

Date: 10/24/2006 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter One
LOL! I know this will be an angsty fic (because I can darkly remember you said so in the beginning.. ;) ), but at the moment it's a lot of fun to read! I pray for Buffy that Will is going to pull her out of this fake, superficial world she's obviously living in.
I have to get used to the ages here, I think, especially the difference between Buffy and Spike, but I think I can handle it, because where I come from, it's quite a usual thing.. Can't wait to see how this will be going on. P.S.: I couldn't stand Liam Angelus at all from the first second onwards. *gg*

Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter One
I really REALLY like this fic. Pretty fucking original, posting regularly? *is hopeful*

Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter One
wow, this sounds like it's going to be a great story. I can't wait for the big angst you promised. lol, I'm one of those that loves it. lol, loved your A/N in the beginning. :) update soon!
-manda

Date: 10/24/2006 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter One
Good start, and I enjoyed the confrontational scene between Darla and Liam. Liam being so dismissive and condescending toward Buffy rankles, and I'm sure you're going to build on that. William being out of high school and ready to start college makes him seventeen or eighteen, right? His shyness and passivity were well realized. He seems intimidated by his forceful parents. Buffy was a dancer at The Peppermint Stick? Nice place to meet your future husband!

Date: 10/24/2006 - 02:39 am Title: Chapter One
I'm a little uncomfortable with him being only eighteen, so used to him being older then her but your one of my favorite author's so I'll get over it. I know that this will be as good as anything else you've written. Can't wait to read more. Will's had to grow up pretty fast I'm sure, so he's probably very mature for his age and in need of alot of love. Hope you can update soon. Kudos to your muse.

Date: 10/24/2006 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter One
Count me on board the angsty train! *grin* I was shocked, yes, and now I can see the angst you were warning about, but I'm still on board. Love it!

Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:58 pm Title: Chapter One
Love all of your stories. Can't figure out why if some one doesn't like they still read and complain
So far this sounds like a good story

Date: 10/23/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm sorta scared to review... ;)
I am intrigued by the premise and will probably once again break my no-HumanAU rule for you. Eager to see more.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm with you Addie, as always. I can't help feeling very sorry for William, but I know eventually Buffy will bring him out of his shell. and the fact that Liam is a prick...well no surprise. Although I see Buffy has many surprises with him, and obviously not of the good kind. Looking forward to more and thanks

Date: 10/23/2006 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter One
I'm on board!
It's a bit of an intriguing premise. I don't think I've seen a fic with this kind of set-up before.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Will it follow the same posting schedule as Been Here Too Few Years did in the end?

Date: 10/23/2006 - 07:10 pm Title: Chapter One
ok you've got my attention and im interested so please post more soon :)

Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter One
Woo-Hoo!! Another Addie fic!!! Love the start of this. This ought to be very, very interesting. Funny how Liam didn't mention how many times he had been married or having children. Have to wonder how many other things he's left out. Hmmm?
Can't wait for more.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:20 pm Title: Chapter One
Ok, you had me worried about the title at first, lol. I've read that story, I know how it ends... so I'm glad it isn't exactly like the real Oedipus. Phew! Well... at least I hope not. If Buffy starts wearing pins in her outfits, I'll close my eyes, lol!
So just double checking the ages, William's 18, and Buffy's 22? I'm totally fine with the age difference, I just like to know ages so I can picture them better ya know?
Sounds good so far! Keep up the good work. ;)

Date: 10/23/2006 - 06:06 pm Title: Chapter One
You must mock them when they get piss and moan! It seems that no matter what you say or when they do, but I and I bet a few others too, back you 100%! FYI: I love that your not going to let anyone push you around on this one. I for one will be reading it.
So, William is Buffys step-son, different. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter One
just when i think you couldn't possibly come up with any more amazing spuffy stories to write, you go and post something like this. LOVED IT!!! great start. i personally love angst. it makes the happy ending worth all the shit the characters have to put up with in the story. I completely understand you not wanting readers flaming you or the story. i wouldn't want that either. they've read the warnings. if they don't like what you're posting, they don't have to read it. if flaming does become a problem (I REALLY HOPE IT DOESN'T) and you are forced to remove this story from this site, please let me know where you'll be posting. i have a feeling that this is gonna be a very intersting fic and I can't wait to read more.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter One
LOL! Well with all the warnings, how could I resist? *wink*
Looking forward to this. You have a certain style with your writing, which usually is very angst heavy. However, that being said, it always makes the payoff that much more delish as with BHTFY. I have come to trust your instincts so lead on....
Great start!
Cheers!

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:54 pm Title: Chapter One
I think it sweet and Liam is an asshole already :D

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter One
it changes to see William so shy and reserved. I dont mind the stepmother/stepson relationship. I mean, it's not like they know each other. Nice chapter ;)

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:48 pm Title: Chapter One
well... the title left me wondering. i mean... oedipus' angst is way too much... and icky! ;P
but i think that i could manage an evil liam till i have sweet william along in the ride. buffy seemed a naive cheerleder in love... how could she have missed 3 (?) wives? lol... i hope she'll come to her senses soon (maybe will could help her, huh?)

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:39 pm Title: Chapter One
YAY!!! Another Addie fic :-) So far so good, I love the concept and shy sweet Will has stolen my heart....not positive he'll stay that way but I fully intend to keep reading and find out. I love me some angst so BRING IT ON!
Just a mundane question, will you be keeping the same update schedule you had with Been Here?

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter One
your stories are always fantastic and fantastically written. fluff, smut, or angst; it does not matter, i know it will be a journey well worth taking.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Chapter One
Another Interesting premise, I already dislike Liam, but that is not news for me... Darla being so cold toward her son threw me off a bit, but all in all, a good start.
I'll keep reading

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter One
Definitely interested here. It takes a lot to creep me out; as long as it's well written I honestly don't care - and I know I don't have anything to worry about on that score.

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter One
great so far

Date: 10/23/2006 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter One
Horrible, evil Angel and a shy William...could it get any better? I'm hooked, can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, please