love all the little slights at Angel. And I can't say that I'm at all fond of Eve in this reality either. Tramp. And thos two cannot fight the inevitable pull together. Love that. Can't wait for the trouble!

Date: 10/30/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Three
Lead him right into trouble, indeed. Interesting how they both seem to know they should stay away from each other, and yet they keep drawing together. I can already see that things between Liam and William are probably going to get even more tense than they already are. I loved Buffy's little thought, "that must skip a generation." I definitely laughed when I read that.
Great job, Addie. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Date: 10/30/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Three
That must skip a generation...LOL

Date: 10/29/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter Two
Love the start to this story, can't wait to see where it goes. Four years isn't much of an age difference, so I have no idea why ppl would have a problem with it. Look foward to your next update!

Date: 10/28/2006 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Two
A) Not gratuitous. I know exactly why you wrote them and I hope they keep away all trolls!
b) Nice story so far. Poor William. He's obviously headed for treacherous waters.
I'm looking forward to more.
Sd

Date: 10/27/2006 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Two
Aww poor william. Now if I was buffy I'd be oogling william a little bit more but thats just me, lol.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter One
the steam is already building... I'm on board!
Sd

Date: 10/27/2006 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter Two
William may be shy but he sees a lot (means he can think how awkward it must be for Buffy to have a step-son hardly younger than her).
Yeah, but Liam took it out (the William is there now) on him by ignoring him. Well William came between the two (Darla and Liam) and he lost (was lost) when they got divorced. His mother working to and he stayed behind. (And I wonder a bit if Buffy fell in love with Liam because of the age difference; she never had a very good father.)
But when William says that Liam's response to him is the same as every year than what Liam said to Buffy because of not telling her doesn't sound honest.
And with 'Buffy's little voice' the next weeks will sure be interesting.
And that means it will not only be a long summer, it will be interesting too. *g*

Date: 10/27/2006 - 09:32 am Title: Chapter Two
Oh my...it's funny to think of a 22 year old playing Mrs. Robinson, but poor William seems like such an innocent, it looks like that's the dynamic for now. I wonder if Buffy's own immaturity is part of why she would flirt/tease so obviously when she's married - or if it's just that she can't resist William on a deeper level.
I'm really looking forward to learning more about Buffy and William's backstories, and seeing how they affect how the story progresses.
Great job!

Date: 10/27/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Two
What a predicament for poor William! Very cute-- that strange interaction that they are developing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 02:59 am Title: Chapter One
Sounds like Liam is a real piece of work, as is William's mother. Nice sparkage-- can't wait to see how this unfolds.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 01:24 am Title: Chapter Two
Long summer indeed. Challenges to over come for sure, and I can hardly wait. Really fabulous beginning.

Date: 10/27/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter One
Have to say I wondered where the whole Oedipus thing was going to fit in here, and have to say I'm liking the dynamic already. And Liam is a right bastard. Poor little William. Glad to see there's already sparkage after a whole 5 minutes. Angst included, this will be a wonderful ride, I'm sure.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
ohhhhhhhhhhh baby it's going to be nice long hot summer. ahhhhhhhh dump the ass and go with William, atleast he is a man. more more more more