

Date: 10/26/2006 - 07:26 pm Title: Chapter One
technicality from like a bilion marriages ago. please this is going to be much fun. Maybe Buffy will bring Willaim out of his shell...

Date: 10/26/2006 - 03:23 pm Title: Chapter Two
I say angst away. I really enjoyed the first two chapters and I'll be interested to see how the story progresses.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 02:47 pm Title: Chapter Two
loving it

Date: 10/26/2006 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter Two
I like it so far, seems promising. Look forward to more.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 10:42 am Title: Chapter Two
Good job highlighting Liam's deceit in the true nature of his relationship with William. The attraction between Buffy and William is already bubbling under the surface, and I'm looking forward to them struggling against it.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter Two
Haha no chasing me off, amazing chapter!

Date: 10/26/2006 - 08:03 am Title: Chapter Two
Flirty Buffy just can't resist Will ,can she? Interesting

Date: 10/26/2006 - 07:57 am Title: Chapter One
I love this orginal idea. Can't wait to see what is in store.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter Two
I LOVE this version of William! He's adorably sweet, shy and conflicted. I can't wait to see how this story proceedes.

Date: 10/26/2006 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter One
Wow, your author's notes have gotten to be epic length. Amazing how other writers can bear criticism without all these warnings and you need paragraphs... Hm. Maybe that says something...
Basically I just find it hilarious how worked up you get and how indignant when someone says "boo" about anything you write. You really shoud just state, "praise only, please". It would really save space.
Author's Response: Your flaming me about author's notes? And trying to talk about something you know nothing about? Wow. How very sad. Go get a life now. Shoo.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Two
yeah another chapter! lovin it!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:48 pm Title: Chapter Two
I eagerly await more.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
Awwww, what did his parents do to poor William? I hope Buffy will be the one to raise his self esteem. I want to find out what Eve said against him.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter Two
Hmm, wonder what those allegations were that Eve made... could be salacious.
I really, really liked this chapter. Already I can tell there's going to be a lot of sexual tension between Buffy and Will, and it's going to tear Buffy up inside- which I suppose would be where some of the forewarned angst comes in. Beyond that, I won't speculate. It would be a bit pointless at this early stage. I'm ready for whatever you plan to throw our way though.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Two
why doi feel like angel is a complete asshole when it comes to william??? maybe it's just me. anyway, loved it lots. can already tell that buffy and william will be doing things that they are not supposed to! he he he!!! great job. loved it sooo much.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 07:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
AWESOME! So I guess it's still the same update schedule as BHTFY
Great chapter. Loved it!
Sexual tension is RIiIiIiIiIiSiNg! (sing-songey voice xD)
Lol, hope too read more soon.
See ya!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
Wow...is it getting hot in here or is it just me? Hehe...I can't wait to see how they deal with this! Update soon please!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter One
Ooooo! I'm liking this so far! How many times has LIam been married?

Date: 10/25/2006 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Two
If Buffy tries to bind and gag that voice, I'm getting out my scissors! lol! Good chapter. Shy William is always a treat. :)

Date: 10/25/2006 - 05:55 pm Title: Chapter One
sounds good already!!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 04:54 pm Title: Chapter One
Looking forward to this story already. I for one love your stories, angsty or otherwise.
Really great beginning!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter One
The age difference doesn't bother me at all, nor does the heads up on the angst. I've never regretted getting sucked into any of your stories - the journey and the payoff are always worth any discomfort I might experience along the way.
This was a nice chapter to introduce the main players; as always, I'm looking forward to what you've got in store for us.

Date: 10/24/2006 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter One
oh poor Will....what horrible parents and buffy married herself a real loser.
can't wait for more

Date: 10/24/2006 - 03:46 pm Title: Chapter One
Top 10 list why someone is addicted to Addie's stories (I got two points so far but still collecting:
♦ To read angst even if one doesn't like it.
♦ To read Spike/other or Buffy/others even if one doesn't like it
... *check* Addicted :)
I'll try to be brave and behave myself too and try not to complain. *g* Though I may whine a bit about Buffy or Spike when I want to kick them when they are too stupid. Just ignore it. ;-)
When I heard your new story title I wondered why Spike would fall in love with his mother. Now I understand. ..
And I read your warnings.
Seems Buffy and Angel are together (married) for a month now. No wonder she doesn't know everything (like the names of Angel's ex-wives). Buffy was a Peppermint Stick dancer? Wonder if that what I mean it is. (*notes Liam's attitude not to want to be disturbed, not even by his wife* and the furious gaze... ~ and on the other hand, the current.) I wonder how many times Liam was married, three times maybe? Darla, Lilah and Eve.. seems so.
Ah well.. I trust you to write a happy spuffy ending.. so I think I can bear what is to come. The songs did point something out ... but I love it so far.

Date: 10/24/2006 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter One
Yayyy!!!!! Another story from Addie!!
Let me tell ya, ur not gonna get any flames from this girl right here! No! I LOOOOVE where this is going!
Keep going, girl! Its gonna be awesome! U have all my support!
Bye!